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Reviewed By: Lord_Fluffy_Rulez [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like YYH_RRK_INY's idea. that would be really cool, and very unpredictable. and it would be a cool way for Gwen to find out about Youko. Anyway, no ideas are coming from me right now but this is a really cool story please update soon!!!!!! you are doing an awesome job.
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Reviewed By: YYH_RRK_INY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What kind of new power? Let's see...does it need to concern the bracelet?...ummm...Oh, i know! some weird power that goes like this(the person's name is gonna be NAME, NAME is a girl): if NAME touches something or someone then NAME can see its past. for example: if NAME touched a person for long enough, or looked them in the eye long enough, NAME would start getting visions in her head of that persons past. NAME probably wouldn't know what she was seeing, but it's still cool. this would be a very interesting way for Gwen to find out about Youko...
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Reviewed By: Azar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, this is beginning to become a very good story, i can't wait to see what's going to happen next!!! please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: DivineSpirit00 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 07:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, this story is getting really good!!! i'm know you're right when you say there are a lot of girls that wish they were in Gwen's position... Please update soon!!!
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Title: Me again!! ^_^
Reviewed By: Shio On: December 03, 2004 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Huge smile and starts cracking up* Hiei threw a vase at her. *laughs then sees the part in Koenma's office* Wow. Lots O' Info. Very informational for all you kids out there. *Nods head* Any who. Yay! Kurama-kun with out a shirt! *Evil grin and starts picturing it* Man I wish I were Gwen. Kurama is sooooo cute. *sigh* Okay Loving it still Like always *chibi girl giving the thumbs up* A couple of typos but not very noticable. Good job with Hiei and the vase. Loved it. I think it's just getting better and will only get better. *smiles* Oh and a little japanese: mai tattoi ru-bishie bushi... ¬_¬ *giggles* It rulz!! It means read haird knight. It was in a fanf fic with Kurama that has been deleted. I'm not sure if that is the accurate translation but I know it's along those lines and a saying for Hiei: Baka ningen. *sighs* Stupid Humans... fits him. Love the stories and Keep writing. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shio On: November 29, 2004 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never read a fic that was in script style that turned out so well. I like the Man who is watching her. It's a good twist and makes me get more interested in Gwen's abilities and the braclet. I can't wait for the next chapter. Yay!! (~^.^)~ ~(^.^~) ~(^.^)~ This jig was for you!
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