Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 16:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Basic idea isn't to bad, but the text could use some work. Dialog is wooden, descriptions are almost non existent, and actions are rushed. No real emotions or thoughts about the characters either. Also kind of wonder why you mark it complete, when it's obviously not. I suppose it doesn't matter to much since this is 2+ years old.
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