| "Defy Your Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Anaki Of The Blood Wolves [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 01:13 CDT
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ooohh! you have gotta update this fic! i love it!
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Reviewed By: blackshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: blackshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IN THE NAME OF GOD GET YOU ASS BACK TO THE COMPUTER AND WRITE SOME MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 18:28 CDT
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I'm a happy reviewer! ^-^ See, look at how happy I am! It doesn't matter how long you take to update, as long as you don't forget to. (But hopefully you'll update as soon as possible.) Great job on the story so far! ^-^
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 16:00 CST
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oi! you must update!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 22:43 CST
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Ah! A x-over with canon pairings, that's one of the first time's I've seen that. You need to slow down a little, give your character's a breather. Your story's kind've hard to keep track of, but I want to know what happens! Arg... it was an interesting chapter, and Yuuske's got his cockiness.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 22:20 CST
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Hm, I'm thinking up a few theorys now, but I'd like to point a few things out... one's a matter of personal view, but I'll say it just the same. When they were reffering to the 'eating' of humans, I know that it was said he smelled the flesh of a human or whatever on the messenger, but I somehow think Raizen is different, along with Mukuro and Yomi. I think they don't eat the flesh of humans, but instead eat the life energy and such... Other than that your story seems somewhat rushed, you aren't taking the time to develop the characters... Though I did enjoy the fight scene with Raizen! Speed was nearly their downfall. Another thing I'd like to say is Inuyasha has basically been brutally beaten up each and every time he fights, he gets a hand through his stomach practically every 10 episodes or so, so I'm thinkin' that a bite in the shoulder wouldn't affect him that much...I just thought I'd comment on these things, after-all, you have some very interesting ideas! And I want to see if my suscipcions are correct... what's the pairing anyways?
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