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Reviewed By: breesasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 00:16 CDT
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Are you going to complete this story? I am interested to see what's going to happen between Kikyo & Sess
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Reviewed By: SpookyKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 05:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, OMG, OMG I fished reading all you chapters for this story. and I must say that they are the best. I couldn't stop reading. I started to get tired because it is so later then I read a part of a chapter and couldn't stop. Then by the time I read the last sentence on the last page I became very sad. I don't want to have to wait for the next chapter, but I guess that I have no choice. I too am writing a Fic. and would like it if you would please Read & Review. PLZ
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Reviewed By: smartjock [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 09:42 CST
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I'm rather mad with Adult Swim also. At least they have FLCL right now, otherwise i would be crazy already. Good writing. What's going to happen? Will the Brother's end up switching ladies?
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 22:09 CST
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Ah, well, i hope you get more writting done! ^_^ The story has kept me coming back this far... I know how hard it is to write something really juicy and exciting; no, not like an overdose of fluff, but more of just... uhh, well i can\'t really explain it, just something that\'ll keep readers coming. Best luck!
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 20:43 CST
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*siiggghh*.... You are correct. InuYasha is only on 1 day a week now. More specifically, Tuesday at 12:30a.m. Well, 12:30 for me at least. I'm not sure where you live... Anybob: Please update!!! I love your story and I really wanna know what happends next!!!
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Reviewed By: J-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the latest chapter. It's the first one since I added you to a favorites list! It keeps pace and is still interesting. I liked marrage, I think it was my favorite part so far.
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Title: NO TITLE!!!
Reviewed By: J-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Oh Oh! I remember this one! Sorry, it's late and I'm... So, I liked this chapter. You didn't put anything about Miroku and Sango in this one though. Why did you have a pairing of every major character? Oh well, that's not important. Anyway, this chapter was a good one and I think it's kind of what we were waiting for. Um, yeah, this is the worst review ever isn't it? Ok, well I'm going to have some tea. Bye! J-Love
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 18:32 CST
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hello there! great fic, i love it! ur on my fav's list, and i hope u continue on! heh, PS: (make the chapters a bit longer)
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Reviewed By: J-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I liked this one. Maybe it's just because it isn't chemistry, but it was fun to read. You jumped around from character to character a lot, and that kept it interesting. Oh... found a few grammar errors, but a 9 is not low. Maybe I'll have to start writing fan fic so you can tell me how bad my spelling is. Ok, well I liked it so I hope it makes you happy. :p J-Love
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Reviewed By: J-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I couldn't review until I made an account! I blame you :p. Well, anyhow, sorry I didn't read it earlier, but I DID get to it, and that's what counts, right? Well, I like most of it, (sorry, I'm going to be critical) I just feel as if more should be going on. Hmmm, you set yourself up for a really good next chapter, so I did rate it high. Well, let me read the next chapter. Oh, reminds me of something! I'm going to send you an e-mail! Ok, get the next one done,but don't fall behind in class! J-Love
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Reviewed By: smartjock [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 23:17 CDT
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I want to know what's going to happen on the date. But this chapter didn't have rin... :-( Its ok for the delay, you do have homework to do and guys to meet...
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Reviewed By: smartjock [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 13:21 CDT
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Inuyashsa on a date... intriging.. Rin has Sessy back, yay!! Could Sessy be getting softer like his brother? hehehe
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Reviewed By: smartjock [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 13:19 CDT
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Inuyashsa on a date... intriging.. Rin has Sessy back, yay!! Could Sessy be getting softer like his brother? hehehe
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: July 11, 2005 23:35 CDT
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hm...when I first read this story, I was scared it would be Inu-Kik and Sess-Kag, which almost never seems realistic because everyone is OOC. You pulled it off without that, proving that I, a savage Kag-Inu fan, can enjoy a dash of Sess-Kag. Even better, you've turned this into Sess-Kik and Inu-Kag. I actually like the Sess-Kik pairing. So this is great, cool story. WARNING, SHAMLESS ADVERTISING PUB FOR MM.ORG MEMBERS! http://www.fanfiction.net/~drakeclawfang Check out my stories at FF.net!
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Title: Dum de Dum, you are sooo impatient.
Reviewed By: J-Love On: May 18, 2005 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I think there was one spelling or grammer error. Something like that, well I always mark you down for spelling because I'm an english nazi. Anyway, I like the way you are going with this, the more I think about kikyo with seshomoru the more I think the would go together. They really have similar personalities. Ok, so this is what I'm wondering, and you probably won't tell me because it's yet to be written, but are you making kikyo human now? It seems like it would be impracticle, because she's just made of clay and stuff, but at the same time, I've seen weirder in Inuyasha. If so, this would mean that she had a life again, and she wasn't bound to this world for only revenge. I think it would fill a plot hole (well not a hole, but potential one) if you did this. I thought there was something else, but I guess not. Have fun over the summer, and remember I'll be here taking chem 116, so you'd better have more fun that I am.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 03:59 CDT
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Kinda upset it turned out not to be a Sesh-Kag story..but i'll forgive ya and keep on reading!
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Reviewed By: Baby_red On: April 25, 2005 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate it!It was suppose to be a Sess/Kag pairing not a Inu/Kag or a Sess/Kikyo!!!Other than the pairings it's fine.Pls. change it to a Sess/Kag pairing or else...
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Reviewed By: J-Love On: April 24, 2005 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry for not rating spelling and Grammar correctly. You win, I lose, don't hurt me. Also, I'm sorry you have to see me everyday, but... but... Well, the semester is over now, you don't have to see me again if you don't want to. Oh wait! I still have to study! Hey, you want to study before the exam??? I mean, look at this review, straight 10, and I'm a hard reviewer. Well anyway, I liked the latest chapter, it didn't feel like a filler to me, I thought it really helped to know the feelings of the characters, and there's stuff happening with Sango and Miroku, so yeah, it was good. Well, I'll see you sooner or later down the road. Bye Bye.
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Title: story
Reviewed By: Yana5 On: April 19, 2005 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that was soo good
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Title: hehehehehehhe....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi again sry) On: April 16, 2005 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok well the first thing i was taught be my friends is the vowels there kinda like the spanish vowels "A" is a short 'A', "E" is a long 'A', "I" is an 'E', "O" is a 'O', and "U" is an 'OOOOO' well if's easier to say and learn with the Ka. Ke. Ki. Ko. Ku., Sa. Se. Si. So. Su., well that's how i do it well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: J Love On: April 11, 2005 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I'm not used to reading fanfiction, but I really liked this. I think you do a good job at keeping the characters true to the anime, while changing the situations. I am very impressed. I hope you e-mail me when you do update. (by the way, this is that loser in your calculus class. You know, Python). I'm serious though, I really liked it as much as I like the series. Oh, but grammer wise, you can tell it's written at 5 am :p. Take care, and do your calc. homework, you can't run off to Fuedal Japan everytime we get a quiz you know.
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Reviewed By: kagomeme2000(notsignedin) On: April 08, 2005 22:47 CDT
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oh i do like your work but dont freakin do that 2 sessy hes toooooooo fine!!!!!!!!!! I love the story dont make this an inu/kag plz love your work but i ccan makeyour life a living hekll
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Reviewed By: kagomeme2000(notsignedin) On: April 08, 2005 22:44 CDT
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its freakin sick with wat your doing with sessy and kikyou sick sick i hope you change your story or ill send you 2 hell
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (man am i ever signed in?) On: April 06, 2005 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok well She wrote it in Haragina (sp?) the jap. lettering for short words and it sounds like ' oo ka ka go oo' yea it's really funny cuz. there in jap. class and i'm not but i do kno how to say 'the mountin is mine' "yama wa watashi no desu" and do you kno how to pronounce the vowels b/c my friends yell at me if i dont so i'm getting better!! ^__^ well keep up the good work and update again soon ...... and no it's too confuzing to try adding him in b/c his mind is like a bad version of ADD!!!! ^__^
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasloveLorn (sry nsi) On: April 05, 2005 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate pink b/c it's a bit too cheery! that and it's so over worn now!!! well anywho you knowticed that about Kik and Kag too? i thought it was just me! when i tryed drawing them they were nothing alike well anywho keep up the good work oh.. and that MOO COW COW GO MOO is just a stupid thing me and my friends say they even found out how to say it in jap. as well as the translation for DONSHUUNOUO-HITO!! big fish person!!! ^__^ well update again soon please?
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Title: Fauna
Reviewed By: smartjock [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fauna you are awesome, go butts...
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Title: MREOW!!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 02, 2005 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOO COW COW GO MOO!!! ewwwww.... tickled pink! i hate that color! it's too over used like the word happy (i agree with that!!) ^__^ well anywho i loved it keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: SIT! On: April 02, 2005 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! SOON SOON SOON SOON! Please!?!(puppy dog face)?My life is on the line here!
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Reviewed By: inufreak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 18:07 CST
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it is really good and i swear that i will personally murder you if you make this an inu/kik fic! *sighs and walks off just to comeing running up again with a wonderful idea* OMG!OMG!OMG! YOU SHOULD LIKE TOTALLY MAKE THIS A SESS/KIK AND INU/KAG FIC! OMGOMGOMG THAT WOULD BE LIKE SOOOOOOOOO COOL!!!* starts a little dance*
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I like, I like....although I can honestly say that I'm not a big Kikyo fan. *Murders Kikyo (again) with rusty sword* Sorry, I have massively mixed feelings about that woman...but anyway...love the story! Keep up the good work. I'm waiting on pins and needles for the next chapters.
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