| "Sachi" Reviews/Comments [ 535 ] |
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Reviewed By: nekotaishou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2010 04:08 PDT
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What a cliffhanger that was! You always seem to do too good of a job with it haha! Once again I am blown away by your writing style. This chapter really felt like a turning point to a bigger plot. Your transition from such a long break is pretty accurate too. GRRR...Update quickly! We all love your stories, I support you all the way
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2010 04:03 PDT
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That was awsome.... I was on the edge of my seat.. crazy... I just loved it.... inuyasha sure knows how to dodge people.. I hope we get to see more sesshy in this fic.. oh and a little sugestion can sesshy's love interest be kagura... I just love them together.... and I wonder if kagome connected to sango .. well that's all from me... no no no.. wat would a crazy add to this story is if kagura becomes a guest at sachi and you know roku flirts with her but gets nowhere and seshomaru shows up and get on kagura's bad side, while she bonds with kagome...... hehehe....
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Reviewed By: babypeenats On: October 16, 2010 01:39 PDT
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Wow I cant believe how long its been since you updated! LOVE ITTT! :3
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: October 12, 2010 21:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perpetual fan here. I have become an addict to this story in particular. If you ever decide not to finish this story, then I am going to need psychological help to get over it. The prior chapter was written with a different twist in the chronological order. By the end of the chapter, all confusion had left me. I so enjoy the constant kick to the reader's gut in your writings. The relationship between Kagome and InuYasha gives me the feelng that I am riding a fantastic roller coaster in a good kind of way. Cannot wait to hear how Shippo explains all. L-o-v-e-d it!!!! Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2010 16:20 PDT
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Congrats on getting this going again with a really great chapter. It sometimes happens that after a gap this long the author loses their grip on the story and the new chapters just aren't as good but this flows really well from what you've already done and builds all sorts of tension.
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2010 08:26 PDT
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I loved it. spent three hours reading this but loved it. And don't worry. We all get depressed at times. After all, thats what makes us human right?
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Title: Gripping!
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2010 19:23 PDT
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Really good, exciting story! I like the twisted trap Naraku's laid at Inuyasha's doorstep. Really intricate mystery that keeps the reader's interest with the terrific characterizations and relationships.
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2010 17:31 PDT
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While I know this seems wildly inappropriate I just want to say that if you ever feel really depressed please call or email someone. I have struggled with depression for years though I finally managed to pretty much git rid of it my oldest sister never did and she is no longer here because of it. Sometimes it's easier to talk to a complete stranger, if you ever need to talk pleas email me. I check it every day: antyem13 at yahoo. Nice chapter by the way, I think I just got really worried when I read your A.N. I hope you are okay, Emily.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2010 14:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fantastic chapter. InuYasha is such a Baka at times....
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 17:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow. You've already received a ton of new reviews for this update, and here's another one! Love what you did with...everything! The Hidaka scene was well done, and I especially loved that tantalizing moment in the kitchen. Poor Kagome probably thinks Inuyasha merely accidentally whispered Kikyou's name in the traditional OOPS way, but it seems to me he said it on purpose trying to pour some ice water over himself. Too bad he didn't realize until after the fact how she would take it. Shippou better not get in any trouble for telling her more because Inuyasha is the one who opened that particular can of worms. I love the way you did the cliffy with that last line. If memory serves, they are and have been continually wondering whether or not they can trust Kagome, so I'm sure it will be revealed that Inuyasha had to kill Kikyou, rather than like he got carried away with himself and accidentally killed her, which I almost feel you might be implying as a way to lead us astray with our ponderings, or maybe that's just me. I'm wondering what it was about their first time together, and Inuyasha later noticing the blood on his hand. That was weird. BUT I'm sure it'll all make sense soon enough. And then yes, there is still the mystery of Kagome's own past, and who she was and just what, exactly, she really knows, but more important than all of that...I still want to know who tried to kill her! I haven't forgotten how they first found her! Oh this is a basket full of mysteries, indeed. I want to say hurry up and update, but I understand how real-life can get in the way, plus you can't rush perfection, so...hurry up and update (within as reasonable a time frame as possible all things considered!)
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 15:20 PDT
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Very interesting indeed. I'm excited that the story is progressing. Of course the citrus was a fabulous part too ;) Good luck with your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: SANicholas22-not sgined in On: October 07, 2010 13:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
INITAL THOUGHTS: OMFG. Wayyy to come back and leave us with a ciffy like that. Omgosh. That was amazing. I think a second read of it is almost a must. I wish that you had the next chapter already lined up though cause you just gave us just enough insight into what the big secret is, but without really giving us real information. I can't wait to here the history for this one. Now that i've got that out of my system: Sachi is one of my most favored reads and I'm glad that you're back. I can't wait for you're next chapter. This story is soo deep and the emotions and history behind everything feels so real when you're reading it. Much love!
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Reviewed By: JRKOD On: October 07, 2010 12:08 PDT
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Oh that ending!!!! Please update soon! Ive been waiting so long for you to continue, and that the last chapter, I couldnt stop!
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Title: Oh. My. God.
Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 09:10 PDT
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I have to vent my frustration first: CAN THEY JUST DO IT ALREADY? Oh my God, woman, you are such a tease! Ahem. That said, I *lived* this chapter. Great character development, excellent use of the Hidaka sub plot, and real forward movement. Tremendous writing -- and hot as usual. Great work!
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Reviewed By: Nikiz bad habit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 08:34 PDT
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WOW!!! I'm speechless! Well not really, but it was just that amazing. At the edge of my seat the whole time. Things are moving along now, getting to all the juicy details of the past. The little hints of Kagome's memory that keep popping up and now Kikyou brought to light. I can't wait to learn more. I hope that Sesshomaru has some insight soon, although I'm a little nervous what it could be and how it will effect everyone. And Shippo, he does seem like the bearer of bad news quite offten. I wonder if this info will get him in trouble? I'm glad that the problem with Mr. Hidaka has been taken care of. Poor Kagome. Poor Mrs. Hidaka! He was such a sleez. I hope Mrs. H was the one with all the money- and she gets rid of him quickly! At least this pervert problem has helped with the Miko Powers issue a little bit. And Kagome knows now that Inuyasha doesn't hate her. The sexual tension between the two is really coming to a head I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Happy writing!
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