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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 21, 2008 18:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Messed . . it . . . up? I can not believe that I get to read something this good, for free. This story is better than the last two books that I paid good money for. I really, really HOPE that you do not give up on it as you go down the long stretch of plot development and hit moments of writer's block. There is a tremendous intensity to your stories, that I am sure, makes you work harder than most authors in trying to keep that feeling constant. I am hoping that you can avoid a rewrite and that the chapter will flow with your overall idea. Believe me, we enjoy every single bit, mistakes and all. Also, I appreciate that you let us non-members give our ten cents worth of thoughts. I am comfortable in being a faceless voice. Thank you ever so much for a great chapter! Cynbad146
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: GoddessInuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, as usual. I loved the lime, and the timely interruption played with my emotions like crazy! I was a little sad that I didn't get to see Inuyasha pounding the shit out of that perverted jerk, and I'm hoping I see it soon! And Him? Who is Him? Sesshoumaru? I'm going to guess Sesshoumaru. This fic is SO GOOD, I love how you write Inuyasha - he's perfect with your words. Please take your time and make the next chapter just as amazing!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 16:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter and nice twist with Kagome. I can't wait to find out what her true origins are. Unfortunatekly, it seems that Inuyasha isn't too pleased with this news. And I can't wait to see what happens next on that part. As for the sexual harrassing butthole guest, I truly hope that there is an extremely painful way of dealing with him that won't damage the Sachi. I really hate guys like him.
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Reviewed By: taekwondo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 12:08 PDT
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It's a great story! Please update it soon!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 09:11 PDT
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so glad to see this and it was very good so no worries! ugh stupid pervy guest and stupid inuyasha...
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 08:59 PDT
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Evil, so evil... finally getting around to them admitting their feelings for each other, and then you go and ruin it. Meanie. So next chapter, enter Fluffy! Can't wait! Yash/Fluffy interaction is always so fun!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 06:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that puts my friend and my last experience at a nightclub together seem small in comparison... great chapter...
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Reviewed By: msarah On: July 21, 2008 04:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this chapter, and I can't wait for the next one. I have been reading it from the start and I NEED to know what is going to happen. I love this story!
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Title: Damn Youkai
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 00:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one more exciting chapter under your belt. I think we did move forward a little with this chapter to. It just makes me hungrier to find out the mystery behind everything. What happen to Kagome before she was shot, does she have a connection to Kikyo. What happened really between Kikyo and Inuyasha. See, you've got me hook line and sinker, and I'm sure I'm not the only one you have your fan-hooks into either. So enjoy your family, and stop mentally beating up your story. Oh and by the way I hope Mister sexual harassment patron gets his ass handed to him soon.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 23:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Almost, almost... then the stupid youkai had to come along and just make everything fubar! Aside from that whats his name causing trouble. Aww man *shakes head* don't seem like they haint never gonna get a break. Excellent chap tho. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: dragonflyhuntress1 On: July 20, 2008 23:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! Finally a new chapter, i'm so glad you updated. I think this was a very good chapter, because we're finally getting to who Kagome is! Don't feel bad or discouraged 'cause there are a lot of people (including me) who enjoy your writing.Please don't stop updating (even if it takes long). Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 22:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Right, so review time for the new one :) I must say, I was ecstatic to see that you'd updated since I wasn't expecting it at all! This chapter was phenomenal. You could feel the sense of ease that'd come over them in their interactions on the porch and that hot scene in the woods? Whew! I'm still fanning myself! I know Inuyasha is going to be a tool and muck it all up now that he knows she has miko powers, I just hope it doesn't take him too long to realize he has a good thing and should learn to appreciate it while it's there. I thought the use of the sexual harassment to create a comedic misunderstanding was pretty ingenious. ;) I really can't wait for the next one. Happy writing!
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Title: Thank you :)
Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 22:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I may have pestered you with a few emails begging for updates over the past year...just wanted to say thank you for listening instead of telling me to bugger off hahaha I read this chapter a while ago, then re-read it a couple more times... Am just getting around to reviewing it now. I thought it was fantastic. I really liked how you used Inuyasha's vulnerability on the night of the new moon to bridge the gap between them. I liked his human side the way you portrayed it here, so I hope you bring it back again in the future. This was definitely worth the wait. Thank you so much :)
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 22:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! It's like a drug, I think a new chapter will hold me over for a while. But as soon as I'm done reading it, all I can think about is how much I want another chapter. I have so many questions going through my mind, mostly about their past. Other stories I read are good, but no other story (on this site) has made me sit & contemplate possible outcomes. I can't wait for the next chapter. ***you should quit school & abandon all responsibilities & do nothing but this story!!! HA!HA! just kidding of course!
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 21:14 PDT
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I am so happy you updated. I love your stories, and I can't wait to read more!
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