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Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: April 07, 2008 22:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know the best thing about this chapter? I kept expecting it to end on a sort of cliffhanger... AND IT DIDN'T!!! They actually made progress!!! Thanks for the update; no matter how long you take, as long as it's done before I die, I'll look forward to your writing! Thanks again.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 19:57 PDT
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I'm thrilled and delighted that you are still alive. No worries about time and chapters - Yes, I would very much like to see you finish the story, but there is no time frame that it necessarily needs to be done in. You post, I'll read - simple. I love how Sachi is working against Inuyasha. Almost like it has a mind or will of its own.
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Reviewed By: IdrilEledil [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 19:36 PDT
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Fantastic! You have no idea how much this is weirding me out right now. I re-read this story today for the first time since you last updated, and I thought to myself "Huh, it's probably going to be a while until she updates again". I go out for 3 hours, come back, and I get the email that makes my day! Why on the same day out of the whole year you haven't updated today? Well thanks anyway!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 07, 2008 18:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am doing the Snoopy happy dance!!!! I feel like it is MY birthday! Thank you J R Maxwell and Happy belated birthday! We missed you QW. The chapter was fantastic. I do not know how you can keep turning out such great chapters. The InuYasha/Kagome action keeps me holding my breath. Miroku and Shippou's comic relief is hilarious. You really have Miroku's personality down perfect. Now, we have Rin and Souta with a bad boy . . . this story has me on the edge of my seat . . . literally. I will not make another year. Have mercy please. Loved it! Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 30, 2008 08:22 PDT
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Sorry for the duplication, I thought the first time did not take. I should have looked first. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: March 30, 2008 08:19 PDT
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Just plain wishing you might work on this story once more. It is on my "best of" list, and I so miss your updates. Please come back. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: March 30, 2008 08:18 PDT
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Just plain wishing you might work on this story once more. It is on my "best of" list, and I so miss your updates. Please come back. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 20:30 PDT
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pleeease update! please!!!
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 18:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT'S NOT WORKING RIGHT! NEVER MIND! JUST UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 18:10 PDT
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Title: UPDATE OR THE ROSE GETS IT!
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 18:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED IN SO LONG???!!??WHY????? THIS IS SOOOOO MEAN TO ALL THESE GOOD PEOPLE WHO HAVE BEEN WAITING SOOOOO LONG FOR AN UPDATE!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!HERE'S A ROSE TO STRENGTHEN MY MEANING. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .* . . . . . . . . . . .*. . . . . . . ** * . . . . .. . . . . .*** . . * . . ***** . . . . . . . . . . .** . . **. . . . .* . . . . . . . . . . ***.*. . *. . . . .* . . . . . . . . . .****. . . .** . . . ****** . . . . . . . . . ***** . . . .**.*. . . . . ** . . . . . . . . .*****. . . . . **. . . . . . *.** . . . . . . . .*****. . . . . .*. . . . . . * . . . . . . . .******. . . . .*. . . . . * . . . . . . . .******* . . .*. . . . .* . . . . . . . . .*********. . . . . * . . . . . . . . . .******* . *** *******. . . . . . . . .** .*******. . . . . . . . * . ******. . . . . . . . * * . .***. . *. . . . . . .** . . . . . . .*. . . . . * . . . . .****.*. . . .* . . . *******. .*. .* . . .*******. . . *. . . .*****. . . . * . . .**. . . . . .* . . .*. . . . . . **.* . . . . . . . . . ** . . . . . . . . .* . . . . . . . . .* . . . . . . . . .* . . . . . . . . * . . . . . . . . * . . . . . . . . * . . . . . . . . * . . . . . . . . * As long as you don't update, i'll take away 1 line on this rose until it's nothing!!! so... UPDATE OR THE ROSE GETS IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nadene On: March 17, 2008 16:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you coming back? I keep searching the story up with hopes of a new chapter. I love your writing. Its so good.
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Title: Buckwheat....
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 03:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reading this chapter...the part where Kags is "sick" and she's laying on her buckwheat pillow got me thinking of when I went to Japan and how much those pillows fucking killed my neck. UGHHHH they LOOK nice and then once your neck/head is laying on them its like..rocks... Not only did they have buckwheat they also had like these pillows with PEAS in them...or something akin to peas cause they were HUGE and bulky and hurtfull... I really don't know why I'm talking about traditional japanese style pillows but anyways I love your story. Its really nice and I love how you don't squish everything together so quickly. Its progressing, not slowly but at a nice pace, with its romance. Its also suspenseful and makes the reader SUPER curious. I can't wait until your next chapter. .....I'll be waiting... *creepy stare*
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Reviewed By: celestial lux lucis On: February 19, 2008 00:08 PST
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Your hard work on this really shows. Whatever perfectionist qualities kept you rewriting certainly paid off. You've managed to write the first fanfic chapter I've ever felt the need to comment on. You have stable, solid characterizations going in this fic, and keeping them constant while putting them in such an intense situation seems to be impossible for almost every other fic writer out there, but you pull it off flawlessly. You've also managed to make nearly every description in the "first kiss" scene feeling original and fresh. I had thought that was impossible in an Inu/Kag fic, but you have proven my conclusions wrong. Thanks! And I hope you have as much fun writing this as I do reading it!
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Reviewed By: heymary [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 00:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!!! But NOOO!!! Why haven't you updated in so long?? Are ever planning on finishing this? It's such a great story...
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