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Reviewed By: chun-inu On: February 05, 2007 19:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Killer chapter. I can't wait till Inu admits his feelings so they can be together!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: February 05, 2007 19:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. That's why I'm such a big fan of yours...you can make such a simple thing like a kiss so...HOTT! And he didn't 'touch her properly' either. *lol* I hope we don't have to wait to long for the next chapter. Glad your back in action as far as writing.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 18:37 PST
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Oh,that was so very sweet. Well worth the wait. I eagerly wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 18:10 PST
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oh wow! That was awesome!!! Can't WAIT to see how the next chapter turns out! Nice work on shippos part! I'm assuming the thing where inu heard him in his head was shippos new trick? plz update soon! ~*Ookami Hime Suriya*~
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Title: FINALLY!!!
Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 16:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me start off by saying that I AM SO FREAKING ESTACTIC THAT YOU FINALLY UPDATED ONE OF MY TWO FAVOURITE STORIES!!!!! And now that that is out of my system, the kiss was really good. That cliffhanger you left us with though was just plain cruel, as we HAVE been waiting forever for you to update. I hope that school and everything continues to go well for you so you can add new chapters, as your fanfics are one of my very few reprieves from school and the overbearing stress of life on a whole. I'm really glad that you eventually got up this chapter and hope that your updates will be more frequent now. As I always say, you are an incredible writer, as your words are gripping, passionate and amazingly realistic. I dabble in writing myself, but I'm not even a fraction as good as you. I'm serious, I will sit and review your writing style and gape in awe at how fluently and eloquently you write. I pray that you will continue to get inspired and that you shall never give up on these stories. God bless you and update "Waiting On A Wish" and "Sachi" as soon as you get the chance. Teddy Bear
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Title: Welcome back
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 16:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite the re-entrance you've made - well worth the wait! Now I have to find a pile of snow to cool off it! Thank you sooo much for the update! And just like a junkie, I'll have a hard time waiting fo the next chapter. But I do know I will be handsomely rewarded!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 15:18 PST
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Ahh it was right! it was soo right! Shippo (and you of course) deserve a round of applause! *clapping* (yes I realize and admit the big dork factor of comment applausing.) That whole "it was a mistake" thing..boo but now that Kagome knows Inuyasha wants to kiss her, will her response be anger, timidness, flirt and seduce, etc.? aahh can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 15:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so excited when I got the e-mail saying there was a new chapter!!! It was worth the wait, I loved the chapter. I can't wait for the next, hopefully it's not quite so long of a wait. Keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: Howlingblue07 On: February 05, 2007 13:10 PST
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Yet another great chapter! [although you left me hanging, darn you :-( ] Just update more often next time, or I'm gonna go insane, lol....
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 13:04 PST
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 12:34 PST
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All I can say is FINALLY hahaha I've read this entire story three times over hoping for another update. That being said, it was WELL worth the wait. This chapters was just great. You have the characterization so well down it's to the point where I can actually picture the characters speaking your words. I guess that's the whole point but you do it well. And finally, a kiss! I was really hoping he'd give in and kiss her again before he left but he's a stubborn bugger eh? Anyhoo....thank you for this amazing chapter and I really sincerely hope it won't be another three long and agonizing months before you update again :) I just don't think I can wait that long!
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Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 12:04 PST
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OOoo!! Qwill!! What delight to get notification for this chappie, and OCD or not, it was fabulous. Was moving closer and closer to the screen thinking 'he's going to give in?? he's going to go... there?' Very potent first kiss, I must say. Now, do we need to buy a casket for Shippou? I just KNOW he's going to be kitsune flambe`, once Inu's head clears.
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 11:50 PST
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Well I think thta my parents thought that I broke my leg or something, because it was one damn loud scream that I gave when I received the notification of the update. I'm so happy that you managed to finally finish this chapter! I really like how you described the kiss scene, it was very good, you could've cut the tension there with a knife. It actually astouns my the way your characters interact. They look so real. I tend to forget that it's a fanfic I'm reading. Very well done! And I hope that the next update won't take you so long)) Cheers!
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 13:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hooray! I found this story again! So so loved it when I first read it, and now I shall Fav it so I don't forget it again. Your writting style is wonderful, you write the characters IN character which is rather astounding considering this is an AU . I too miss updates, but will stick by this in hopes you update it. Again, Thank You for this original and enjoyable fic!
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: sashangelwings On: January 16, 2007 17:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love reading this story. It is truly one of my favorites and i stand on pins and kneedles waiting for you to finish this story. It makes me sad when you don't update in a while but i understand being a writer myself how life and the creative processes can slow things down quite a bit. Anyway i hope to read the next chapter. your fan sashangelwings
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