| "Sachi" Reviews/Comments [ 535 ] |
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Reviewed By: Different Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 18:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are doing great! I just enjoyed everything in this chapter and each time there is more suspense on what will occur next. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: June 14, 2006 18:32 PDT
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sweaty-hot-half-dressed hanyous are fun to look at!!
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Reviewed By: berlynn On: June 14, 2006 17:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful as always. Please dont make us wait so long for the next chapter. :( it makes me sad
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness (not signed in) On: June 06, 2006 23:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That took longer than expected, but really I didn't want the story to end. I love your writing, you're able to turn phrases with such ease. I also love how you portray Inuyasha. His grumpy side is dominate but he's still in character. You give my insomnia purpose.
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Reviewed By: Different Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 11:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story! I have not been able to find such a wonderful story in awhile. Please update soon. I gotta know what is gonna happen next. Again, please update soon. I will go crazy...not really but you could never really know about these things can you. Now I am just blabbering. So,um...update soon.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 18:13 PDT
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I'm not done reading yet but I had to comment on the nabemono. I'm putting it in this one-shot I'm writing and it's just weird how stews show up in almost every Inuyasha fanfiction. Oh well I'm going back to reading now.
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 12:55 PDT
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I LOVE this story! I'm so glad that I finally gave in and read it, though now I'm going to have ANOTHER story to wait for new chapters for, lol...and this one will be especially hard, because I'm so curious to know what happened to Kagome, what her past is, what will happen between she and Inuyasha, what is going on with Sango, what Miroku, Kaede, Shippo and Inuyasha's history is...could you have possibly come up with more ways to drive your readers crazy with curiosity? Oh well, hopefully you'll take pity on us sooner or later! But until then, I must say that I really enjoyed the especially evil parts of that last chapter. GLUE! Such cruelty...I loved it! ^_~ I can't wait to see what other situations you can come up with. Please post again as soon as you can!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 17:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Sorry I haven't reviewed in a bit. Most of the time it just wont go through, so I thought Id try again to put one in. Very interesting chapter. Somehow I don't think Inu was all THAT mad now, lol. Wonder what hes gonna do to the 'very inventive' Shippo. Cant wait to see what all happens next. Update when you can, soon hopefully.
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Reviewed By: ochamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 17:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahahaha. I found the situation that Kagome and Inu Yasha got themselves into very humorous. >w< I can't wait to read the next chapter, so please update whenever you get the chance and whatnot. This story seems very original so far - like nothing I've read yet. (And believe me, I've read quite a lot of fanfiction. >.>;;) I also really like your writing style. It's refreshing to see someone with a large vocabulary and good style after shifting through the first page of chatspeak fiction. In any case... I've rambled far too long...^^; I can't wait to read the next chapter, and keep writing!
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Title: Next Chapter
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 22:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,I am soooo waiting for a new chapter. Please don't tell me you've given up on this story, it's just way tooo intresting to let go. Faithfully waiting
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Title: P>S
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 19:11 PDT
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when i mean sugar i mean actual candy sugar not drugs...those are icky..well only to clarify....um..update soon hehehehehe super kool work by the way!!!!!!
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Title: QUILL PLZ HURRY!!!
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 19:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im so sad....(the puddle of tears has now formed into a lake...particullary a salty one) u havnt updated in a very long time...too long ..both sachi and waiting on a wish are super dee duper...AWSOME!!!! AWSOME!!!!!! and im so sad that there hasnt been a new update. are u going to update soon? pleaze do.. i need to read ur stories like ...A DRUG....... hehehe ..u no sugar? well once u try that stuff well u can never say no to candy again..(i hope i dont turn diabetic, when im 60 and pruny, while my butt is hanging down the floor} but neways thats not the point... ur stories are like sugar and i need MORE!! hope im not scraing u , but u gots talent and ur good at writing,,,its so funny and cute . i especially am super interested in SACHI , cant wait for what happens next. so pleasse Quill,plz update soon. because(future self:::: lying in the corner of the street, clothes all torn, long beard and over hairy legs, and hair that has more leaves and dirt than a garden,,,while holding up a sign(a brown, torn up one) saying will work for Quill's stories, please give sugar also.) heheh plz update soon im doing over here. sincerely babydragon213 that needs sugar right now!!!
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Reviewed By: SayannaTR On: May 08, 2006 23:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
was ecstatic to find your story!!!! ^_^...I don't suppose Shippou would mind sharing that recipe....lol Could come in handy ^_^
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Title: Teddy bear
Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 19:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an incredible story, and I am not exaggarating when I say that you are my all time favourite author of fanfiction. I love your creativity and the way that you do not detract too much from the characters' personalities. You captivated me from the first chapter, and might I say, that not many stories are able to do that. The only "problem" I have with you is that you do not update as regularly as I would hope you would, so I am begging you to please do that for your adoring fans, and keep up the amazing work.
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Title: student
Reviewed By: Lenkia On: April 08, 2006 12:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you story, can't wait to see what happens and one question in this story are sango and kagome related, it seems to me that they are later
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