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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 21:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! :D Great chapter! I think everything is proceding wonderfully and at just the right pace! And I love the whole mysterious feeling to everything you got going for you, it makes everything very suspenseful! :D Well, please just update again whenever you can...until then, take care! ^_^
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Title: flippin, awsum
Reviewed By: fluffy_hugger On: September 11, 2005 21:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so a...... i feel kinda dumb right now. i a... just figured out why your name is what it is. Quil, like a quil-pen, cuz your a wrighter. yah..., feelin kinda stupid. i realy am a moderately inteligent person but that one was like right over my head. for 4 chapers and your other story thats the sad part. don't feel like only dumb people read your righting because i am sure that the others surpass me. God i'm stupid on a brighter note, great chapter. i love this it and can't wait for the next one to hopefully come out soon. so yah, great job and keep it up. doesn't homework suck. especialy, when you are doing something productive like exorsizing your vocabulary, practicing your typing, and makeing the reader's world a better place by wrighing a story. Dam teachers suck. oh *sorry for poor spell, my akilea's heal, along with understanding people's names*
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: September 11, 2005 20:01 PDT
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yay! an update! finally! great job!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan (NSI) On: September 08, 2005 12:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what an interesting storyline you have going here. i like the tension between inu/kag, of course. and, the fact that you leave so much about what is REALLY going on with everyone to the imagination has me hooked. obviously naraku plays a big role in it all (prologue), but i still am not sure about much else. nice work. keep it up and please post new chaps when you are able. thanks.
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Reviewed By: fluffy_hugger On: September 05, 2005 16:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story i love it so far. keep it up, and don't forget to update for all of us pathetic souls who requre a good story to continue functioning propery. and don't you forget to update your other story eather, i like that one whole big bunches. so....... good story , please update (even though i am sure that you have a life), and....a.....YOU ROCK MY PURPLE LAMA SOCKS!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 02:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, Im really liking your your style, alot. I like this story as much as I like, "Waiting On A Wish". Next question; whens the next update?
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Slayer 666 On: August 27, 2005 00:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that your story is awesome so hurry and update already!!!
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Reviewed By: Chibes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 00:14 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will she run into someone who knows her like Hojo or even funnier Kouga? Or will one day she be walking when Souta tackles her.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: August 26, 2005 23:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is very magnetic to me. I could not stop reading even though it is currently very late here. Can not wait to see what happens next; so many undercurrents. Oooohh! I love a good story. Thank you for sharing, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Catalina27 On: August 26, 2005 20:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic so far. You play up tension and mood really well and your charcters are well-developed. Your grammar is nearly flawless and you have exceptional writting skills. I like the details you included about the inn, like the mysterious signs. It is entertaining and original. I can't wait to find out what is Kagome and Inuyasha's story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: August 26, 2005 17:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that you have written another chapter! Nice interaction between Inuyasha and Kagome, and of course, I love anything centered around Miroku. Hopefully we'll soon see/hear more about the mysterious pasts that they both have!
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Reviewed By: Foamyfun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 14:06 PDT
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i love it! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shadow~Magician [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 10:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! Great writing!!! I love the idea of this story! It's just so original and written in such amazing detail. I simply cannot wait until you post another chapter! :D
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Reviewed By: ~Maggie~ On: August 26, 2005 10:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I woke up this morning looking for a good story to read and I found yours! ^^ Its been such a long time since I've been able to find a well-written story with a plot and characters that actually keep me interesting and not skimming through to look for cute scenes. Any description you have that includes Kagome's reaction to Inuyasha's eyes--I simply adore. It makes me all warm and cooing. The attraction between Inuyasha and Kagoem is what I love best and how they both know something is there but are unsure of one another. You make character interaction real and enjoyable while still keeping them true to the series. I was sad there was only three chapters and since MM isn't sending e-mails for favorite I guess I'll just have to check evey day now ^^ I don't know what else to say except the story is adorable, touching, and well done. Kepp writing and much love!! ^^
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