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| "Sachi" Reviews/Comments [ 535 ] | | Pages (36): [ « ‹ 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 › » ] | Title: F.A.N.T.A.S.T.I.C.
Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 18:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...both of your stories are wonderful! (Don't worry...I won't be leaving you one of those horrid, long reviews this time...key word being this. *Smirks*) Anyway, I love how you are working the pace of the story slowly as of right now, I think it fits the plot and everything perfectly! :D After such a critical experience happening to Kagome, and Inuyasha and everyone else being affected at least somewhat as well, the pace you set is perfect. I love especially, though, that you made everyone's interactions and mannerisms fit perfectly with their character and adapting to the circumstances you set them in. ^_^ Great job! You really have the suspense going on this one...I LOVE IT!! :D I will patiently await the secrets to unravel, whatever it is you have up your sleeve...just update again when you can, okay? Until then, take care! ^_^
| Reviewed By: oahtmeal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 07:45 PDT
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great story. i hope u update soon.
| Reviewed By: kareemachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 12:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like. I like a LOT. This is very enjoyable to read, I'm not sure where the story is going (beyond the obvious interactions between the main characters as we know them) and I like the tone and pace of the story. Good job with background and descriptions, and a nice balance of dialogue, inner dialogue, and action. I'm not to say that my opinion means much, but I spent 10 years in as a section head in a BIG bookstore where part of my job was deciding what to order from publishers, so I think I've developed somewhat of a feel for what's worthwhile and what's not. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, and hope you are planning on writing others, as well. As they say, keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: SisSar1535 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 08:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading this story. It's new and original so it is nice to be able to read something with an entirely different story line to it. Keep up the good work!
| Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: MissMusicality [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 02:02 PDT
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Thank you for submitting this chapter to be reviewed! To get an overall feel for the chapter, and to be able to appropriately answer your question, I went ahead and read through your first two chapters as well. The flow of the story was very smoothe, though I am wondering whether or not the "week" that you are saying Kagome has been around includes the days in which she was asleep. Shippou said in CH 2 that she had been out for five whole days, and I find it a little hard to believe that she would be up doing all that work and already knowing her way around fairly well after only a few days awake. If she had, in fact, been awake for about a week, and asleep for five days before that, I find it a little more understandable. You might want to clarify. Other than that, I saw very few little typo/grammatical errors spattered infrequently throughout the entire story. Another read through should cover those...just little things, like missing letters, etc. The characters are well done, the story is set up very nicely. (The little history tale that Miroku tells is a nice touch, and hints at the future plot. Nicely done!) Overall, it was enjoyable, and needs very little work. Excellent job! And again, thank you for submitting!
| Reviewed By: ficfan7 logged out On: June 05, 2005 19:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic i realy like the storyline so far, you must be very tallented writer to be able to create such an interesting story in the span of only three chapters, i can't wait to see what happens between Inuyasha and Kagome. Keep up the good work and update soon
| Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is pretty interesting so far, I like the protectiveness of Inuyasha around Kagome and I'ld love to know what's going on... Keep on with the good work!
| Reviewed By: PrncessS (not logged in) On: June 01, 2005 23:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really good! I can't wait for more updates, but I have to ask, is this going to be one of those slow-moving stories where the sexual tension builds up for like 40 chapters before Kagome and Inuyasha finally kiss and another 60 chapters before they get together? If that's the case I'll jsut wait til your finished to read the story, since I don't have the patience for that and it's too good to only get everything in tiny little pieces with that super slow build-up.
| Title: um....
Reviewed By: katy~ On: June 01, 2005 19:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet story! keep it up! update soon!
| Reviewed By: Lord BooB On: May 31, 2005 21:31 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
those siggns sound exactly like somthing youd see in the Hitchikers guide to the galaxy. i think there hilarius (is that how you spell that? ahh who really cares)
| Reviewed By: bk On: May 31, 2005 07:11 PDT
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This is a really good story. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 01:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great. First time I've given all tens (though that doesn't necessarily mean it's the best fic I've ever read). The cuteness, and the mystery, and the cuteness, man, the cuteness. Hmm...Kagome's eye color confuses me, though. In fics they've been brown, blue, grey/blue, and now grey. In the anime they're clearly brown. It's all very puzzling.
| Title: littleolmee
Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 18:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful chapter. really like kagome and inuyasha's interactions. so how much longer is inuyasha going to be able to keep himself from liking her? will you be giving us some hints on who hurt kagome and where she comes from? or are those who did going to find her? hope you stay with your story, i really enjoy it.
| Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 (not signed in) On: May 30, 2005 16:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really like where you're going with this. Update faster! Please!
| Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 10:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am looking foward to the next chapter! Great so far. I like the way Inuyasha and Kagome have reacted to each other so far. keep it up!
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