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"FAKE in Love: Act I, Stalkers and Protectors" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ]
 Reviewed By: fukai mori [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 24, 2008 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
so... yeah, i highly doubt that you'll ever read this seeing as you released this fic forever ago and so far as i can tell dont write on this site anymore... ( which, it should be noted, makes me very sad) I want to say that this fic is amazing and beautiful and that you are a fantastic author. you've pushed these characters to the greatest of their limits, not just in this fic but in all the 22 or so that you used in their arcs... i've been a longtime fan ( i used to have a different account which i eagerly followed you with but somehow i can no longer access it... rayr) you need to know that even if you never got much credit, or much love, you really are amazing. please, if you ever read this, know that you were a creative, imaginative inspiration. every single time i read this i think "damn but i hope this person is doing some amazing shit with their writing". ( i also secretly wish i was less of a procrastinator and more determined because i'd love to see this as a manga.) please, whatever you do, have an amazing time doing it-because im sure everyone will have an amazing time following it. and to whomever else reads this... READ THIS WORK!!!! AND EVERYTHING ELSE GD HAS DONE!!! you'll thank me later for hooking ya up with this fabulous shit. (
 Reviewed By: darkdragonwriter [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 08, 2007 09:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that you've gained your own stalker with this series. Usually, I don't come to mediaminer.org because you really have to sift through the crap to get something good. However, this series is wonderful and I enjoyed it. You managed to basically portray the manga as a Novel of sorts. You are awesome, and I want to date you. --no really. That sounds a bit odd, coming from a fellow author that you don't know, but seriously, your writing skill is much better than mine, I think, and I will worship your writing skills as long as I can. You will have many stories dedicated to you, I assure you. I am really amazed by your skill. What inspries you to write, I wonder? Would you feel uncomfortable telling me? And while you may be grumpy, it doesn't turn me off at all... --darkdragonwriter (darkrystal03@yahoo.com, if you would deign to email one so lowly as I) ()
 Reviewed By: jdr1184 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 30, 2006 06:18 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love how you built up the final scene with Ryo and Dee. It was a very hot scene and the end of a story that an actual plot. It's rare to have both. Great Job.
 Reviewed By: KawaiiYasha [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 07, 2006 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I must really and truthfully say that you are one of my newest and fewest authors that I truly do adore. I am absolutely in love with your stories (they keep me entertain at work) so far I only read this one and I started Fake in Love: In Another Life and I'm up to chapter 8 I promise I will review that one to I just want to finish it. I'm really anxious to read all your other stories you are truely a blessed and tanlented writer and I really hope that you contine to provide your gift to us free of charge hehehe lol I do hope that we become friends after this and that you continue writing (you really better or I'll come after you myself lol j/k) anyway I must get back to work e-mail me sometime Gravi_hiroshi@walla.com
 Reviewed By: yurathewicked  On: August 13, 2005 05:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this fanfic was amazing. you are so creative and your characterizations are so insightful that i dont regret staying up until 530am reading this. i cant wait until tomorrow when i read through act ii! thank you so much for giving me such a great way to continue the FAKE series~ me love you long time!
 Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 11, 2005 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great job. I'll have to continue this series.
 Title: WOW
Reviewed By: evean  On: July 01, 2005 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your story is one of the best I'v ever read. It's real. tasteful, really well-written. I love your characterization of Dee and Ryo. You made them complex. living people. Thank you.
 Title: Kyaaaa!
Reviewed By: Umbra Advena [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 10, 2005 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your characterization is excellent. The plot was good too. It tied in really well with the series. The feel was pretty much the same as the manga( I haven't seen the anime). Your lime scene was..... how to say this...... tasteful? It was like they were slobering all over each other or moving to fast, etc like most other fics that have intimate scenes in them. It was a welcome change. Thank you for amusing me! *huggles* Here have a cookie. *hands Grumpy Demon a cookie* If only I wrote this well.....
 Title: Yayy
Reviewed By: Enzeru [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 06, 2005 11:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read this fic three days ago and i couldn't stop. It was so well written and the plot is great. I have read alot of fake fic's but this one was like reading the work of a professional author... **you're not aan author are you??** (I'm being serious by the way) Well to say it quick... I Loved it and have also read act II and III and am going to read IV tonight and continue with V tomorrow. You are my favourite fake fic author ^_^ **glomps grumpy demon**
 Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 11, 2005 06:47 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was an excellent fic! Intense, with the perfect amount of humorous parts. Great job!
 Reviewed By: LAChick [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 06, 2005 20:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I like I like I really really like. Go Ryo! Go Dee! I love them! Great job writting it.
 Title: Oh Wow!
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 05, 2005 16:38 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Grumpy Demon, I just finished reading your FAKE fanfic, and all I can say is WOW. What a wonderful piece of work. FAKE. It is by far one of the BEST fictions I've come across in quite a while. It's well written, had an interesting and intense plot, and yet still managed to avoid so many of the cliches that are rampant in FAKE fanfiction. Your spelling and grammar were excellent, and your lemons - LOVELY!! The best thing for me, as a FAKE fan, was your characterizations. You manage to keep everyone in character and yet expand upon their personalities so nicely. Your portayal of Diana Spacey is probably the best one I've ever come across - She's funny, smart, sassy, likeable, and yet stlll utterly professional. You give Dee depth and strength and love, and reading the sections where he is featured you can absolutely understand why he is so in love with Ryo, and that his relationship with Bikky isn't really as nasty as so many other author's seem to portray it. And what you do with Ryo is brilliant. You make him steely strong, and yet sensitive. He is the caregiver of the relationship, but he never once loses his wonderful masculinity nor his intelligence or determination. Again - WOW. Thank you for giving us FAKE fans such a wonderful story. My only complaint when I clicked on your link was that there were no more FAKE stories, which is something I hope you rectify soon. I, and many other I'm sure, will be looking forward to it. Sincerely, BlueSimplicity
 Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 04, 2005 17:08 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was GREAT! I hope you write more fics with Dee and Ryo!
 Reviewed By: gddsinferno  On: February 28, 2005 17:27 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. This was a awesome story. You really had everything laid out and very well decriptive. I was truelly interested throughout your story. Nice job on combineing all the elements of writing. I really think that you have some talent here and hope you expand it. Please keep writing great stories like this one here.
 Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 28, 2005 11:13 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This has got to be the most realistic FAKE fic I have EVER read!! So well written. I could easily see it my mind as a manga or anime dvd. The characters are so well in character too! God, I can't stop giving u complements!! LOL Well anyways this story was a real treat for me. I really enjoyed it. U have great writing talent. I hope u will be writing more FAKE fics in the future. Keep up the great work!! Buh Byez!! Dee and Ryo 4 Eva!!!! =P

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