| "Hidden in my Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: ensatsukokuryuha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 16:56 CST
Comment/Review:
like i have said for the last chapter, i find your story to be very interesting. you have good details in this story and the development of your character is coming out nicely and it isn't a rushed job. your details of the way this character acts really flow well together. i think your story is really well done, despite the fact that is only two chapters long. i do hope you will finish this story. it has a type of uniqueness to it that i really enjoy. keep up the good work and i'll be sure to review the next chapter.
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Title: Chap.1
Reviewed By: ensatsukokuryuha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! this is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I really love your story. Your character Kisuko, was very nicely developed in this chapter. And although the YYH guys didn't show up yet, it was really exciting. The character was described very well, and you could almost imagine her as a really person. I love your idea for this story and I do hope you will continue this story.
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 19:53 CST
Comment/Review:
love it! update soon!
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