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| "A Yugioh Trip to the Farm?" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] | Title: Akefia
Reviewed By: Akefia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is really awesome because of your creativity! please keep it up! name: parker (surname) age: 16 gender: male personality: cold, mischiveous, loyal, a little heartless look: dirty blond hair that goes to mid-back, tanned skin like the Marik's crush: riz clothing: black: long-sleeved shirt, jeans, shoes gray: vest white: socks (not goth) millenium item: millennium cross. power 1) can make the other items powerless for a full minute 2) sends a powerful wave of energy at enimies yami: second most powerful high priest of egypt, high priest parker (surename)
| Reviewed By: Akefia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! this is the character i'd like to set up name: parker (prefers his surname) age; 16 gender: male personality: cold, a little heartless, loyal, unless you tick him off friendly, and mischiveous! looks: dirty blonde hair that reaches the middle of his back, deep brown eyes, and Malik-like tanned skin crush: Riz clothing: gray vest, black pants, black long-sleeved shirt, and black tennis shoes (not a goth millennium item: millenium cross. it has the power to deactivate the other items for an hour, control the minds of others, and minipulate feelings (only used at age 3, and will not be used in story) yami: second most powerful high priest egypt has ever had, High Priest Parker (also prefers surname) clothing:
| Reviewed By: Akefia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! This the character i'd like to add: name: Parker (prefers surname) agez; 16 gender: male personality: king, compasiionate, cold, deep Harry Potter fan, and a little heartless. by the way keep up the good work on the story. sincerely, Akefia
| Reviewed By: Akefia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I'm new to MediaMiner.org, (mm name: Akefia) but I have a LOT of experience with fanfiction. It would be a privillage to be in your story, and no, this is not, and i am not, a suck-up. Thanks in you agree! (Akefia/ I-don't-really-like-Anzu guy
| Title: WOOOOOOO! ^^
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!! YOU UPDATED!!! I LOVE YOU!!! (Friend wise, if you think anything else, then get your mind out of the gutter...lol) Anyways, yes, I get th slang you used for Shane/Isis, lol...Poor Isis, she needs Ice for her hips.....Well, cant complain about not having fun ^^; Anyways, I just wonder how Marik will react, finding out his sis had..Te naughty with Shane...could it be...A shadow duel?! If so, im always ready to duel! I just hope Joey and marik team up on me....Marik for me and sis, and joey for breaking his sis' heart.....Oh well, my sorcerer deck can take the heat >:] Hmm.........If I win, i get their rarest cards, if they win, I stay away from Isis, and am forced to go with seren...Until I dis-obey and go abck with Isis again, then we "Make up" for lost time XD. UPDATE!! ^^ Your friend, Shane.
| Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 19:33 CST
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xD I gotta stay high I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I! xD Tea being drunk @_@ Never a good thing....roflmao, Yugi screaming for Yami...'YUGIOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!' xD Wimp...=.= Ashlee simpson flashing....T_T MY EYES! >o< AND I WANTED BLACK ;_; Aw well...hot red reminds me of blood though! *perks up* xD AND MY LOCK-PICKING SKILLS OWN EVERYONE ELSE'S! PWAH! So glad you updated ^^
| Reviewed By: BakuraReMixTer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 19:45 CST
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SORRIE IVE BEEN GONE FOR SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUCKIN LOONG KIDX x Im still gunna do dis>>>>Even if im barlie on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TRUST ME KIDS xxxxx
| Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 11:52 CST
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*pouts* GIRL, WHERE ARE YOU? Update sometime...pwease?
| Reviewed By: ani_manga_kat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Kitty. Middle name: Koneko. (Meaning Kitty) Last Name: Maxisohmasona (Maxi-sohma-sona) (Put together: Kitty Koneko Maxisohmasona Age: 13 but looks 16 Gender: Girl Personality: Will talk to self at times. Friendly yet has no friends well besides Neko, ironic much? Will do anything for a friend but isn't like Tea, in fact I hate Tea but just ignore her. Likes to help and not hurt unless there's no choice. When listening to music don't bother me. If my song is interrupted I go into a rage/feanzy and sometimes harrass/come on to Malik, if you ever watched Fruits Basket it's like Hatsuharu (Haru) with his white and black sides. Acts like a cat, just like a cat really. When white acts like a cat, catnaps, playful, purrs, anything like that but when black is as viscous as a wolf, Qoute&Silver Fang: Beautiful to the eye but viscous in battle.&Qoute. Blushes easily. When lies I squeak. Looks(eyes hair skin etc.): Eyes: Blue-green, they change bewtween those colors with emotions. Black shoulder length hair. Never puts it up. Skin: not that tan but has the glow of it. Smiles nonstop unless you: A. mess with the music. B. when black side comes out, its more of a smirk. again just like Hatsuharu. Crush: Malik. Clothing: Regular clothes: Black long sleeved shirt with 'Kitty' in red letters across the chest in cursive. Black bellbottoms with chains. Black tennus shoes The Millennium Bell is on a black choker. At farm: Same things when lounging. When working wears a black sleev | Reviewed By: BakuraReMixTer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 16:44 CDT
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OMG WHERE HAVE I BEEN >not here obviously< Omg. . .I got A LOT of work ahead of meh . . .ha *rollz eyes* NessA
| Title: WHeeee
Reviewed By: BakuraReMixTer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 13:25 CDT
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i hoped u lyked ittt pplz
| Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 08:07 CDT
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NESS! FINALLY GIRL! I've waited so long -.-' lol. some scenes, were so KAWAII! Serenity was such a bitch.... about Yugi...I was surprised he got into the club at all. I thought they'd think he was in first grade or something XD. WHOO HOO! I can break dance...gooooo me! ^^ lol, great job on this chappie, and update!
| Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME CHAPTER!! I loved it! please, update whenever you can. Take your time ^^ Shane.
| Title: bk agen BiOtCheZ
Reviewed By: BakuraReMixTer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 16:17 CDT
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K pplz sorrie for the long w8 but juss came bk from Calli. (i wasn't planing 2 go there in the first place) Sooooo ill get rite on da pic alrite!!! Cheerz B-gurl
| Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 09:47 CDT
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Ness, did I tell you that my old account was frozen? Well if i didn't...it's Lily Fairy here ^.~ Glad you agree to the lemon! And maybe the whole gang goes to do something, like...i dunno, brand the cows(that's gotta hurt...)? and then a couple slacks off, starts 'talking' then decides to take it to the bed room...then when the gang comes back, they watch a movie or whatever, and another couple goes off to the bedroom....maybe you could make a chappie per couple? Just an idea...I'll be waiting for the chapter...
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