| "One Mistake" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: scarn16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 00:18 CST
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i love this story, i hope that there is more, so i can continue to read this story i don't want it to end
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Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 15:08 CDT
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short, update soon so we can now what happens to Melfina and the infant.
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Reviewed By: scarn16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 22:16 CST
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is it over? is there more? if not please update soon. i love how the story just pulles at the strings of my heart making it ache fo rht e sorrow and sadness, and its only just the second chapter. very good and well written please update soon
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Reviewed By: Trunks720 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2002 20:56 CDT
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PLZ WRITE MORE!!! I LOVE IT!!! |
Reviewed By: Anime 88 On: June 20, 2002 13:19 CDT
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Damn!! it took me soooooooo looooooong to find this story. I LUV THIS FIC! WRITE MORE! |
Reviewed By: hentai_man [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2001 19:52 CST
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wait, if they thought that Melfina had died. How could the Outlaw Star be back in space? Melfina was the navigator and it wouldn't add up. otherwise it was a good story and it really wasnt much of a hentai sory if you ask me |
Reviewed By: Cait On: November 21, 2001 19:12 CST
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I luv it pleeze write more!! |
