| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
| Pages (148): [ « ‹ 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 › » ] |
Reviewed By: lexibob On: September 29, 2005 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=( that was a pretty sad chapter, sueric !!! I do hope there's another happy ending in this story. It is pretty hard to lie to someone you truly love and care about. xo I'm also wondering--- Are you going to make another fanfiction after this one? I hope you do, but I don't want you to have anymore troubles with the flaming of Inuyasha & Kagome, or anything else for that matter. If you're familiar with another anime and manga show called Full Metal Alchemist, then I'd be so delighted if you made a fanfiction on that show. =) But hey, you don't have to if you don't want to, but I'll be disappointed once this fic ends. x__x; I love all your stories !!
|
Reviewed By: Un4given Miko On: September 29, 2005 18:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh... wow... I still really like this story even though I can't read it on Fanfiction (also I agree with why you stopped posting it there). You make everything very realistic, you don't make it so when they have a fight one chapter the next the make up and are all lovey-dovey again, and I really enjoy that. Thank you so much for writing, I would be lost without something great like this to read. Sorry if that was... messy. U4GM
|
Title: omfg
Reviewed By: nan dE mo chibi otoko On: September 29, 2005 17:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg what is gonna happen! what is going through gins mind? will cain go back to her? what will happen? oh the agony! i am falling apart at work because that is where i read this chappy, my office buddy looked at my when i sobbed and gasped. what are you planning you evil person?!?!?!?!?
|
Title: Wow
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy* On: September 29, 2005 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED the lemon. I got a little behind becuase I can't get to mm org at work but I'm caught up now and wow, that was brutal but it showed the desperation beautifully. I love how you build frustration and give us something so worth it. It's nice not to have formula-type lemons and stories for a change. Keep us guessing, keep us wanting!
|
Reviewed By: inuyashachic612 On: September 29, 2005 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...i almost cried. they love eachother! i was hoping Gin would take the ticket and meet him at the airport but when she ripped it i wanted to scream! >_< poor Gin...and Cain! I keep waiting for more chapters. I feel like so many things are going to happen. Is Cain going to go back to her? Is Gin gonna be on the verge of death? Will Inuyasha find out? And what'll happen if/when he does? Oh wow...I just can't wait til u update! ^_^ til next time
|
Reviewed By: hanayuri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was so sad. It made me cry. I absolutely love it when I read a story that makes me cry because of the way the characters affect me. There aren't a lot of stories that I can say that about. I can't wait to see what happens next.
|
Reviewed By: Beautiful Massacre On: September 29, 2005 14:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay! Aww, but poor Gin. And cain? Love is a horrible thing sometimes
|
Reviewed By: CursedMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! I love this fan fiction! It is one of the best stories I have ever read! I really can't wait for the next chpater! I was crying so hard when Cain left! Please hurry and post your next chapter I'm begging you! I love this story soooooo much! You are such a good writer! After my friend introduced me to this story I couldn't stop reading and after every chapter finished and I had to wait I would always keep a very close eye on my emails waiting for that one email to tell me that you had updated! I know that sounds weird but I really and I mean really love your story! ~Kira
|
Reviewed By: DragonHostile17 On: September 29, 2005 13:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think Gin's song's more: "On my own pretending he's beside me,... i love him, i love him, if only on my own." complications complications. why cant things be as simple as Marious & Cosette? if she dont watch it shell end up like eponine, and that includes being dead, just not shot.
|
Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: am not singed in On: September 29, 2005 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, as always.
|
Reviewed By: Rawben.. On: September 29, 2005 11:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
:(... damn. my heart still hurts! oww... but it was a ...good chapter. i guess any work that moves you to feel is doing it's job, eh? anyhow, i hope you update again asap!! i gots ta know what's gonna happen next! what about inuyasha? is he going to find gin? ...he'd be ...violent if he smelled that room rt now...
|
Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon, who isn't awake enough yet to sign in On: September 29, 2005 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwww...poor Gin and Cain...again, I keep trying to tell myself that you love happy endings and it'll all work out, but I can't seem to convince myself of it, either. >__> Auuugh... ...I was glad to see Kich and Belle in this chapter, if only briefly. They're so entertaining. ^_^
|
Reviewed By: phalon (nsi) On: September 29, 2005 08:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG Sue, I love these last few chapters. Angst is a really beautiful thing especially when done to the main characters! So I have to wonder... Nice chappie. I like how they dealt with the parting and that they'll never be able to recover or so you lead people to believe which is why Angst is so beautiful. I tip my hat to you!
|
Title: Sweet little lies
Reviewed By: Fairia On: September 29, 2005 06:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
So it hits hims from half a world away that she's it? Tch! ...Typical male. I'm sorry to be a pest, but what kind of updating schedule are you on? ARe you on one? Or just updating as you go? Great chapter, (I love the meaty ones the best!)now I gotta hit the showers before I'm late.
|
Reviewed By: kolohe (not signed in) On: September 29, 2005 02:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
"Please don't try so hard to say goodbye..." Another great one, Sueric. *still hoping*
|
| Pages (148): [ « ‹ 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 › » ] |
