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 Title: Sue is mean
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy*  On: September 30, 2005 14:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's the weekend Sue! That means you left us hanging until Monday with Gin being crazy! You are evil, cruel, wicked, and mean. But, ummmmm, don't stop being like that beucase I like the stories still. Even with the meanness
 Title: Review
Reviewed By: crushed by a dandelion [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 30, 2005 14:28 CDT
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Oh...Can your writing get any more angsty? You are...truly...the master of Inu-Yasha fanfiction. Write on.
 Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: not signed in yet  On: September 30, 2005 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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 Reviewed By: notzathros  On: September 30, 2005 13:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
What a spooky chapter. It's like she's already a ghost, just flitting around touching base with everyone before crossing over. (shiver) Thanks!
 Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi)  On: September 30, 2005 12:14 CDT
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NOOO!!! Don't say goodbye Gin!! I'm crying my eyes out your are a ture master at the angst, sue. Oh please let there be a haapy ending. please update soon!! Come on Cain find a way and then go back to Gin!!
 Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon, who can't remember to sign in  On: September 30, 2005 11:59 CDT
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Uwaaaah!!! Now you've got me freaking out. I keep telling myself I KNOW Cain'll be there in time...but still. Aaaargh. ...Again...you're so evil. I love you.
 Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 30, 2005 11:32 CDT
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Wow, such angst. Poor Gin, Poor Cain. If Kich can't help, maybe Toga can.
 Reviewed By: Raniatlw [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 30, 2005 11:29 CDT
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Oh this is too sad. She really is saying goodbye to everyone. I hope it gets happier soon. Update soon!
 Reviewed By: DragonHostile17  On: September 30, 2005 11:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
All aboard the morbid express. she must really be in this deep to be weak enough to just end it all. Cain sure as hell better get his ass in gear. hey, if she is his chosen then why cant he feel her resignation? shouldnt they at least have the semi-telekentic connection as toga and sierra did?
 Title: adamile
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 30, 2005 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well it looks like this is the end for Gin and I didn't think she wanted to live without Cain. I was wondering if Cain has chosen to die can Gin choose to live? When Gin dies poor Inu and Kag will be heartbroken. I pity Kag's baby if it is a girl cause Inu will surely be an armed guard around that baby if Gin dies. Well good Chapter Sue ( great angst !) and have a nice weekend. J
 Reviewed By: Rawben..  On: September 30, 2005 10:37 CDT
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...what?? its the weekend now!! i can't wait till monday!! *cries* noooo! what about sess? someone save her! ugh!!
 Reviewed By: Iloveinus  On: September 29, 2005 21:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2005 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've been staring at this screen for twenty minutes. It didn't take that long to stop the tears, but now that the sorrow has ebbed a little bit... This chapter is indescribable. So sad, so... I was half-expecting the cliche. Just like Cain, to see Gin run into the terminal. Only half-expecting, mind you, because I should know better than that. Your writing is simply... amazing. And soooo much fun to read! Palpable despair is a double-edged sword; great for reading, bad if one isn't able to seperate the fictional emotion from reality. Amazing chapter!
 Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2005 19:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am tending to disagree with your confused reader.... as I am 26 and would be inclined to blush crazily if given the right circumstances -- especially if it were around somebody I absolutely adore and love deeply. Even as a strong young woman I still carry many of the intense emotions that Gin experiences and I really *do* love her portrayal in this story. Sometimes, our youth gives us the courage to speak our minds -- or do things otherwise that we wouldn't do. As for Gin, her mind wasn't on finding a mate at 15 -- but 25-26, I'd be a bit distracted too, if I found a hot hunk of a guy that was (straight) and had similar interests as I did. I'd dig him too, and who knows the kind of fool I'd turn myself into around him -- all flustered and tongue twisted. lol. Beautiful love scene, though I was a bit surprised about how quickly it ended. Guess it sometimes happens like that, eh? Luv, Jazz
 Reviewed By: TRL  On: September 29, 2005 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love all your fanfictions even though I don't review alot. I guess I'm shy but what I wanted to say was about one of your reviewers that you wrote to about Gin being up front with Cain about her feels. All of us who love Inuyasha and watch it like a religion ;) know that Kagome is the same in the sense that she loves Inuyasha with everything that she is but believes that his happiness is with Kikyou. She knows that he made a promise to go to hell with Kikyou if that is their fate and though Kagome feels in her heart that living is better for Inuyasha she will let him go to Kikyou if that would make him happy. Sounds like what Gin is doing.Think you for being true to your characters and the anime. Those of us who watch and learn from Inuyasha see that you put both of their personities into their children. Keisha
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