| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Title: chapter 81
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 10:01 CDT
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Awesome chapter.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 08:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter it had my heart beating a mile a minut...God these two are so much like Inuy and Kag that it's giving my flash backs I hope they get it together before it's too late. Is she really going to ask him to....Well she should ask him maybe then they will both wake up...Oh, please for the love of everything that's holy...update soon...I don't know if I can wait any longer I have to know!!!
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Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: September 24, 2005 21:25 CDT
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HEY! i havent writen in a long time but sue, these past chapters have been awesome!!!!!!! keep up the good work!!!!
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Reviewed By: Elvinah On: September 24, 2005 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, im close to tears >.< I really really really feel sorry for them both, poor Gin and poor Cain *Runs of to cry* But anyway :P Keep up the really good writing :D
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Title: none
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Sue, hope all is well with your family and your father in law. I am glad you are posting. I thought the wedding was nice. As always great writing. I hope Gin survives it seems that if Cain keeps his promise that he will hurt the two people that love him the most, Belle and Gin. How sad. Gotta tell you Sue that Cain's attitude reminds me of an ex-boyfriend of mind.I guess that's why I don't care for him that much. Well I guess I'll like him better when he stops hurting Gin. I just love that girl! lol!. Well great writing and have a good weekend. J
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Title: I'm really slow...
Reviewed By: Kikisuteru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 00:17 CDT
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I don't know why, but I just realized that Kich and Ryo both had American...wait...Toga had an American wedding, too, din't he? Sorry, that's just my epiphany coming into words. But anyways, I hope everything is alright with you and your family. I also hope you could update soon.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 09:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in tears right now, OMG he can't leave her, he's not suppose to leave her. My heart goes out to the both of them, if only they weren't as stubborn as Inuy and Kagome were. So Gin maybe in danger, well who ever this Richardson is he sure is in for a rude awakening. I hope things work out for the two of them I really do.
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Title: *evil laugh*
Reviewed By: Kyosama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just because I love you THAT much, I have opened a mediaMiner account. ^.^ So I can still read you're lovely stories. I swear, that girl is awful. I know how you feel, I don't post any of my work online, because its either gotten stolen or people have been so cruel. I'm 14, almost 15, so I don't really think that girl as an excuse as far as age is concerned. I know its wrong and so should she. Just because she doesn't havey yout talent, doesn't mean she can use yours in stead. I would be horrorified, if someone did that to me. The best thing I can say is to ignore her, blocker, realize she means nothing in this world. I REALLY love your fanfic, and that's saying a lot. I'm not a mushy lovey dovey person. Just keep writting and doing what you love. Don't let this chick win, because that's what she wants. She's immature and her only thrill is annoying others. You on the other hand, are an awesome author, I look forward to your every reveiw. ^.^ With love, ~Kyo (note, I gave you all tens.) ^.^
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: September 23, 2005 07:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great as always Sueric. I have a question. Do you ever read AU's and if so have you ever read "The curse of the dragon" Its a realy good and long story. And the author mentioned you and all. So I was just wondering do you read AU's or do you just read stories dealing with the cannon characters
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Reviewed By: ape On: September 23, 2005 07:27 CDT
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ok i have really be looking for a way to say this and i really hope you dont take it the wrong way but... i hate cain. i really do. he is not good enough for gin and he is a s.o.b. now this is not an isult to you or you character development skills. i hate sesh too he is a bastard and i will never think of him as a hero or a "good guy". that is how i feel about cain but a little more on the inuyasha side of thinking about him with more violent tendencies towards cain. please please please do not take this as a put down on you or your charaacters, you goal to create an attachment was met just not the one you wanted for this character to me. the same thing happened with gadsby (from the great gadsby) i HATE that guy. so again please do not take this as chritisism, tthis is a wonderful story.
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Title: purity 4: justificatiion
Reviewed By: yashaismlvr4ever On: September 23, 2005 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, it took me a while to find where you have been writing your story. but after hours of mercilous of web surfing , i finally found out where you r story was posted. well i love these chapters , as usual , and i hope you continue writing.i think that kich was being microscopically selfish when belle was talking to her daddy
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 (NSI) On: September 22, 2005 20:02 CDT
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"Through the bemusement inspired by the touch of his lips, Gin had to wonder if he listened really closely, could he hear the sound of her heart breaking?" That was a really beautiful line. :o)
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Reviewed By: Beautiful Massacre On: September 22, 2005 18:50 CDT
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gosh,u kno just how to make me cry. lol. i'm a sucker for love. It's so sad about Gin and Cain. Gosh, this is breaking my heart. But i loved your writting as always
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could hear the sound of a splitting heart loud and clear. Three words is all it would take for either one. It's almost funny how hard those can be to say.
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