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Title: Gin and Snow, Pricless
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 12:25 CST
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Gin got to do what I've always wanted to do, but growing up in San Francisco doesn't give you many opportunities to make snowman. She punched him, Good girl, I wanted to punch him too. Maybe next time I'll be lucky and she'll have her sicle. Someone that nasty just needs to have a little trimmed off the top. About a foot ought to do it. Being brought down by everyone's favorite baby girl. Some people really need the humiliation. Great chapter. The Gin/Cain Pairings is just as wonderful as Kagome and InuYasha. Your story makes me feel warm all over. I love all your work that I have read to this point. Until next time.
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Title: Snow-mates!
Reviewed By: Kyosama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the cuteist chapter. Even after the meanest of that Thunder jackass. I think Gin handled herself nicely. ^.^ I'm proud of you Gin! LOL, I seriously don't think Cain has it in him to be toooo stern with her, let alone punish her. The ending was cute, with the building a snow mate-ness. I think Gin is still such a child at heart, that it's starting to infect Cain too. =^.^= I'll be looking foreward to your next post. Awesome chapter, very kawaii. ~Kyo
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Title: YOu are a great writer
Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is Pheonix Tabuutz from ff.net but i call myself oblivion-bringr here. i just wanted to say that you are an excellent writer. you are very unique in your style and your story plot. i have read all of your stories and i never get tired of them. or uninterested. i can't wait for the next chapter to this story! update soon. ~OB~
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Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story and all of your others are wonderful. They make me laugh and I highly recommend you to others who ask me! thanks for all your hard work! Deb
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 08:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Ch. 97
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 12:24 CST
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Peanut Butter Cups and out-right bribery. Shameless, absolutely shameless! LMAO!!
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Title: Ch. 96
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 12:23 CST
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Hehe, I love it; Gin the Vamp. Luckily, it didn't take much effort to get Cain to comply. Now there is the emotion and tenderness that was missing from their earlier joining. That's as it should be. Before, there were too many lies and misconceptions between them, interfering with the all-important need for honesty and expressing one's true feelings. While primally intense can be good, it was nowhere near as wonderful or earth shaking as it could have been. And deep down, they both knew it. I'm so glad they can finally be together the way they should be; completely.
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Reviewed By: InuDani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 19:21 CST
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OMG Sueric! It took me forever to figure out that youre no longer on FF! Im dumb that way, thou... I was so sad cause I thought you'd stopped writing then I read the bottom of the chapter and I was like, DuH! YEah! I love this story so much And I cant wait to see what happens With Cain and Gin and Kich and Belle... ur so awsome at writing! Peace out, -InuDani
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Reviewed By: Red Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 10:09 CST
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I know after so much, it's probably not worth it for you to keep at this. I still greatly enjoy all your stories. I guess I just wanted to tell you I'm grateful you've decided to finish this. Thank you for all your trouble.
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Title: Whoa...I don't even remember...
Reviewed By: Iloveinus589 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely forgot writing that...Now that i'm more of a mm.org person now I have completely forgot about FFnet. Are you still updating this on FFnet? Oh yeah...sorry about that either way. I know how much you hate to be asked about lemons and stuff now. I guess that's because I've been reading all your stories now. I love this story by the way. Still reading the Purity 4 too, can't wait for it to be finished and for you to do P5. I noticed that you like writing The Purity's a lot more too. Is that because you like making your own characters and can make them however you please? Like their personalities and so forth? Sorry again...that was childish of me lolz. I have grown up a lot since then too. Well ttyl Sue. -iloveinus589
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Reviewed By: anika [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. that's all there is to it. you have such a gift, such a flow. you obviously love your characters and take so much time evolving them. i've read all of your fics and have to say that I am blown away. you really need to think about publishing. no ifs ands or buts. and good lord, how do you do it all?! husband, kids, extended family! i applaud you! i hardly get by with just myself. anyway, this arc i think is by far my favorite. i love gin and belle. and everything about the story fits. (now i just sound like i'm rambling. sorry, I really am, but I tend to gush...) PLEASE NEVER STOP WRITING, EVEN IF IT IS JUST FOR YOURSELF!!!
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Title: Heeey
Reviewed By: Corcione [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey sue, watsup?? HAAH I LOVE HOW THE STORY IS GOING!!! i never woulkd have guessed the way in wich you put things to happen, it is awesome!!! There is one thing bothering me, though.... I've sent at least 3 arts to your webpage but they haven't been ppubliched... I wonder if maybe there is a limited number of artwork I might send?? I'd really like to know, so please if it isn't a bother, can you reply this question to my email, Please.. if it is( a bother, i mean) then i'll wait till' the next chapter is posted to know. Thanks either way, and I hope you never, EVER give up on writing, because it's a thing very few can acomplish. My best wishes... Ginny
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Reviewed By: Star-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 15:08 CST
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I love it please update soon and are Kich and Belle gonna have kids SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Raniatlw [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 10:50 CST
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Awesome chapter!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 23:37 CST
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Richardson, ey? ...why am i getting all these warning bells that we've heard from this guy before? i'm thinking an eariler purity series. damnit sue, now i'm gonna have to go back and reread two, cause something tells me i'll find a link there (or i'm going to spend god knows how many hours searching). i'll tell you, that peanut butter cup fight was halerious. makes me rethink the idea of ever getting married, seeing the lighter side of those relationships. i have this trepidation, though, for the next few chapters. being that we're already at like, what...97? just how many can be uploaded? the world may never know... anyway, great story, as always!!!!
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