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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 05:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 03:13 CST
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watching, waiting, reading, just not really reviewing...what I do couldn't really be considered a review...just wanted to let you know I'm still around still reading, and still loving the wonderful charas you create.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 01:18 CST
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aww! adorable!!! but damn! i was really worried when she was running and almost fell! :O anyhow, great chapter! ...why are you up so late?
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Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been thinking on this for a while. This animosity btwn Inu Yasha and Cain feels forced and slightly unnecessary. I don't see why they haven't come to some sort of common ground yet. Personally, I don't know how Gin can be with someone who hates her father and her brothers (and they hate him too). It seems like a very stressful family situation, being with someone who won't ever go with you to visit your relatives, not even for a quick lunch. Don't get me wrong I like your writing, this is just a point that has been bothering me. I just don't see how Gin can stand it.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 00:14 CST
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Awww...I was wondering if Kagome was ever going to 'pry' into Cain's mind haha! I can't believe we only have a few more chapters to read until it's done. I thought it was cute how Cain started rushing her to the hospital when Bas moved haha....hmm, or 'something else'....is that 'something else' sometimes good during the pregnancy, but it depends on how far and long the woman is?
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 23:27 CST
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Yeah! Wonderful chapter! Awwww! Cain's going to lose his mind! Moving furniture? At least she ate her salad. Poor Nez. Gah! Morning sickness throughout. Sounds like the baby's going to offer her some relief though and come early. I hope it goes well. If it doesn't, Cain may not survivie until Gin has hers. They might have to lock him up in a padded cell.
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 20:03 CST
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Havent reviewed in some time. I see your doing great as ever. Hows your step father? (I hope thats right. Right?)
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOO! Nezumi's in labor! That is unexpected. I am asuming that we are going to find out why she kept on having morning sickness at some point won't we? I really can't wait to see what will happen next!
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Reviewed By: Star-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 15:17 CST
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Aww so cute Cain wants to spend time with Gin more. Like she did when he was doing paper work. Can you updat Purity 5 too oh good chapter update soon Ja Ne
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 10:18 CST
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so would the child then be youkai or hanyou? Kurisu no ryuujin
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: November 30, 2005 10:01 CST
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Wow. Poor Cain. Gin doesn't truly realize how alone he's been, and considering that Toga and Sessh are the only ones he really gets along with...Nez too, poor dear. The morning sickness is terrible enough, but to go into labor so early. She must be beyond frightened.
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Reviewed By: Fairia On: November 30, 2005 06:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH! My absolute favorite character EVER and you left it off there?! Cruel, cruel woman.... Heh, anyway, great chapter. How long was Kich gone for exactly? Gin's 4 months along, and Kich is asking Belle if Sierra left? Could he really spend 3-odd months away from her? And will Nez's dad be at the hospital? Does he know about Ryo being a hanyou? ..You know there's a probelm with your hot water when you've had time to sit down, check your email, read a chapter of a book, write a review AND its STILL cold. It's actually dropping the tempature of my room. Holy shit.
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Title: Ch. 102
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 02:44 CST
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I had a good laugh over Kich's bemoaning the fact that Ryo has beaten him to the punch yet again. Heh, at least they aren't keeping score. Baka=Ryo 23 - Dr. Buttmunch 22...yadda yadda yadda. LOL
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Title: Ch. 101
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 02:43 CST
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Oh, *cough cough cough* my! That *cough cough* was *cough* intense. I take back the Shrink comment for Belle and Kich, they should join a sex-aholic group!
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