| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: kestral-tudorica On: November 28, 2005 21:06 CST
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lol, too bad mikio didn't swear :-p then kagome could have purified Inuyasha. but you are the queen of comedy (among other things) and i was certainly laughing enough, so it was hardly missed. Great job with this story :) I'm glad you didn't cut it off as early as you did with the others. I also like how i see more of the rest of the family. Sesshy's coming back in sometime? No matter, I'm loving the hilarity and drama. They're all having babies! whee!
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Title: chapter 105
Reviewed By: charity-nicole On: November 28, 2005 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was so AWESOME!!!!!! OMG i can't believe it! they're doing it BABY Style!!!=D well keep on writing and about what i said in my last review, i meant it , buuuuut.... i had had a little too much sugar =P well good luck!!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 18:42 CST
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All except Kagome and Sierra are pregnant...but that can change for Sierra haha!! Ah, I'm so happy!! They're all having babies, yay!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Star-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 18:36 CST
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Oh my god this chapter was so cute and funny. I hope the next chapter is funny too. I love your writing and stories, actually i wish i could write this good but *shurgs* oh well update soon
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Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 18:06 CST
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Heh, I can relate to Inuyasha. They're an interesting family, indeed. A wonderful chapter as usual, Sue. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Geminia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter and wonderful design...lol the thought just occured to me :) Maybe Toga's curse is the Curse of Miroku :) LOL Even though the male determines the gender of the baby, maybe some ancient Japanese goddess put some sort of blessing on Sango's bloodline. Like, that Sango knew all of her boys would turn out to be perverts like Miroku as long as they had his blood no matter the parents...LOL And some Goddess knowing this heard Sango's silent plea and so there has not been a male in almost Sango and Miroku's bloodline for so many numbers of generations LOL That would be hilarious, oh well, that is my guess on Toga's lack of male heirs, of maybe Sesshy will be changing that archaic law of only having a male heir, since Japan is thinking of having a female empress now, as the same curse of Miroku is affecting the Japan emperors, who have not had a male-born heir in 50 or so years :) Love the story! -Gemini
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Reviewed By: Shippousfriend (ffnet) On: November 28, 2005 14:34 CST
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That was great!! I love it when you get the whole family together, its really very humorous(sp?). I could not stop laughing, my parents were staring and my BF left. Whooooooo! Keep going! And I beg of you, to do a Purity 5!!! Please, we all want you to!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: memyselfandiandyou On: November 28, 2005 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best chaps of this fic, I have always loved the family interaction stuff I spent this weekend re reading purity 2 and 3 all the way through my back hurts LOL, but I didn't have to work today so that is okay yay for all the babies and cousins being born around the same time!
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Title: Chapter 105
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laugh* *cough* *weeze* God help me... I'll never be able to stop laughing! This chapter is HILARIOUS! That maybe one of the most carefree chapters that I can remember in this entire fic! Kich and Belle's "money episode" was brilliant... especially Kich's counter to Ryo and Toga's teasing. It was nice to spend some time with Toga, Sierra, Nezumi, and Ryo again. Then, the ending... I almost died of laughter! "What the hell ever... You're all fucking nuts, and I'm going home." May be the funniest thing I'm going to see all day. Amazing, amazing chapter!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: babies!!
Reviewed By: ::Rawben:: On: November 28, 2005 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol! i love it when she messes with toga!! haha! and lol! yey for babies! that's just too funny! but at least they can all grow up together! and i wonder how they'll get along with bas? you said he spent a good deal of time training w/ inu! does he get along w/ mikio? this is just so adorable!!!
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Reviewed By: Raniatlw [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 10:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Awesome chapter!! I think it would be interesting to see a female tai-youkai. Very cute ending, I like how Belle likes to tease Toga. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: November 28, 2005 08:54 CST
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That was so funny. I loved it! Babies are all over the place now. ^_^ Mate swapping, lol.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: November 27, 2005 21:41 CST
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A baby for Gin, how wonderful! I can't imagine just how excited and thrilled she must be. I'm sure her brothers will be pleased. ^_^ Oh this is wonderful.
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Reviewed By: RhiannonoftheMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 15:37 CST
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I'm so happy for everyone - only one thing is a little concerning. Belle is only 19? 20? She hasn't started higher education or looked into careers, has she? Then again, I suppose youkai and hanyou have all the time in the world for children and careers, in any order they see fit. Must be nice. *big sigh*
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