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Title: Chapter 100
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 16:37 CST
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Chapter100! I cannot believe it has been one hundred chapters since you started this! What a ride... This is another fantastic chapter! Good ol' Nezumi, talking some sense into her brother-in-law. Cain's coming around! Yay for Gin! Yay for Mikio, too. His third word... his father is going to be so proud! I love it.
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Reviewed By: camille On: November 16, 2005 14:35 CST
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That was a great chaprter!! When Mikio said hell, it cracked me up!!
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 11:14 CST
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haha! mean zelig and hell! that's great! and you know that kid'll be saying worse things after he gets back w/ inu! that's too funny ;)... anyhow, great chapter! and i'm glad kich has found out about belle! poor girl... although, she should have been more open w/ him...
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: hikaru1617 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 10:12 CST
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I'm back! I found your story once more! BWAHAHAHAH! lol Anyways, waht can I say? I absolutely LOVE IT so far!! ^^ And I do have to say, I wish you would post those other stories you spoke about in your profile and on your site with the continuations and such. I think the writing style you have is absolutely stunning, and the stories are woven beautifully! Immensely so!
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 02:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! Took me a while to catch up, but it was worth it! Excellent work, Sue!
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Title: Chapter 99
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 12:37 CST
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Poor Belle. At least Kich has a good reason for his long nights. Poor Gin, and Cain for that matter. I can't wait to see how Cain comes around. This is a fantastic chapter!
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 11:30 CST
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lol, that name did immasculate the poor dog! aww! anyhow, great chapter!...again! i just read P5, it's just so good! yey! ....anything else to say.... uhh... kich better tell belle soon! that sucks! she misses him!
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Title: Awe
Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet yet sad chapter. i cant wait to see how gins family acts in america. especially inuyasha and ryoumaru. lol. update!
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Reviewed By: Aishiteru148 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*girly squel* OMGOSH!!! Pankin? lol, Cain is right, only Gin..... it was such a great chapter thank you so much....nice clif hanger by the way just makes me scream "What? No!!!! That can't be the end...." kinda like with the Inuyasha episodes....so I'm stuck between two things that Kich might be up to although I'm not sure if eaither of them are correct. Eaither kich is turning into only rescontrustive practices, or he's bying that art peice of Isabelle...or something that you know and I'm to clueless to think of even though it's most likey obvious as if it was sitting in front of me....but oh well I will most likely find out soon enought right? You going to update soon right? Like in a day or two? Come on, you know you want to.... ~Marina
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Title: Minor Adjustments
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there: I felt sadness and pain reading about Belle and how down she was feeling because Kich wasn't spending enough time with her. The way you had written this chapter made the emotions come alive and it was great! I could just feel Cain's fearfulness and dread to give Gin a baby. Just Awesome! Thank you for updating so fast! Take care, Christal
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwe! Poor Belle! Well I hope that what Kich is doing will make her happy. And Gin probably wants a baby huh? I think that i saw that one coming! I loved this chapter and i can't wait to see the next one!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 15:25 CST
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Aww...."All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." But in this case it makes Belle a dull girl...aww this is just sad! Belle needs to convince him to take a little break haha!! I feel bad for Cain for having those thoughts about Isabelle and not wanting them to happen to Gin as well. Such a sad, but awesome chapter haha! Does that make sense?
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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