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Title: Ch. 100
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 02:43 CST
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Ok, I'm stuffed full of fluff...babies are so sweet and fun at that age. Look out, the first thing they do once they learn to walk is discover that they can now carry things in their free hands...and subsequently relocate all their toys to the living room! LOL!!!
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Title: Ch. 99
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 02:42 CST
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Aww, that's sad to see Belle so down in the dumps when they were flying so high earlier. Kichiro should tell her. He risks her assuming something else and only creating more friction. Honesty is always the best route. And Cain...is he ever going to kick this denial habit of his? Sure, his fears are very real and deep-seated, but it's clouding the fact that Gin is not Isabelle and it's doubtful that history will repeat itself. Another case of "let's sit down and talk, honey" -- Man! Psychiatrists would just love to get their hands on these people! Hmmm...I wonder; are there Youkai Shrinks? LOL
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Title: Ch. 98
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 02:42 CST
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Oh my, Cal Richardson is a real bastid, ain't he? Nasty things like that have a tendency to keep popping up, thorn-in-the-side and all that. But as nasty as he is, Gin is made of sterner stuff and raised by a family that doesn't take crap from anyone. Not backing down and confronting bullies is usually the best way to deal with them, but Richardson isn't your average bully and can't be intimidated so easily. Gin may be fiesty but I don't think she's a match for him. Cain is right to be concerned; in the dangerous games of power and politics (even the youkai kind) loved ones are often the innocent targets of one's enimies. Hardly fair, but a well known fact.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 01:13 CST
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I can just imagine what Ryo is doing right now: nothing but pacing! I bet Cain is going to go through the flashbacks again, I feel sorry for him, having those dreams! I hope Nezumi and the baby are okay; it seems a too odd that she was throwing up well in her later months.
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: November 30, 2005 00:30 CST
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holy crap!!! i hope the baby's ok!! oh man! and i hope gin get's some rest! she's always on the go! :P cain needs some time too! lol, and yey for kich coming back! he can help w/ delivery! i bet ryo's a mess!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 23:11 CST
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Poor Sierra! Gah! Toga'll be lucky if she doesn't get him neutered! LOL. Gin's so happy to be home... *sigh* Poor Cain, he's liked having her undivided attention at home. ::grrrrrrrrrrrr:: Cal Richardson makes my skin crawl!
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Title: JulianoJustine@gmail.com
Reviewed By: Justiney Beaney On: November 29, 2005 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sue, I belive you have totally been able to catch the attention of readers from all walks of life. This may well be what I respect most about you. You are able to create a beautiful concept that not only captures one's ever-growing interest, but captivates your readers heart. It is most important, still, the suspense that you create with just one line, or even just one of your words. Your words... ever beautiful, ever inthralling. I have spent many nights up until 4 or 5 am (knowing that I have class at 7a.m.) captivated, owned, possessed by your blessed words. You are only human, yet in your writing you contain an ethereal embodiement. Those who don't apprieciate your words do not deserve a moment of your time, never ever let them let you loose your light, all of your beauty. Your stories are nice, you are beautiful
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Title: Chapter 106
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 20:40 CST
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Poor Cain... I feel so bad for him. Gin's always stretching herself so thin. I really like the title of this chapter. Poor Sierra... so much for communication, Toga! On that same note, poor Kich! Well, he's got it the least bad, but still... those inu-youkai are really, how shall we say, grumpy when they don't get their way. This is a great chapter!
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Reviewed By: hanayuri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tonight I was watching Food Network when a segment on Unwrapped showed the world's biggest Hershey store in New York. Inside the store was a huge wall of Reese's Peanut Butter Cups along with tons of other RPBC products. The first thing I thought when I saw it was, 'I'll bet Gin would love that!' I laughed soon after because I always find myself thinking about your characters as though they were real. Anyway, as strange as this review was (can it even be considered a review?), I thought I'd drop a line about my twisted mental health. I know my unparalleled love for all things anime/manga/Sueric-fiction is becoming a little much, but when it comes to your writing skills, can a person ever have too much Sueric? Nah...
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 16:06 CST
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I knew Sierra was going to get pregnant haha! But I didn't think she'd be this upset over it...I wonder if she's finally going to have a boy. Aww poor Cain, all he wants is some lovin' and Gin's family is taking that away from him haha. I can just bet that Kich is going to try to get the surgery done, safely, but quickly because of Belle.
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Reviewed By: Rose 2343 On: November 29, 2005 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story, you are such a great author...ever think of publishing? Anyways, I thought that it was interesting that Gin abused the power love gives you over another when she asked Cain if he loved her...in Shakespeare's The Tempest, he suggests that if one loves someone, they will not abuse the control that love gives them over someone else. If they do, then their love is questionable. Just thought I'd share that, since I'm studying it in school. I fully believe that Gin loves Cain completely, though.
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Title: ohhh Toga!
Reviewed By: chichiwvu(nsi) On: November 29, 2005 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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haha... Why am I not surprised that Toga got himself into trouble again? Poor Sierra. She needs a break from being pregnant, it's insane! lol
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: November 29, 2005 10:32 CST
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LOL!!! I'D KILL TOGA! haha!! ugh! 4 daughters and another kid on the way! i hope it's a boy... although, it'd be nice to have a girl taiyoukai... hmm... anyhow, great chapter! and poor cain! i hope gin gives him some time too! :( and bummer for kich! his going away present got ruined! :( i'd be pissed...he took it well...
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: November 29, 2005 09:30 CST
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Lol, thanks. ^_^ Poor Cain though. He feels so neglected. Would he be willing to accompany Gin to Sierra's appointment, I wonder. Gin just needs a clone of herself maybe.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 06:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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