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| "FAKE in Love: Act IV, Disappearances and Reunions" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: darkdragonwriter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories! I've read III and IV, but I think I didn't review III because I read them both at the same time. I absolutely think that you are a talented writer, and I can't wait until I read the other ones, because I know that they will be even better. You are great at writing FAKE! I've never read a fanfiction series that seemed so much like an extension of the actually fandom! I read the last manga for FAKE after I finished reading your Act II, and I was actually upset that Diana and Rose got married. I said, out loud in the book store, "I can't BELIEVE that they had the audacity to give Diana away to someone else!" There were people looking at me and everything. And one of my friends told me, "Who were you expecting? They have chemistry." And I said, "They DON'T! She should be with Drake." And she said, "Drake? Drake?! and laughed at me... You're so good at portraying the characters that are in the FAKE series. I must ask, do you write intuitively? Or do you actually sit down and try to decide whether or not what you're writing is canon or not? Ryo's tough compassion, Dee's perverse protection, it's all written so clearly, and while your stories all follow a certain format, you make your readers look forward to it, not think it predictable. I look forward to every scene that comes in this story, and I had personally been wondering when Tommy's story was going to come through to the surface. Do we get to find out how Dee knew him later? Do we? I also have a feeling that the drug business and the MacLean family are not a done deal yet! Ooh, you make me wish I had a comp at home! I would ask for you to read some of my own fanfiction, but unfortunately, I don't have too much on this site. You see, I'm lazy, and I haven't brought my stuff over from fanfiction.net yet. When I do, though, you're definitely someone I want to read my fics. Your opinion on my writing would mean the world to me, honestly. Your lemons are great, too! Those Ryo and Dee moments are realy what I look forward to. I happen to be pretty decent at writing lemons, so I know a good one when I see one, and yours are ranked with the highest. I love lemons with the perspectives of the characters. You manage to find a balance that not too many people know how to use in a romantic scene. I know me flattering you is getting to be a bit bothersome, but you really are good! Anyway, I love your series. You set a new standard for fanfiction readers, especially on this site; you have to sift through a lot of the BS to get to the really good fics. You are awesome, and don't you forget it! It's nice to know that there are some getting-older people who cling to fanfiction. Many of my favorite authors have stopped after a while. You still have the fire burning!! You are on my favorites list (I don't know why I hadn't put you on there before now) and I want to thank you for your work. Its people like you that allow me to seek out better writing. It's because of writers like you that I have the high standards for the fanfiction I read today, and even though I might be stroking your ego, you deserve it; I don't know why you haven't gotten that many reviews on this story--perhaps you should upload this onto other sites...? In closing, this was a beautiful fanfic, and the way you portray your characters is totally canon. You are really good, and talented, and I will be spreading word of this fanfic to a lot of my friends--that's actually how I found this story. I've already converted someone to your stories, and I hope that she reviews, too. ...god, I never spend this long on a review. Anyway, you're good, and you'll continue to hear from me as I continued reading your stories. I'm your biggest fan! You don't believe me, but one day I'm going to review you and let you know that I've printed out your entire series! I just have to get that comp at home...just you wait and see! I've almost used up my word limitation, so chao for now! I'll be back!
| Reviewed By: KawaiiYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha yes it's me once again just showing you some much deserve love. I was thinking I shouldn't waste time reviewing each and every story but that wouldn't be fair since your such an awesome writer hehehehe well it on to the next story for me (hopefully I can finish it in under an hour lol)
| Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this one even more than the last. Heading to Act V.
| Reviewed By: Enzeru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say that i havn't said earlier. This one is as good as all of the others. and I felt as if i was as worried for dee as Ryo was...
| Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished reading this Act and the next one. It's amazing as usual! Poor Ryo worrying about Dee...everyone thinking the worst had happened to Dee, yet Ryo still not giving up. It was nice to see Rose not being a totaly ass for once, and helping out D and R... yeah, I guess it was kind of his job, but still, it was nice. ^_^ Loved this Act as much as the others! I just can't get enough of your fics!!!!!
| Title: Amazed - Yet Again
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grumpy Demon: Once again, I sign on and find another one of your Acts waiting for me. What can I say? Yet again you have managed to take my breath away. I know you said you wanted to do something more Dee centric, and also that this fic in particular was giving you some trouble. Actually it was one of MY FAVS from your series. The way you presented the separation of Dee and Ryo. As a reader I was worried for Dee. But what struck me the most was how BEAUTIFULLY you handled Ryo. One the outside, he was determined to stay strong. But the internal monologue you gave him throughout was truly heartbreaking. It was one of those rare occasions where something was so beautifully sad; it was honest, real, and heartwrenching. I also liked that that everything didn't go back to normal right away simply because Dee came back. (Too many writers don't seem to recognize that actions often have long term effects, and "GOOD SEX" doesn't automatically fix everything.) How you chose to handle it was mature and nicely done. You had also said you wanted to do something more Dee centric, but you handled Dee beautifully here. It was refreshing to see his reflections regarding his feelings for Ryo. I find alot of writers when handling Dee don't really give him much emotional depth. It was wonderful to have him recount his journey of how he fell in love with Ryo, so we could fall in love with the both of them all over again. And your lemons. What can I say? MORE! I can't wait for your next update!
| Reviewed By: The Review Fairy On: March 31, 2005 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't like this as much as your others, but it's still one of the best fics I've ever cone across. I know your next fic will rock just as hard. There are too few really good FAKE writers; suprising in such a fertile fandom. Ah, well. Your enough to make up for at least ten godawful fanfictions. Good luck with work, and may your computer never be infested with bugs. P.S. I hope you don't get pranked too hard on April Fools Day.
| Title: Con't Review
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 17:52 CST
Comment/Review:
I know the wait'll be worth it! Oh and good luck with making one of ur next series more Dee-centric! Dee is my favorite character and again, I know u won't disappoint. Good luck with ur future works and I am looking foward to them. I'll be waiting!!! Until next time, Ja ne!
| Title: U've Made My Day!
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grumpy Demon, I don't think u can imagine how happy I was to check my email and learn that FAKE IV was out. I was literally grinning in excitment!! I began reading right away until the very end and let me tell u, I was not disappointed. Yes I know that u wanted to write something more Dee-centric, but I'm very glad that u went with this decision. I ended up loving this story as much as the other three! I loved how u made Ryo keep his calm character while Dee was missing, even though deep inside, he worried. I especially loved their reunion. Sex in the shower is always fun/hott!! U know something funny? I was actually just thinking awhile back that I haven't read many Dee/Ryo fanfics with them making love in the shower. Thank you for making that happen! Yes I know I am perverted lol. Now let me tell u something. I felt my heart grow warm when I read that Dee and Bikky got his parents headboard back. Ah how I love the getting the fuzzies inside! And last but not least, I have got to commend u on ur final lemon. Excellent work. One of ur most detailed by far. My face actually flushed! By the way, another thought I had was that u wrote three series and none of them had Dee giving Ryo head. Again, Thank you!! God I'm so perverted...>< But that's how I get with Dee and Ryo. Can ya blame me? ^^ Nice work Grumpy Demon. I can't wait for Act V!! I know it might be awhile til it comes out, but I'll wait!! After all, u write the best FAKE fics out there. I know the wait'll be worth | Reviewed By: Mikage-chan On: March 30, 2005 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, i love these. they keep me so entertained! great job!!
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