| "A Royal Birth: Sequel to His Little Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: September 29, 2005 09:25 EDT
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please forgive me while i hang my head and sob, lol. wow....three more stories...don't you ever get tired? As of right now I don't have any title suggestions for you, but then again I just woke up....literally. let me brain catch up with me then i might have something....until then, best of luck on the writing!
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 16:07 EDT
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Great chapter. but what's going to happen between kagura and inuyasha. you left that one wide open... can't wait for the next installment. and i love the idea of a trilogy. can't wait to see what you'll do with the third story....
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: September 17, 2005 20:08 EDT
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Does Miroku have a tail? I think he'd look so cute with one. You did not mention if he had one.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: September 12, 2005 10:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*wipes tears* you have got to stop making me laugh this hard! i swear it should be illegal to laugh until your sides hurt! nice work, great update(s). my only complaint is the chapters are too short. *pouts* but i understand....you're working on like what? 6 stories at once? lmao!
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 16:58 EDT
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kagome and inuyasha fighting.....what else is new? well the others ever get use to their way of showing affection i wonder. keep up the good work. thanks for the review on my poem. not many have read it yet...every little bit helps :)
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Title: fantastic story
Reviewed By: ewunia On: September 11, 2005 12:34 EDT
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This is fantastic story. One of the best I read on mediaminer and ff.net. I love your ideas and wriing style. All your stories are great. And I hope that when this one is finished you will write the continuation.
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Title: A Royal Birth
Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 11:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this & can hardly wait for more, I have you bookmarked specifically since I'm reading most if not all of your stories.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: September 07, 2005 10:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wooohooo! go kagome! girl power! ok, yes that was kind of lame, but come on...how often do we get to see kagome kick the crap out of people? i look forward, very much i might add, to the second part. ill see if i can get you a pic of shiori's father. i got one around here somewhere.
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Reviewed By: Sango_the_taijiya (nli) On: September 05, 2005 14:15 EDT
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That was a great chapter. Sango finally had her baby. I wonder what she's gonna name her. If you need a name for her, let me know. I know alot of japanese names. Anyway, good job!!! ~Amanda (AKA Sango)
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Title: Can't wait for more.
Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 01:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for more in this story. i've read all of the ones you have written and this one is by far my favorite. Seeing the Ice Prince melt, is priceless. when are you posting another chapter? soon i hope. luv ya.
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Reviewed By: mirokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome! PLease,please UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KuraiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Thanks for the update. That was a great b-day present for me, to update on my birthday and everything. I would love for you to send me an email when you update your chapters if you wouldn't mind! My name is Savanna and my email is Savvy277@msn.com. I absolutely love your story and it has been my favorite for a while now. Good luck and thanks again! Savanna
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Reviewed By: ama_tori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 03:02 EDT
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Hmm... my computer stopped sending me alerts of your updates *sobs* but i'm all caught up now =^^= *gasps* I'm signed in!! {horror!}
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Title: I LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 23:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter and thanks for getting over your writers block. I am glad that things seem to have been explained better to both Toga and Sesshomaru how Kagome is feeling. I do hope that Kagome will get past the hurt and really sit down and have a talk with her mate and her father about how she is feeling it isn't good to keep all those emotions bottled up. Thank you for a glimpse within the relationship of Inuyasha and Kagura. Also thanks for the update on Sango and Miroku and for Kashu her mate and Souta. I don't know how long Kagome will be staying in her room though. I think that she will still be mad at Sesshomaru and feel quite embarrased about what has happened though I really think that she will need some time to get over the initial shock first. I hope that everything works out for her. I really think that she needs the support of her mate, Inuyasha, Toga, her mother and brother the most right now. Also could you please let us know if she is carrying a boy or a girl sometime soon. I hope that the next child is also full youkai too and even if it is a hanyou it doesn't matter as long as the baby is healthy. Although with her miko powers flaring when Sesshomaru pissed her off does that mean it affected the child she carries in any way. I hope not. She would never forgive herself if it did. I await your next update. Thank you very much.
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Reviewed By: Ice Princesss On: August 08, 2005 21:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic it is rilly Enjojable pleas keep going.
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