| "A Royal Birth: Sequel to His Little Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: July 03, 2005 20:04 EDT
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OMFG!!! that's soo sad! sure, killing maika was cruel, but doing that to yashie? that was downright evil!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! :D it's almost like a soap opra... ya know, some1 dieing, someone comming back from the dead, some one raising some1 elses chiled, someone trying to get some1 to kill someone else... lol... i love it!
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Reviewed By: Keisha On: July 03, 2005 19:12 EDT
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aww popr Inuyasha! good chapter, you actually had me feeling sad for him.
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Title: Sad Chapter
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara On: July 03, 2005 18:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is a good one although I have to wonder if Inuyasha really believes that he is worthless. Please make sure that he is safe that either Toga or Kagome or both will go out and look for him. He shouldn't be alone and have to fan for himself like that not with his family that is there to help him. Kagome will probably take care of his daughter regardless but I think that she would rather have Inuyasha there to help her and she will become his strength and support. I really think that is what he needs right now. Please continue this story still intrigues me and keeps my imagination going. Thanks.
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Title: Great Chapter
Reviewed By: seeme4real [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 02:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter alot. I feel bad for Souta and Inuyasha. Although I am curious to see how Toga will react to all that is going on with Kagome. I think that Kagome would be a great foster mom to Inuyasha's little girl. Although I hope that Sesshomaru is going to support Kagome's decisions when it comes to Inuyasha's little girl. I would like to see the reaction on both Kashu and Kagome's faces with the news of the death of her father & grandfather. I just hope that Souta will stay in the feudal era with his family where he should belong. I also think that Toga will play a big role as far as the father figure for both Kagome and Souta as well as for his sons too. All the chapters have been heartwarming to see the entire family together. I hope that they find Maito soon because he seems to be looking for help with other lords and lands. We'll just have to see how all of that will play out. Please keep writing and updating as soon as you can. Thank you very much for this story. My imagination has been soaring wildly with each chapter that you add. I hope that somewhere in this sequel you might be able to add Kagome's being an inuyoukai somewhere. But if not that's OK.
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Reviewed By: Mr. Chaos On: July 02, 2005 23:57 EDT
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wow. Just wow. THough it does feel really cheap to kill off Inuyasha's mate (and Sesshomaru's sword? That could bring er bakc to life with ease), it was still powerful.
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Reviewed By: ama_tori*nsi* On: June 30, 2005 13:34 EDT
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ready everybody? 1, 2, 3! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Enzeru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 10:30 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, this chapter was great, I feel so sorry for inu, he really seems confused. I like this fan fic alot. I'ts as great as 'is little girl' Wich is one of the best fan fics I've read. I think the plot is very creative. And te fact that you have included kagomes mom in that era is something I haven't seen before, (well of the ones I've read anyway.) But I miss souta. Can't wait for next update... Bye bye
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Reviewed By: Keisha On: June 30, 2005 10:08 EDT
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great chapter....awww i feel so bad for Inuyasha :(
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Title: I LOVE IT!!!!
Reviewed By: mimi kawabura On: June 30, 2005 01:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story. I hope that you explore more into the characters. The adding of their father has just touched my heart so much. I hope that you can update this story soon. As I wait for each update on all of your stories. I am rather fond of your writing style and the way you seem to keep my imagination going strong. Please update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: June 16, 2005 21:53 EDT
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omfg!! that was sooo awesome!!! this is like, the 2nd fic i've read that we've found out what happened with kagome's father!!! YAY!!!! i need more fics like this!!
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 12:37 EDT
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wow that was so touching (as i wipe tears off my face) I love your story both of them. I cried with both Inu and Kag story. Kagome story touched the most because that happend to me with my mom and it brings back memories. I was 17 when she died 19 when my father died. It hit me harder with my mom then with my dad because I didn't know him very well. My mom and dad divorce when I was 3 and I was rasied by my mom not knowing he was still alive until she pass away. Anyways I love your story keep up with the good work and I can't wait until the next chapter. Sorry for this long sad story but thank you for putting up me love ya
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 02:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cry's for InuYasha*
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: June 12, 2005 01:55 EDT
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! t'was very kawaii!!!!!! teehee, and just a little fluff mixed up in there too... ^^ keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 19:47 EDT
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Your doing great. I loved this. Like the change Baby Girl goes through. And leave it to Inuyasha to teach new words. Later.
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Reviewed By: Keisha On: June 09, 2005 00:04 EDT
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im starting to really get sucked into the story now. update ASAP!
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