| "A Royal Birth: Sequel to His Little Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: mew_inchigo On: August 03, 2005 12:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i got very confused about who mated who???, butn the story was very nice.
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter. At least now I can understand how much Kagura will be coming into Inuyasha's life. Although Inuyasha is still very protective of Kagome and that's a good thing too. What a wonderful surprise with Toga and Souta? I think that makes for an interesting addition to your story. Although I wonder what is going to happen now that Souta is an inuyoukai that bears Togas crests. I think things will be getting much more interesting with the visiting Royals there too. I do hope that Lord Mitsunaro's mate gets to spend some time with Kagome despite the fact that she is on Bed Rest until further notice being that it will probably drive her absolutely nuts. It would also be good to have Kagura and Kanna have a visit with her and the pups too. Also don't forget Sango and Miroku too. There seems to be a little twist with each additional chapter that you put out and it has me beaming and waiting for more. I await your next update. Thank you so much.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW 2 chapters this time. I'm very impressed. I like the fact that Kagome considers Kagura & Kanna her friends and I am sure that they will be there for her. Sango & Miroku's change into inuyoukai was a very interesting addition to the story. Thank you for exploring the exhaustion theory with Kagome as we all know that with 5 pups to care for it can be hectic on any woman indeed and with her being pregnant with yet another pup can take it's toll on her form. The addition of the visiting lord and his mate and their children will probably help Kagome if his mate could have some time to talk with her and help her to see that she is not alone and that when she needs help that it's OK to ask for it. I hope that now Sesshomaru will have a better understanding of his mates condition and will personally so to it that she receives the necessary care that she needs and support and contentment. Let's not forget Toga and Inuyasha and the role that they will play into all of this. I am greatful for the little visit with Souta but what happened to him after Kagome took her bath. I hope that Kagura can handle both Rin and Shippou as I think that she will make a very good mother one day. I hope that Kagome gets the rest that she really needs because it will become much harder on her as the pregnancy with this new pup goes on. I await your next update and thanks for making my weekend absolutely wonderful. Thanks again.
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Title: GOOD
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter. With Kagome's daughter waking up a youkai and Kouga bringing her back to her mother. Then the return of the other pups with the exception of Rin and Shippou, and now Kagome knows that she is pregnant again. What will happen next and when will she find out about Kagura and Kanna staying at the castle and how will she react? Also what is happening with Souta? We haven't heard of him in awhile. Although I can't wait to hear what Sango and Kagome will be talking about when they relax in the hot springs. And how will Koga and Ginta take the news of Kagura and Kanna being there too. Oh what will happen with Inuyasha and Kagura I'm curious about that entaglement. And I hope that Toga will be able to help Sota get through all that he has been through. Noone yet knows of the passing of their father and grandfather from the other era. Well keep writing. I await your next update. Thanks again.
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: Rock LobsterCA On: July 19, 2005 02:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good. I couldn't stop reading it, addicting(well for me it was). a little weird at times, but good. (two thumbs up) =D
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Title: Overjoyed
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 01:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stories bring the brightest smiles to my face. Please continue your writing you have inspired me so much. Thank you again.
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Title: Overjoyed
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 01:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter alot. It answered some of my previous questions that I asked. Thank you very much. This chapter I found very settling knowing that Kagome would be alright and that Toga would remain in the story and play it out until the very end. It makes my heart soar high just knowing that. Although I wonder what both Hana and Izayoi meant by both Kagome's mates. I hope that Sess and Inuyasha wake up and find that Kagome is alright and just resting although I have a feeling that Sess will know that she is pregnant once again and what will he do about that? With Kagura and Kanna staying at the castle also I wonder how that will play into the story. I think that things will become a little bit more interesting with the new visitors. Although I hope that Kagome can get to know both Kagura and Kanna better. I think that they would make great friends. And with both Kagome and Sango being pregnant I can just imagine what the castle will be like. I also hope that Souta will come out of his trance that he is in so wrapped up within his own mind that isn't good for somoeone so young as him. I hope that everything works out for him too. And just how protective will Toga, Sess, and Inuyasha be with this newest pregnancy of Kagome's will it be a full youkai or another hanyou? That I guess I'll have to wait to see and find out. This story is getting much more interesting by the moment. I await your next update. Please keep writing. Your stories bring the brightest smiles to m |
Title: WOW
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 01:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter. Kagome finally showed her true inu form to Toga and thanks for that picture perfect view. Kagome fought hard to get to her friend and she was very protective of her and Inuyasha both the same. I swear you keep me quite entertained as this story progresses. What more surprises do you have in mind? I hope that Kagomes children will be alright while she heals herself from the fight that she has had to endure. Although I think that Kouga will be coming back with the children and not liking the way Kagome will be looking at all. Though I think that Sess Toga and Inuyasha should go and get them before Koga comes with them because Ayame just had their baby not too long ago. I guess I am now wondering what will happen to Toga now that Maito and Loki have been purified. I'm sure that Kagome will need to heal for awhile but I'm also sure that she will not leave her pups attended to for too long I hope. Please keep Toga in this fanfic as long as you can. He is the father of Inuyasha and Sesshomaru and I hope that he will still have a need in this story. I would hate to see him leave just yet. They might need him to fight Naraku. And what will Naraku do now that his bed partner Shrika is gone. And why have Kagura and Kanna turned up. How is Sango Miroku & Kilala doing too. Anyways I await your next update. Please keep writing this story is really good.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 23:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There in troble!! RIP Grandmother and Brother(sorry I forgot the names)!!
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Title: Heartwarming
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara On: July 07, 2005 17:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have grown very fond of this story and await your next update. This chapter was so heartwarming and endearing with Kouga helping Kagome get through her inability to heal the wound from being raped then Inuyasha coming back to life and being found by her mate and her mates father. Although the part with Ayame losing one of her babies made and Inuyasha finally being able to let it all out made me cry. Although I am intrigued with the new name of Sess's son but I think he just jinxed himself on that one. I am glad that they are all together again. I really hope that LOKI gets hers and good. There was no reason to do that to Kagome her heart is pure and wild all the same. But she loves most of all she really loves. I await your next update until then THANKS FOR MAKING MY DAY BRIGHTER AND SHINIER AND HAPPY!!!
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Reviewed By: ama_tori*nsi* On: July 06, 2005 20:57 EDT
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DUNDUNDUN!!! *wipes sweat* phew, for a second there i thought the story was over... that would be sad... btw, will you be doing a sequil for Someone To Watch Over Me?
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 02:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok time to kill Sessy's gradmother!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: snowecat29 On: July 05, 2005 21:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great story, but you --SHUDDER-- named the girl Sakura. Everyone and their grandmother names the female baby Sakura. PLEASE don't call the male Taro, or an Inu-something. Be original, or find a japanese baby-name site and use something from there.
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Title: Sad Chapter
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara On: July 05, 2005 18:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why would someone want to hurt Kagome like that? She has a big heart and is always tending to everyone. What will Sesshomaru do without his mate? And how will Toga deal with Sess's grandmother. Is Inuyasha going to be OK? How will he react when he sees Kagome with bruises and hurt none the less? Will he make her feel like she's needed by him and will he raise his daughter with her and Sess? I hope that it gets better for both of them. They really need eachother right now and I highly doubt that Inuyasha will allow anyone to hurt Kagome or the children including his own. Will Sess and Toga come for Kagome the children and Inuyasha? I hope that the next chapter is even more eventful leaving me with promises of hope and wonder. Thanks. This story is really something. I am enjoying the reading and also can't await your next update.
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: July 05, 2005 16:47 EDT
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DAMN EVIL BITCH LOKI!!!! *stabs loki*
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