| "Wings of a Tenshi" Reviews/Comments [ 104 ] |
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Reviewed By: KEdakumi On: July 09, 2009 07:44 CDT
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You have a decent story happening, despite many of the characters being OOC. My only complaint is the use of modern language, modern western language, in the Feudal Japanese era. It paints a picture of Kagome coming from the US rather then Japan then that completely ruins the reasoning behind why she's in the Feudal era. Other then some miner typos (ie: using 'were' instead of 'where') It is a good story and I can't wait to keep reading it.
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Reviewed By: kjopann On: January 15, 2009 15:59 CST
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its gud butthe language is liker too mordern and everyone is way out of character
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Title: Kasheka is in Love with this story
Reviewed By: Kasheka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 08:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is like oh , my god sweet you just have to continue it. I just simple must know how i ends.
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Title: OMG PLEASE UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Cutipie389512 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG THIS IS LIKE THE BEST SOTRY EVER PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! IM BEGGING YOU UPDATE SOON THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY PLEASE DONT LEAV USE HANGING AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!I SWEAR ITS AWSOME!
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Title: PLEASE!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever a.k.a Angel[I am to lazy to sign in! lol!] On: April 15, 2008 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM STILL WAITING. waiting waiting. waiting.. waiting... waiting.... waiting..... waiting...... waiting....... waiting........ waiting......... waiting.......... I AM STILL WAITING..GIVE ME CHAPPY!!!!! lol! I am serious though. If you don't update soon I think That I will die!!!!!!
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Title: Sorrow
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa T-T...why...why....why............My heart is being torn form its resting place......T-T...I don't know why but I there is alot of the story I know I'm missing its not fare, I think its started on chapter 17 al the way up to the chapter right befor the end, I didn't get to read about the rest of the time Kagome was with Kane, and what Sesshoumaru was going to do about it, or how exactly he got his memory wiped, I didn't get to see when Inuyasha got to the castle he was on his way and then next thing I know he's dancing in the ball room, I didn't get to see how and why the spirets of Sesshoumaru's parents where fighting each other.....there is soooooooooooo much I know I missed and I don't know why its not in the chapters but it realy breakes my heart I really was hopeing it would make sence cause this story is really great it make my heart freak out and now I have to guess what happened in parts that are missing I really wish I could read the rest of thoughs chapters.....T-T....so sad for me......*pout*............................P.s....I like this story................Nyuka.................Meow
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Reviewed By: Isura On: November 04, 2007 09:46 CST
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Hey u were writing such a good story that I read it twice over.So keep up the gud work.Another thing is that dont u think u will get more readers and reviewers if u update faster.No offence or anything u really update very slowly and thats why ur readers tend to lose interest.Anyways its turning out to be a lovely story so keep up the gud work, u really one of my few favrite fanfic writers.
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Reviewed By: beccansnc [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 19:13 CDT
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Oh my! This is wonderful. Please you've gotta update soon. I need my Kag/Sess fix... *eye twitches* Love your story. ^^
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: inuyasha lov3r [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! The lemon was really good! Very descriptive. I love how you describe the kimono. They wound so pretty i can almost see them! *sighs* Was this your first story if so WOW!!! Please update soon!!!!
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Title: please!
Reviewed By: Rachel 585 On: September 03, 2007 15:50 CDT
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please ohh please write the next chapie maybey even finishing it! seriously i am diying to know if the lord of the fluff gets his memory back! Kags makes such a good mate!please ohohohohohohohoho! please please finish! im am begging on my knees!
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Title: cool!
Reviewed By: iNUYTAI! On: September 03, 2007 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story is beyond good please continue writting i want to hear what happens in fluffmeisters room with kagome!
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Title: OMFG!
Reviewed By: Phoebe On: September 03, 2007 15:46 CDT
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YOU ARE THE BEST! i cant believe you wrote this it seems like it should be in a book and i not joking!pleses oh dear god finish this soon so fluffy-sama wont kill you!
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Title: prblems
Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 11:48 CDT
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i haven't finished reading yet (and your story is great so far by the way!), but i know why the chappy "losing opportunities" cuts out after "Tokei turned towards the" it's because you had 'one quarter' sign, mediaminer can't put those. i had the exact same problem when i went to put 'three quarters' so you should put that sign in words and re post the chapter so people don't have to switch back and forth from mediaminer to fanfiction all the time. thanks!
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Reviewed By: Priestessofthe SabbathofDeath [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. Wow! It's kinda like Beauty and the Beast, but it is still very original! I hope you keep writting it, i really would like to see Kagome and Sesshomaru become mates!
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Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 14:14 CDT
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Kool, thanxs for that. Almost anything I put in this fanfic though, is mess around. It's a family thing, we've got more german in us than anything else. Nodbody else took offense to it, I don't expect you to. :0) Oh well, what's said is said. Jokes are jokes, no harm taken. :0)
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