| "Farewell Baka" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 12:55 CST
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Sad but excellent, well written
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: Watercurrent700 On: September 13, 2005 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is probably the saddest and most enjoyable DBZ fanfic i have ever read. It really touches you to think anyone like vegeta could like Goku that much. The way you described it was deffinetly wonderful. I give it an A+ for sure!!
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Reviewed By: Katherine On: July 13, 2005 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word: beautiful. it was...damn it made me cry lol. a diffrent side of vegeta that we never see but i think its there. ur an awesome writer
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Reviewed By: GutterBall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful stuff. The ol' "don't know whatcha got 'til it's gone" jones can catch even the wary offguard. It's good to see that even Vegeta can eventually look past what initially annoyed him beyond reason and see what was there all along. Again, beautiful stuff.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 16:41 CDT
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I read Bardockgurls reccomendation of this fic and thought I read that. I realized that I hadn't left you a review. I'm usually much better than that. I love this opiece. its well written an poingnant. I liked the line about vegeta not feeling like flying. it sumed up his entire mood at the time. I also liked the way the character developed despite the length of the fic. I look forward to reading more from you. Thank YOu for writing this. -El-
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: June 18, 2005 08:43 CDT
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oh that was so good... well written piece... You did an awesome job I love the insight into vegeta... wow... wonderful
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 08:39 CDT
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I have tears in my eyes. My rational brain was reading through this (on Bardockgurl's recommendation--she never fails to rec a good fic) and I was think "yes, yes, this is good, good sentence structure, movement, insight..." Then just... Waaaaaaaah! I wish I could write something useful or intelligent, but I just want to thank you for showing us this Vegeta!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 04:22 CDT
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*Tears up* That was beautiful! Not only was it an excellent peek into Vegeta's mind, it was so well written. Wonderfully worded... I wish I could think of something more eloquent to say - but at the moment I can't. You've given us a wonderfully moving story here - Thank you.
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: chicharu On: June 16, 2005 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow ! this is sooo beautiful , i've never read something like this,. It makes me peacefull inside , and silent .. woow !! really great.. !! WORDS CAN'T DISCRIBE
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: russell On: June 14, 2005 15:32 CDT
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incredable.... just the way that you showed the way that vegeta had felt for a while, but had no way or meaning to express them. well done
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 01:30 CDT
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Very well written! I loved how you explored his thought processes and allowed him to feel his emotions without becoming sappy. You made such a plausable story for the end of GT and I am supremely impressed! Beautifuly done!
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