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| "The Journey to the City of Endless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 281 ] | | Pages (19): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 › » ] | Title: goood!
Reviewed By: EmilyHigurashi On: March 29, 2006 19:28 PST
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I'm really glad about the approach you are taking toward Sessh/Rin!! I agree with it completely - at this point, i don't think they have a father/daughter relationship persay (sp?) but i definetely think they love each other a lot and you convey that love really well in your writing. I also like the idea of a romantic relationship when she is older, but for now i am content with their caring bond. I like your approach toward age too - it's not really an issue lol. I didn't think it would be, I was just wondering because some fanfic writers make the age differences really whacked and they make sessh like 70 and rin like 6 lol. anyway. great chapter! I look forward to the rest!!
| Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen On: March 27, 2006 09:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant!! I have said this before elsewhere, I will say it here, this story is epic, and daring in the crossover, and thus far a delightful read. The awards have been earned, and are well deserved. It hasn't been to my disadvantage to have not read Eddings yet, and that says so very much. The fact that I have laughed out loud and alternately found tears in my eyes, also makes my point, I believe. I understand how juggling studies and the dance with muse can be, I you have my utmost respect and admiration. (can't wait to hear Sess's self talk about the "shop situation"!) I think InuYasha is the kind of guy to buy a vacuum for his woman on her birthday... ya think? what a baka! lol... Keep up the fabulous work, Far!!
| Reviewed By: chanda (nsi) On: March 27, 2006 08:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, I had two chapters to catch up with. Loved the shopping, you picked very good stores, I even took the time to check out those websites. Well, lets just say very Nice! Sorry I never got to answer you, with Silk. I don't know why I just assumed because he was a spy, but thank you for reassuring me he wasn't going to double cross them..lol. Wonderful update, I await your next chapter. Chanda
| Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 07:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Zelix! I remember reading some of this when you were posting on AFF. Chapter One is great. A sick Rin, a humiliated Sesshoumaru, cool new characters, and at the end (LOL), Inuyasha arrives on the scene. How much worse could it get for Sesshoumaru!? Well written. As always, your talent at description is to envy. I love that there is plenty going on and, oh how much do I love cliffies from authors that I know will update. As always, great job.---Snow
| Reviewed By: SesshomaruX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 20:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i likes dis very good. 10/10 keep going wit it DemoticGangsta
| Reviewed By: Emily Higurashi On: March 08, 2006 19:46 PST
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Awwwwwww poor inuyasha and his sensitive doggie nose!!!! That part was adorable. But, back on subject, i just have one question for you - is this going to turn into a Sessh/Rin pairing?! I dunno...it's a bit strange, but it certainly does make things more interesting, doesn't it? lol And also, at this point do you know how you are going to relate Sesshoumaru's demon age on a scale to how fast humans age? just wondering.
| Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 18:56 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor inu, all those smells, i wonder what he and Durnik have planed for rin...i loved this chapters, then again, i love all of them. * gives snickerdoodle* now *gets on knees and bows down* PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON oh great master of fanfics
| Reviewed By: New Fan On: March 08, 2006 17:46 PST
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I enjoyed the chapter.It seems that Kagome see something between Rin and Sess. I wonder if she will tell Inuyasha or ask him about the "mine" dialogue of Sess in a indirect way. In another words will Kag ask Inuyasha in a roundabout way of the inu male character when it comes to taking a mate? Will the next chapter show Sess with Rin after the incident at the shop? Update soon.
| Reviewed By: New Fan On: March 08, 2006 17:46 PST
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I enjoyed the chapter.It seems that Kagome see something between Rin and Sess. I wonder if she will tell Inuyasha or ask him about the "mine" dialogue of Sess in a indirect way. In another words will Kag ask Inuyasha in a roundabout way of the inu male character when it comes to taking a mate? Will the next chapter show Sess with Rin after the incident at the shop? Update soon.
| Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 07:52 PST
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I enjoyed the shopping but maybe I'm not visualizing the screen and sculpture very well because they strike me as very impractical for people who, currently, are nomads.
| Title: We need more!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 18:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is still one of my very favorite fics - and Oh my! Sesshomaru has gotten just a bit possesive, hasn't he? I keep waiting patiently for the next chapter. However, with the technical problems they are having at AFF, I wish you wouldn't wait so long (whine). Congratulations on your first place! You certainly deserved it. I hope you do well in the Best of 2005 - I know I've already placed my vote.
| Title: This is very good
Reviewed By: Charmander [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 17:08 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to say that this story is excellent. I do love the epic style.
| Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 06:14 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
congrats, ill vote, when i find out how to vote. -_-;;....whatever cookie you want.
| Title: WOOOOW
Reviewed By: Emily Higurashi On: February 21, 2006 21:37 PST
Comment/Review:
Hey, FarAwayEyes! I haven't been able to read the fic in a while - my computer went all whacko, long story - anyway I just read the latest chapter and I am LOVING all this protective, nuzzling stuff between Sesshy and Rin! Oh, it's adorable!!!! Sesshy sounds like my older brother with all that protective stuff and trying to kill the boy lol! You're a very good writer, btw - I was, like, gagging while reading about the boy lol Anyway keep up the good work! Great Chapter
| Reviewed By: Susy On: February 06, 2006 11:21 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi there! I ain't used to write reviews because I'm very lazy, but I decided that you're worth the work. I read more than 40 chapters in a sit. Well, actually, it took me several days, but I read them. I really enjoy your story, I think it's really original, basically because I'm not familiarized with the other show, book or whatever it is that you're using to do the crossover, although that many estrange names confuse me very much. It took me around five chapters to realize that Belgarath, the old wolf and Polgara's father was the same person. I like your fic very much, but It seems to me that Sesshomaru is very OOC, (surely you've been told that all ready) but it's really sweet to see him so affectionate towards Rin. speaking of which, as if wasn't enough for her to being a wizard and the start of her periods, now you put over her shoulders the biggest problem that women have been facing from the beginning of life: men. Although it's obvious that she's not going to be as affected as her lord will. Well, nobody told the demon lord that raising a girl was going to be a walk in the park. Right? And two observation about InuYasha. I believe that I read in one of the chapters that you said that InuYasha is 70 years old, but I've understood that the boy is almost 200, since he had around 150 years when he met Kikyo plus the 50 years that he spend sealed in the tree. Besides, I'm not comfortable with the idea that he's killed some humans. True, they deserved it. But the point is that the half demon avoids at all cost to kill humans, because as Totosai said once, to assassinate humans is something vile. And what is worse, Kagome has also killed someone, and that is impossible to understand. To vanish youkais is a thing, to kill a man is totally different. But I guess you know what you're doing. I'd like to see you include Kouga at some point, it would be hilarious to see the reaction of both rivals with Kagome's new condition. Ok. I'm in the ride and I'm going to get to the end of the journey with you. You trapped me from the very beginning and it's been terrific to follow the story. I don't think that I'll review again, because as I said at the beginning, I'm lazy and in addition to that English is not my native language and it becomes difficult to give me to understand (excuse me the spelling and grammar mistakes) but know this: YOU ROCK
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