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Reviewed By: candace On: March 31, 2006 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering when amaya (sp?) would make her next apperance. My only idea so far is that if naraku lost inuyasha and the jewel shard and was pissed about it it makes sense (since this is the kind of person he is) that he would use the ningens in his dungeon to bring inuyasha back into his control. or at least thats what naraku thinks but more than most likly it would make inuyasha snap in a way that would take naraku down b/c of his blind rage.. thats really the only idea I had. but i think that amaya should die in the end! A beautiful tragic ending for a cool char. It seems almost fitting that she would give up her life so that others would live.. she just seems like that kind of char. to me.
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 07:48 CST
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This is a very unique story. I am really intreaged by it. I can't wait to see what happend next. I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter! I CAN'T BELIEVE you haven't had more reviews!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 23:27 CST
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really good! now i cna sleep b/c i had my fix =) I am so curious to see how this plays out, i keep wondering what direction it will go, i have ideas of where it may go but i will jsut have ot wait and see what you write to see if i am right or if i ma just smoking something!!! i'll check back later for the next update!
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Title: Chained huh?
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: March 30, 2006 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fic all day long. And I must say, I like what I have read... I'll be looking into the others. Update soon. By the way, I really enjoyed the part where the brothers actually get along. Sesshomaru has this whole thing about him being the only one to kill InuYasha. Are you going to revive InuTaisho? Hehehe. Him in that final battle would be kinda cool. Oh, well. T/PioI.
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Title: Cool Story!!!!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!! You've got a great story going on here. By the way, either meaning for Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's father's title is good. Some people have said that his true name is Toga. Can't wait for your next update!! ^_^
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Title: www.cherrykosetsu.moon-star.org
Reviewed By: Elena Cala On: March 29, 2006 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm candace adn i are the same person, i was trying to write a review and i thought it didn't go through so i signed up so i could write the review only to discover it had taken it lol!! I don't think its OOC for ses. at all. I have noticed in the series even that he has changed since the begginging, become softer somehow. I think this fits very well and it was bound to happen, b/c the confrontations couldn't/wouldn't keep going. That much is obvious just from the anime. Great job i really need another fix soon lol so pls keep writing cause i might go into withdrawls if you don't.
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange On: March 29, 2006 14:24 CST
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I see your point, but what can I say, I'm a bishounen/ Sesshomaru fan! Thank you for updating, and anwering my question! ........-Lady Orange P.S. I'm glad that you don't misspell anything, I really can't stand it when people write a fanfic almost entirely in web-speak. Bye!
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Reviewed By: dancin4inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 22:34 CST
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Lol, I put the "loose" thing in because you always use it incorrectly. Hahaha, not just as a random fact! And you did it again in this chapter!! Grr! You said "loosing" instead of "losing." (It's really not that important, I just have this little pet peeve with using the wrong form of a word.) But anyway, good chapter, can't wait to hear more. The ooc isn't all that terrible, both characters have reasons to be slightly out of sorts and therefore ooc. Yay! Update as soon as you can!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is a total page turner and I haven't been able to sleep w/o reading it and now i am out of pages. please update soon as i ma now addicted and need my daily fix and to see how this plays out!!
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Reviewed By: candace On: March 28, 2006 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a good story i haven't been able to sleep until i have read each and every word on every page! Please write mroe soon as I am totally addicted adn must know how it all plays out!
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Reviewed By: dancin4inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 10:55 CST
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Hey, I have been reading your story for a while now, but never actually reviewed. I love your style of writing, and I love the story... you really understand how to develop a story and leave your readers hanging. Please continue to write, I can't wait for the next update! One thing- when you misplace something, you lose it, not loose it. "Loose" is what your tooth is when you're eight, or what a girl is when she sleeps around.
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Reviewed By: inuyashasramen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 14:42 CST
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Keep on going! It's great so far. I so knew Sesshoumaru wasn't going to be happy when Inuyasha showed up. Anyways I love it the story and I really want you to keep it up.
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Title: Chapter 40
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snickers* I knew that Sess wouldn't be happy. I'm surprised that the sorceress was even able to manipulate him into taking Inuyasha. Maybe he does feel a smidgen of guilt, ne? Hehe. Loved the chapter. Can't wait to see him trying to pry information from a hanyou that could barely remember his name just a few days before. LOL I anxiously await the next chapter. Snow
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Title: Chappie 39
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love the fire horses even more than I did before. Too cool. And they saved Inuyasha! I'm glad that he is regaining some of his usual characteristics. Now to see just what Sesshoumaru thinks of this whole scene. Oh, I can just imagine him trying to kill both Inuyasha and the witch! Off to the next chappie! Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, to my eternal shame, I have been a bad reader for not reviewing. Sometimes, I am not enamoured with a fic until something that I consider very exciting happens. However, I just wanted to let you know that this is a very well written fic and I have especially enjoyed the last few chapters. I was touched by Inu's predicament. Kikyou is just plain creepy. Can't stand her. Playing on everyone's fondness of Miroku was a great idea. I am curious about Naraku's attachment to Inuyasha. Perhaps I missed that explanation. Amaya is an awesome character. I don't typically read author's notes, so I don't know if she is an OC. If so, you've done an excellent job. I am not surprised that Sesshoumaru accepted his arm as it didn't appear to have been misused. I believe that he didn't accept it in the movie because it was being used by he spectre of the man involved in his father's death. It was tainted. The circumstances are different here. I don't usually read fics that aren't rated X. Actually, I never do, but this one caught my interest. Um, hope I'm not getting confused about the rating. Anyways, what can I say? This gets more intriguing by the chapter! Great job! Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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