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| "Chained" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] | | Pages (10): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Title: someday
Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 09:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story. I hope one day you do eventually finish this fic. It would be a shame if it is not completed. It feels like it's about to reach the climax. I want read what happens to Inu and Kags when they enter Kag's time and all sorts of things.
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mm.org hasn't been notifying me when things have been updated. I know that you had wanted help with plotting or something. I'd need to go back and read through, but if you emailed me where it is that you want to take this fic, or whatever, I'll help. ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! I have been reading back over your fic and found that the big bad dude horse was the one that came to carry Kaede to that mysterious dark character. I couldn't keep their names straight the first time. I also wanted to tell you, if I hadn't before, that the scene with the saimyousho flying over Sesshoumaru's castle brought tears to my eyes and a lump in my throat. I probably had alligator tears running down my eyes the first time that I read it. Anywho, love the story, back to reading and will email you soon. ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm, you said something about dropping suggestions. I may not be online for awhile, but I would be happy to help you out if we could discuss what you are aiming for. ^_^ Snow sparkling_snowfall on hotmail IM.
| Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Kiki33 On: December 31, 2006 16:29 CST
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Your story is really great, and I love the plot. Your definitely one of my favorite authors. Hope you haven't forgotten this story, because you have tons of devoted fans just waiting for a new chapter. Please, please update. I've been waiting for months! I guess I can't force you to continue though.... oh well. I've done my part by reveiwing, now hopefully you'll do your part by updating. Sincerely, Kiki33
| Reviewed By: sally85 On: August 16, 2006 01:13 CDT
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oh. Inuyasha. Poor guy!
| Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 00:02 CDT
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SHIT!!!!!!!!! Sorry that went three times!!! -flexes mouse hitting fingers sheepishly-... well I was getting pissed off that it wasn't loading after I tried three times, so... (thinks: anger management!!) O_O ANYWAY, thanks! Good chapter, I'm sorry! ~iuh
| Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 00:00 CDT
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YOU ARE BACK! hah, and lard. TO HELL WITH IT!! Yay! [I was saying something similar to my sister earlier (she was stalking around talking about her teeth and brushing and making someone like her O_O); then I looked and there was a new chapter, potentially with a similar name, and... yeah. Well totally different topic, but yay!] I like Miroku and Sango... hmm... well, chapters/stories about them always bring up this one episode where at the very end, Miroku is sitting w/ Sango (sorry I don't remember the number and am too lazy to go get it =D), and he says, "Don't worry, Lady Sango, I will not caress your bottom"... okay, sorry, had to share story. WELL I still think they're a good couple. Monk and a killer, who woulda thought? Rumiko! Muahahaha! So... well, I do tend to jump around in my topics. I like most "couplings" (funny word, meh... too tired to figure out what I myself mean...), except the dumb generic ones. The normal generic ones can be okay (Inuyasha and Kagome) but I don't like some of the other ones (Sesshomaru and Kagome... blehh! X_X). And, I guess I'm just AU-liking (and borderline-that-I-passed-some-time-ago insanity) enough to like yaoi. SOOO... I bet you're just SWOONING in all this un-needed personal information!! =D And, well, about the insanity... well, as I wrote for What Matters the Most, just got out of the ward! I'm free at last! And you're not alone... giddy hyper sleepy syndrome is a common trait in, uh, lots of people...? I'm confusing myself. 2.30 is a good time to go to sleep, when you're not camping and smelling like fire ^_x. FIX=GOOD!~____insert usere here
| Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 00:00 CDT
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YOU ARE BACK! hah, and lard. TO HELL WITH IT!! Yay! [I was saying something similar to my sister earlier (she was stalking around talking about her teeth and brushing and making someone like her O_O); then I looked and there was a new chapter, potentially with a similar name, and... yeah. Well totally different topic, but yay!] I like Miroku and Sango... hmm... well, chapters/stories about them always bring up this one episode where at the very end, Miroku is sitting w/ Sango (sorry I don't remember the number and am too lazy to go get it =D), and he says, "Don't worry, Lady Sango, I will not caress your bottom"... okay, sorry, had to share story. WELL I still think they're a good couple. Monk and a killer, who woulda thought? Rumiko! Muahahaha! So... well, I do tend to jump around in my topics. I like most "couplings" (funny word, meh... too tired to figure out what I myself mean...), except the dumb generic ones. The normal generic ones can be okay (Inuyasha and Kagome) but I don't like some of the other ones (Sesshomaru and Kagome... blehh! X_X). And, I guess I'm just AU-liking (and borderline-that-I-passed-some-time-ago insanity) enough to like yaoi. SOOO... I bet you're just SWOONING in all this un-needed personal information!! =D And, well, about the insanity... well, as I wrote for What Matters the Most, just got out of the ward! I'm free at last! And you're not alone... giddy hyper sleepy syndrome is a common trait in, uh, lots of people...? I'm confusing myself. 2.30 is a good time to go to sleep, when you're not camping and smelling like fire ^_x. FIX=GOOD!~____insert usere here
| Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 00:00 CDT
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YOU ARE BACK! hah, and lard. TO HELL WITH IT!! Yay! [I was saying something similar to my sister earlier (she was stalking around talking about her teeth and brushing and making someone like her O_O); then I looked and there was a new chapter, potentially with a similar name, and... yeah. Well totally different topic, but yay!] I like Miroku and Sango... hmm... well, chapters/stories about them always bring up this one episode where at the very end, Miroku is sitting w/ Sango (sorry I don't remember the number and am too lazy to go get it =D), and he says, "Don't worry, Lady Sango, I will not caress your bottom"... okay, sorry, had to share story. WELL I still think they're a good couple. Monk and a killer, who woulda thought? Rumiko! Muahahaha! So... well, I do tend to jump around in my topics. I like most "couplings" (funny word, meh... too tired to figure out what I myself mean...), except the dumb generic ones. The normal generic ones can be okay (Inuyasha and Kagome) but I don't like some of the other ones (Sesshomaru and Kagome... blehh! X_X). And, I guess I'm just AU-liking (and borderline-that-I-passed-some-time-ago insanity) enough to like yaoi. SOOO... I bet you're just SWOONING in all this un-needed personal information!! =D And, well, about the insanity... well, as I wrote for What Matters the Most, just got out of the ward! I'm free at last! And you're not alone... giddy hyper sleepy syndrome is a common trait in, uh, lots of people...? I'm confusing myself. 2.30 is a good time to go to sleep, when you're not camping and smelling like fire ^_x. FIX=GOOD!~____insert usere here
| Title: To hell With It....
Reviewed By: Trysted Inu Punishment On: July 31, 2006 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was a good update. LOL. Hmmm. Just don't give up... It's really a good update. Good job. Tryst
| Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 17:23 CDT
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lol, the long awaited chapter update is finally here! well, ok, maybe not so long, compared to SOME, but not to short either ;) ugh, I can't beleive you ended the chpater there though! I thought for sure we were in for some lemony goodness, or at least a little more citrusey than just kissing. *sighs* ah well. I guess I'll just have to wait. though hopefully not as long as before.....:P anyway, it was a good chpater, but really...slow paced, I think. kind of different then I expected but still good. and now I'm really intrigued to find out what's coming next. :D
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's sweet that you gave Miroku and Sango some alone time. You did a really great job with their internal thinking and personalities. It was sad, then hopeful, then 'you go, girl!'. Yeah, like that. Great chapter. Okay, now this action whore needs a fix. Hm, it would be nice to see Kagome's new toys in action. They both need a kick butt session to bring up their sense of ability to defend themselves and to slay the enemy. A test of sorts. What is Sesshoumaru up to while all of this is going on? Is he trying to find allies now? Well, I can't wait for the next chappie. Considering Sango's new attitude, she shouldn't make Miroku wait for anything else. He's waited long enough and they might not make it out of the next battle alive. So, there is the two cents that you asked for. Nice chappie. Snow
| Title: Update
Reviewed By: Kiki33 On: July 28, 2006 13:56 CDT
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Hiiiiiiii!!!!! Now I'm normally a very patient person but this is just gettin' ridiculous. You haven' updated in almost TWO MONTHS! Could you please update soon. I'll reveiw again after summer break just in case your on vacation now. Anyways, hope to see a new chapter soon, Kiki33
| Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 02:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha! thought you could get rid of me with what matters the most, eh? I think somewhere in the beginning chapters you said something about "giddy hyper sleepy" looks... which i most definitely have... (it's two thirty in the morning... and i've been reading this story, again, front to back, since... i'm not sure when but it was a long time, because I have the tendency to over analyze especially when i'm reading... O_O) agh! Your fanfics are too addicting! stop being such a good writer. =P sorry, as I said... hyper, tired, so... if I'm that much from reading, you must be wayyyy more from writing. -salutes you- just W.O.W. you don't cease to amaze me with them writin' skills. you should consider sending some of these stories in to rumiko... doubt she'd not use this story as plans for the fifth movie... sorry, I've been like ranting on the entire time about something barely relevant... well... I suppose you must submit to people like me when you write for open audiences. =D (no regrets, though? hm...)well. fanfiction is REALLY good. can't wait for THE NEXT CHAPTERS! UPDATE!!! (i chose not to bother you while i was reading originally... only to strike now and make you go insane. is it fun?) well... sorry.. lard. well. update soon, i doubt i'm logged in [too, like, blargh to do that, and the computer keeps screwing up like it used to with "what matters the most"]. TWENTY PHALANGES UP! yay! X_x ____insert user here.
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