| "72 Hours" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: hmmm...
Reviewed By: abercrombielvr07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this story was VERY well written. Your grammar and vocabulary are great! :D It's hard to find that anymore amongst fan authors! I just have to say one thing... It all happened really fast. Like, Inuyasha kissed her (right after she puked, btw. EW!) passionatley within the first 24 hours of him knowing that she existed. On the second day of him knowing she existed, he told her he loved her. I'm not flaming I PROMISE! This is a really, really well written story and your descriptions are FLAWLESS!! I could actually picture everything in my head with ease, it's just that, maybe you could've made he be diagnosed a few months before, so that she and Inuyasha could have more time to develop a relationship! But yah, I really enjoyed reading it and the sentimental moments made me smile! This is a really good story, but I think the relationship was a bit off. That's ok though! Poor Kagome needed someone to die with, so that's what you did for her! :D thanks for sharing a really good story! -Abercrombielvr07
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Title: Just...wow
Reviewed By: Akiko516 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 14:46 CST
Comment/Review:
This is one of the few stories that made me cry. I absolutely loved it. Akiko
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is the only story that made me cry!! i really really like it! keep up the really good work!
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Reviewed By: inuyashasramen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sad! I felt like crying after the end, but of course I didn't. It was a lovely story so I gave you a 10 because I thought you deserved it. Great job!
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Reviewed By: xxbritnexx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was wicked sad!!! But i liked it alot.
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