| "When the Cherry Blossoms Bloom" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 02:18 EDT
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Thanks for that, you answered just about all my questions with that chapter. So now I'm waiting for the next one, don't worry if you can't get it up before your trip, but do have fun while your gone =)
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 23:34 EDT
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I had no idea that you had already began the second fic. ^_^ i soo happy. i love it so far and can't wait until your next chapter. I love roy/winry. i can't find any other writter who gets them together as well as you do. ^_^
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Title: BOOHOOOING HERE
Reviewed By: Alaskanbeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 13:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love everything you write about this story, I can't get enough of it. It is nice to see how Winry feels being pg though,I have to admit it will tear me up if her and roy don't get together, not that I don't like the boys but She and Roy need each other...waiting with baited breath for more (daroool daaarool)especialy the sex sick woman I am but you do write that so well. Keep up the fantastic work.
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I honestly admit that I was suprised when I read that Sara was their next guide. Part of me wishes Ed would just get through these trials so he can meet Winry again in real time but at the same time I feel as if Ed doesn't really deserve such an easy out. Your writing is amazing, I hope you have time to update a few chapters soon! Thanks for continuing such a great fic!
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 16:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, your added scenes flowed nicely within the plot of the story. Definitly cutting room floor material! I always get so sad at the end of your chapters because I know I'm going to have to wait to read what happens next! The Roy fighting Bradley/Winry broken necklace scene was wonderful! I loved that, it was saddening yet so perfectly woven into the story! Keep up the great writing, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 01:31 EDT
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Onward, great chapter, that's all to say for now =)
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 16:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter...as always. I'm not sure about this but did you switch tense temporarily somewhere in the middle there...when Ed and Al found out about Huges...maybe It just sounded weird to me or something...anyway, I love that Winry has the power to make Roy promise to return to her. Its just not something Roy as a character would normally do, especially knowing he was going into a dangerous situation with a lot of variables. It was very cute though. I also love that Roy gave her his glove...I know its not a huge gesture or anything but the way you wrote it in gave it so much weight on their relationship and proved (whether or not Ed will admit it) how much Roy really does love Winry, and how much he needs her and wants her to be happy. Overall, beautifully written, I love that Al and Trisha are the attempted voices of reason for Ed at this stage in the game. Its nice to be able to work Trisha into a story when she usually only rarely fits into the plot line. Once again, great job. Keep up the excellent writing!
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 00:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED that chapter. well, i love the whole fanfic but this chap is just... sigh, fab.! haha.. update soon!
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 00:41 EDT
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I love Grannie, she is the best. Yes that was a bit fluffy, but I guess I like fluff since I really enjoyed that chapter. Great work as always =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 00:30 EDT
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good update, it was a bit sappy and I think I want to go cry =)
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Title: OHHHHHH Boy
Reviewed By: Alaskanbeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 19:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, well, well, even in grannys house da boy has no shame(thank god) I can not believe how quickly I read through these chapters, as the story is excellent with the way each character is brought out but also the depth of which Ed can see where he had his change and blew it, and I agree with Al all he should care about is Wnry's happiness..we will see, but the second reason I fly through these chapters is because I am a sick a (SICK WOMAN I tell ya) hoping for more hot sex. The way this writer writes these scenes makes me wish I could be 17 again *ohhhh sigh* and find a man like Mustang...ohhhhhhhh baby. Again you have given a wonderful addition to this story and can hardly wait for the next one.
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Title: OHHHHHHHHHH CHRIST I CAN'T STAND IT
Reviewed By: Alaskanbeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG I can barely stand this, I could not put down the first story until it was finished(took me 2 days and nights mind you) and now this update, God Almighty there is only so much a woman can take I tell ya. Part of my heart wants Winry to be with Roy(da boy is to damn hot) and the other wants it to be Ed..it is killing me to wait to find out. You are one damn good writer I can't even begin to tell you, you just make the reader want more and more. Which I for one hope you do give more and more. Thanks for this wonderful ride :O} I am surprised I can even type this as I am drooling so badly..keep up the good work....PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kidloco [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 17:03 EDT
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is finish already the 'Feel me, Shame me, Heal me' ??? i dint know.. that why i not get new upsgrade.. damn much work, computer death and ect.. and great first chapter you did, now continue wiht the rest, but need still finish the last one :p 10 for everything ^^ you do a great job ^^
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 21:31 EDT
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Great update, I did like how you added to the anime, though I personally am into the manga right now but the anime is what got me into FMA. I wasn't expecting that person for the guide (sorry but I don't want to give it away), so good surprise. Good job =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 21:35 EST
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hehe, I loved that bit about hughes seeing everything. I am tring to figure out who the next guide is, and if it needs to be someone who is dead I'm thinking Nina. I don't know why, but I love Nina so I guess it could just be that. I am at a complete lose as to what the next layer of fear is, but I guess that I'll just be waiting for you to update (hint). Keep up the good work =)
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