| "When the Cherry Blossoms Bloom" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Title: OHHHHHH Boy
Reviewed By: Alaskanbeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 19:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, well, well, even in grannys house da boy has no shame(thank god) I can not believe how quickly I read through these chapters, as the story is excellent with the way each character is brought out but also the depth of which Ed can see where he had his change and blew it, and I agree with Al all he should care about is Wnry's happiness..we will see, but the second reason I fly through these chapters is because I am a sick a (SICK WOMAN I tell ya) hoping for more hot sex. The way this writer writes these scenes makes me wish I could be 17 again *ohhhh sigh* and find a man like Mustang...ohhhhhhhh baby. Again you have given a wonderful addition to this story and can hardly wait for the next one.
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Title: OHHHHHHHHHH CHRIST I CAN'T STAND IT
Reviewed By: Alaskanbeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG I can barely stand this, I could not put down the first story until it was finished(took me 2 days and nights mind you) and now this update, God Almighty there is only so much a woman can take I tell ya. Part of my heart wants Winry to be with Roy(da boy is to damn hot) and the other wants it to be Ed..it is killing me to wait to find out. You are one damn good writer I can't even begin to tell you, you just make the reader want more and more. Which I for one hope you do give more and more. Thanks for this wonderful ride :O} I am surprised I can even type this as I am drooling so badly..keep up the good work....PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kidloco [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 17:03 EDT
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is finish already the 'Feel me, Shame me, Heal me' ??? i dint know.. that why i not get new upsgrade.. damn much work, computer death and ect.. and great first chapter you did, now continue wiht the rest, but need still finish the last one :p 10 for everything ^^ you do a great job ^^
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 21:31 EDT
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Great update, I did like how you added to the anime, though I personally am into the manga right now but the anime is what got me into FMA. I wasn't expecting that person for the guide (sorry but I don't want to give it away), so good surprise. Good job =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 21:35 EST
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hehe, I loved that bit about hughes seeing everything. I am tring to figure out who the next guide is, and if it needs to be someone who is dead I'm thinking Nina. I don't know why, but I love Nina so I guess it could just be that. I am at a complete lose as to what the next layer of fear is, but I guess that I'll just be waiting for you to update (hint). Keep up the good work =)
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 08:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sigh... that was such a dreamy chapter (minus the edward being pissed scenes). you make roy and winry seem perfect for each other,seriously! and...nice name; winifred. HAHA
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 23:13 EST
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I am finding myself agreeing with TaintedShikonShards completely, especially about ed and his mmmm, "reaction"
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 18:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I loved Ed's "reaction" to everything...that was hilarious. Al and Maes are great for the comic relief during Ed's more serious moments. Overall, a wonderful chapter! Keep writing, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 00:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! It just ends! I want to hear what Roy and Winry say to eachother and whatnot..but I GUESS I can wait for the next chapter. Great job...as always...and yea, I love the inserts from ep. 37, that is definitely the funniest episode in the series. I feel so bad for Huges though, its just so sad that he isnt with his family and you do a great job of portraying that saddness in your story. Keep up with the writing!
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 23:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished the prequel and these chapters, still blushing from head to toe from the prequel. First, I think you have to be a little sick minded to have put Winery with Mustang. But, you have sucked me into your sick little world and now I really want to find out what happens with them all in it. I remember my Mom saying something about couriosity and a cat... BTW I really like your style, you have a few odd sentences but I seem to always be able to figure out what you're trying to convey. Keep up the good work and please update when you have the time, or I might have to subject the characters to my own sick little world (laughs evily)
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 17:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry, it flowed wonderfully! Adding scenes from the anime definitely helped progress the story and keep it "realistic". I love where this is going, and I love Ed's reactions to all of this. I'm conflicted at this point as to whether or not I should feel bad for Ed..but I guess if he wanted Winry he had chances all along so, nah... I love the WinryxRoy story line! Keep updating, I can't wait for chapter 3!
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Title: woot!
Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 05:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
utterly fab! (i've decided to read this brilliant fanfic on this website. uncensored is (almost) always better!) great chap, update =)
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Reviewed By: xxfujixfuuxx On: February 28, 2007 22:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the prequel, 'Feel me, Shame me, Heal me' It was one of the best that I've read in a long time. I can't wait to read where you take the characters in this one.
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Reviewed By: YukiShuichi4ever On: February 27, 2007 20:18 EST
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I thought it was really good. I was just wondering if you were going to change the government in the alchemist world because at the end of the anime it looked that they changed to a democracy ( a congress and stuff) . So wouldn't that change Roy's goal because there is no fuher.
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Title: Great Start!
Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 08:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great start! Can't wait for chapter two! (and no....it wasn't OOC at all) Keep it up! (Like always)
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