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| "When the Cherry Blossoms Bloom" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] | | Pages (4): [ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Title: Oh my freaking gawd!
Reviewed By: Ruminative-Be [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2012 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following and *constantly* rereading this story and Feel Me, Shame Me, Heal Me for years and I absolutely flipped out of my seat when I saw an update for this fanfiction in my email inbox! It was, without a doubt, extremely wonderful and addictive but iono, it kinda felt like you were rushing through the whole thing.. The spelling was off, and your paragraphs were so tightly packed, I miss your older spacing style. But yeash, though it felt like there wasn't much to hold on to (ruuushed), it was AWESOMESAUCE :D I'm so grateful for you having written this story, it's changed me and I'll never stop wanting to reread it over and over again. I worship you. | Reviewed By: Aliceeee On: April 18, 2012 23:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been following this story since the first installment and can genuinely say that you are a gifted writer. Completely made me fall in love with Roy and Winry and their journey together. Please add the finishing chapters so I can have some closure! :) | Title: U.P.D.A.T.E. *pleash*!!
Reviewed By: Ruminative-Be [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2011 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! I've been following your story since Feel Me, Shame Me, Heal Me came out. Even when I changed accounts, so pretty please with that strawberry cake Winry made on top, update as soon as you possibly can. It's just sorta driving me nuts, 'cos I've read the first one bout 8 times already and this fanfic 3 times. And :( honestly, Feel Me, Shame Me, Heal Me moved me so much, it was like I never really understood how love could truly be like, the longing and dirty desperation, haha. Oh! And your lemony scenes are dee-lish :D So yes, update *kneels and begs* I am that crazy. | Reviewed By: vegetakitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 21:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This really is a great story. I hope you'll consider finishing it.
| Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 11:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was amazing. I've been waiting for the moment when Roy finally takes off that eye patch, and you wrote that scene wonderfully. The description of his wounds was perfectly written and completely believable. They were appropriate without being overdone. Continue with the excellent writing! I look forward to many more wonderful chapters!
| Reviewed By: Aylese1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for the update. This is a good story. It has it funny moments and it's sad moments where it did make me cry. I don't like the pairing if Roy and Winrey but you make me like it. So keep going on this story.
| Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sigh, what a beautiful chapter... simply full of the emotions they feel, very real. thank you again for another amazing chapter!
| Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 00:31 EDT
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Geez I just wish ed would get out of the picture. he practically called winery a whore! it makes me so mad. Roy has been really brave with everything. great chapter! can't wait for the next one. ^_^
| Title: SO IN LOVE WITH ROY AND THIS WRITER
Reviewed By: TheTrueAngelOfTheNight On: July 18, 2007 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As a woman all i can say is where the hell are men like this for real???? I can not get enough of this story or the way you write, It just makes a woman want to find a man like Roy. God what a talent you have I truly hope you never give up writing what a waste that would be. I tell you this chapter excited me so much I can barely type...hot damn, thank you thank you.
| Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 07:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow wow WOW!!!! haha this story is such a fabulous treat! i just finished my exams, i rushed home and checked the story =) ah, two weeks of exams, this fanfic made the wait worthwhile mwahaha! love love LOVE it to the max! as always, you've done the scenes so realistically and wonderfully. honestly, your fic is so believable and absolutely fanfastic!
| Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 10:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that's definitly a great outburst even for Edward's character, but it was done realistically. The scene with Winry and Edward on the front porch was emotional and showed more depth to Ed's character than I've seen for awhile in this story and I loved it. Roy's realization that Brian's middle name was his was a wonderful moment and one of my favorites in this fic so far. Its the adorable moments like that between Roy and Winry that make me love Roy's character even more and the RoyxWinry pairing even more. Finally, Roy's confession at the end was so sad but beautifully written, and so easy to picture while reading, thanks for the great detail you put into each chapter! Al's character and purpose in this story to see all points of view and (unlike Pinako) actually comment on them to each party. I love how Al can sit and have a serious conversation with Roy while his brother is outside confessing his soul. Its great to have a character who is in it only for Winry's welfare and happiness. I can't wait to see where this goes in the next chapter, yet I know theres a pairing I'd really want to see, again, haha. Thanks! I'll keep an eye open for the next update!
| Title: OMG I CAN'T STAND IT
Reviewed By: Alaskanbeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 11:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God I can barely stand this who will she end up with, (ROY ROY and oh yes ROY) I hope although would love to see Al and Ed find someone to, but Roy and Win they belong together and damn it where is the sex!!!!!!!!! :O). I am so glad I have something to look forward to each day now, looking to see if the next chapter is up. You are WONDERFUL, please never stop writing you truly have a gift for it.
| Title: Amazing, Still Amazing
Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This review is actually for he last three chapters....and I'm just saying that this story is still wonderful to read. Alphonse's character is just what the story needs, a level headed, unbiased opinion when the situation calls for it, yet he doesn't come off as a dr. phil, psychologist type which is good. Roy returning to the story is wonderful and everything (reaction wise) i could have expected. I enjoy the fact that Roy himself seems to have matured a little in his arguments with Edward and just his overall opinion of the Winry situation and how he plans to deal with it. Roy's character is still one that even after all he has been shown to have done to Winry in this fic, as a reader, i can't hate him or even dislike him for that matter, and it is therefore easy to relate to the Winry outlook on Roy and understand how hard it is for her in this. Winry's character is believable, to the point where she has become relatable. For her to be struggling that hard over the fact of whether or not to give Roy a second (or third) chance is something that I expected and hoped she would have to face and Roy's efforts to get to know his children are also bonuses for his character. Brian and Anna seem to have a little plan going on and I can't wait to see what they decide to do in this situation...especially to Edward. And as for Ed, his absolute love for Winry, that came way too late, was saddening at first, but now its so hard to not be on Roy's side in this whole argument and therefore I find myself believing that Ed deserves what he is (or isnt) getting from Winry because of all he has placed on her in previous years. Pinako and Roy's parents are great working together, yet from afar, to try to unite their kids/grandkids once again. I love how Pinako shows up at that greatest times and has those "you'll thank me for this later" lines which are so believeable coming from her. I'll be looking forward to the coming chapters and I thank you for three great ones once again! Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 22:25 EDT
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Loving Pinako! She knows Winry better than any of the men! Not a bad reunion considering 5 years+ have passed. Ed must understand, deep down in his heart, that Winry is not his & she and Roy belong together. Thanks for the update! :D
| Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ go roy go Pinako! i love that old woman. the battle begins with alchemists. the only thing that ed will do though is make winry be alone for the rest of her life if he wins the battle, its sad that he doesn't see that even through all of those trial things. well any way, can't wait for the next update. this is such a great fic! ^_^
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