| "Ma & Pa Snafu" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 19:30 CDT
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ROTFLMAO! I laughed and laughed and am still grinning like an idiot. That line is a killer. ROFL My face hurts and there are tears in my eyes--the good kind. Never stop writing this stuff. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ugh. I have to stop molesting your fanfictions so roughly. They're giving me the catastrophic snickergiggles. "Flip her around, I want a puppy instead." I want children like that some day.
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Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm dying with laughter from that last comment. Just the imagery is hysterically funny. I'm quite enjoying this 'series' and its antics.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, now this was good... hell, this was flippin hilarious, lmao! Why is it I could see all this happening in a trailer? Heh, don't get me wrong, I like em, hell, I even live in one, but this SOOO reminded me livin in a mobile home, lol. You write some awesome stuff... this was great! ;)
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Reviewed By: Jeora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao That was a good fic, and I actually really liked how you ended it. Inuyasha must have a horrible mouth on him for his daughter to be able to say that. Anyways, good job. Look forward to your next one. xD
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Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I thoroughly enjoy reading your story and since you mentioned that this was a sequel, of sort, to your story 'Allergy Season' I went back and read that story along with all your other masterpieces. I must say that I had a grand time laughing as I read each one. I look forward to read future stories from you and I will add your name to my favortie authors list.
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 01:08 CDT
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just adorable! another sequel please :)
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Title: *Groans*
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sets catapult of flaming poop aside to type review* I second just about everything Inu Hanyou Nikkie said. All sorts of doors are left open with mention of the infamous slip 'n' slide. I would shout "Oh the humanity!" but Inuyasha isn't human. I love the materializing hot tea, and yeah, I'm sure he did have that ready and waiting, just for that occasion. Smart guy. Yes! They broke the table! The ONLY thing that I think could have made that better, would be if Kagome had said, "We broke the table...again." LOL. But I love how she practically reads his mind at the beginning, only because she knows him so well, and just exactly WHERE is that birthmark, hmmmmm? As for the way you ENDED the story, *glances across at catapult, then concentrates once more on computer screen*, all I can really say, is ROFLMFAO!
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eyes sparkling!!* I so want to hear about the slip'n'slid now.. Kagome should have known that Inu has quite the mouth and so will any kids.. granted she probably prefered it to be in the later teens... LOL!! Loved the line.. "when did we get inside"! Darn it!! This is one heck of a great series! Did Inuyasha have a cup of tea ready just for this type of occassion? Love it! And what a hot and steamy way to describe their love-making... Thank you!! You finally wrote a story in which a table is broken!! Whoot!! I haven't come across any others that dealt with that realism! sniffles... poor table... snickers.. Thank goodness I wasn't drinking anything becuase that final line have me falling out of my chair in hysterics!! Will Inuyasha take up their daughter's suggestion? Great work! Thank you so much for sharing it! I agree with your comment... I would like to see Sesshoumaru as something other than a corporate tycoon. A motown star! Yes, or even a Emo-Jazz/Blues singer.. Blushes.. you're going to read my stuff?... blushes even more..
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