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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 00:13 CST
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Very nice. So glad to see them turning to each other, understanding and working for each other. Open with their feelings, and thinking of what's best for the other. Lovely chapter.
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply amazing story. I'm hooked. So when is he going to build that home?? Inquiring minds want to know. :) --Amy
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 19:16 CST
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This story is unbelievably cute and so going on my favorites. I love how you've made everything seem real, like the village. You gave it personality. And the Inu cast all seem so much deeper. It's nice. I really like this story and can't wait for your next update. -Amber :)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 18:45 CST
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it's a wonder that the guy wanted keade attending at the birth because of her close association with youkai and hanyou, shippo, yasha and kagome have been living in her hut after all. kagome has some advanced medical knowledge even if she only studied 'health' in school, she could be helpful in a crisis. . . as always a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, the ugly truth is brought to the fore. So sad, but I expected it. I suspected that they would have to leave. Kagome's story was poignant. She didn't whine and cry, but told a story instead. The chapter flowed well. I'm glad that things did not get intense between Kagome and Inuyasha. I do hope the three of them can find happiness somewhere. Thanks, Snow
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful and sad. All their insecurities are exposed as well as the miseries of a world where Kagome always "visited" and never -really- lived in. Sadly, our world still have those miseries. There are a lot of things both of them should think about, at least, something is relatively clear, they want to be together and Kagome does not want to be a Shrine Miko. As usual they are fighting against what people think it's best for them. Like Sango and Miroku thinking that Kagome should be a Shrine Maiden, this is annoying coming from Sango and Miroku considering they are friends and Sango is like a sister. Very difficult times ahead but a lot of Kagome & Inuyasha too. Thank you for the update, worth the waiting. LOL. Oh, Lovely story. Always love the stories you tell within your story! Great job and keep going!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 04:29 CST
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So glad to see more of this! Good that IY is beginning to deal with his feelings, and maybe take some action. Poor K, stranded as she is, and uncertain of IY. Of course, being as wild and untamed as he is, disliking being tied down, I can understand. How will he handle this? Can't wait to see!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 21:09 CST
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This is really sweet. Thought provoking. You have brought up some interesting points concerning how people will see Kagome after Naraku is gone. I'm anxious to see the next chapter. It looks to be an interesting romance. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 20:38 CST
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"are you going to move on and leave me too?" seems like they're thinking alike. maybe something like this will build a fire under him, ne? i like kaede's advice. your descriptions are wonderful as always. ~ lovely, ginny
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Title: Terrific
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 2 was great. I can feel Inuyashas turmoil inside. The end of the chapter where she thinks he is going to leave her really made me feel for her. Keep up the wonderful work. I await your next chapter. :D
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 20:40 CST
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one can feel the melancholy emotions radiating off her as she singers at the well, this has a quiet and easy, comfortable feel to it. . . methinks she is hinting at a bit more than him building kagome a house... i will look forward to more of this if you choose to continue it. ~ thank you, ginny
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 11:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I can really imagine this happening. If feels like the continuation of the manga. It is coming along so wonderfully, I can wait to read more. I love the anguish and how Inuyasha makes Kagome feel better. Keep up the terrific work!!!
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 05:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, really like it. The pace you set, the way of assesing the entire situation of the closed well. It's nice to know how everything started or began after Naraku's ordeal. Of course, now I want more! LOL Wonderful chapter Sue, really wonderful. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 19:08 CST
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Very good start, laying out the situation, w/o bringing in too many hidden emotions. Will be a nice build up, I think. Can't wait for more, you never disappoint!
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Title: This looks promising, KK!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way this is starting and I look forward to more chapters! Great start! Good luck!
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