| "Pack Law" Reviews/Comments [ 323 ] |
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Reviewed By: Phalon (nsi) On: September 04, 2011 03:25 EDT
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I absolutely LOVE and adore this story still. I hope you intend to write the next part of the series you had planned two years ago. I do enjoy your other stories. :) |
Title: chapter 6
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy not logged On: March 09, 2011 04:44 EST
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This is such a great twist and cliffhanger, I totally didnt expect that to happen, I must say I really enjoy your interpretations of the characters, it is very accurate, you really capture their nuances, especially Sesshomaru, he is such a hard character to write but you manage to nail him down perfectly, like when you described how sessh would never roll his eyes, its so much more enjoyable when the characters have their particular mannerisms. |
Title: King Baka
Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 23:34 EDT
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What's up with mediaminer? Every time I go to access this story it logs me out. Anyway, I finally found some time to start reading this story. I'm up through chapter 5, and I'm very impressed so far. You seem to be weaving a compelling story with a solid plot. I like how Inu and Kag are dancing around each other, with insecurities and doubt still forming a wall between them. At some moments, the wall is thinner than others, like when they kiss, but it's still there. The best stories are the ones that don't make it too easy for them to hop over that wall and start mating. It seems like you're not going to do that. Also, your AN expressed concern over your spelling and grammar, but there's really nothing wrong with your writing. It's an excellent style, and I can tell you proofread carefully. I'll definitely continue to read as I get more free time.
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 16:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEE! Excellent take on the whole picture. Loved the 'lover's spat'. You blew me away with the connection between Ryuu and Midoriko. And Ki is just such a creative character. I'm very impressed. Now, should I finish the story or savor it just a little more.... oh, I just don't want it to end. I have trouble describing just how amazing this chapter was. You did a great job trying up loose ends, providing character depth and preparing everyone for the end!
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 16:17 EDT
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Exceptional as always. I decided to treat myself today and so I am finally getting a moment to read! Well worth it too. Suspense and action... what a rush!
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Title: Neisha
Reviewed By: NeishaK On: February 16, 2009 23:57 EST
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Wonderful- simply wonderful! I enjoyed this fic immensely, and I hope to read more of your work! Thanks again for a fantastic read. Neisha
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 01:02 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol i cant even begin to think what Kagome's emoctions will be for those 8 months LOL and Inuyahsa would probly get the worst XD anyways i completely loved the story!! a Ses/Kag hmm i not much of a fan of those 2, but i shall read it ^____^
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Title: End of an Era...
Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 18:26 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...that was one hell of a ride! You managed to build up the entire story that the end result was a complete shock! I never would have guessed that Ki would be the one to destroy Naraku, let alone create a brand new Shikon in the process! Wonderful work, give yourself a well deserved back-patting from me! Bravo!!
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: J-Feulner On: February 13, 2009 15:37 EST
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Wow, i loved this fanfic from start to end, and I hope to read the rest that you will write, God Bless you for writing all of these chapters, This one, by far has been my favorite. I enojoyed it so much, and I hope that you win a Fanfic award, because that this is a GREAT.....no AN AWESOME FANFIC and this one will go far!. I will be reading the rest of your other fanfics, so i am hopping along for the ride, if you ever need any help, just email me. Thanks jfeulner
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 08:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
/cry . It was a very sweat ending to this. I do hope you will do one shot's to add to this later on. One thing that did pop into my head though is you saying about the grandpa dieing. Would he give a talsman to the grandpa and her mom since I always felt he see's her mom something like a stepmom to him in the show or and the brother like a norther family meber or pack meber. I will read at lest a chapter or 2 of his brother with Kikyo but I am not a big fan of her and would even like him with Naruku better lol. Personly I like his brother with a older Rin as his idea mate.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 00:45 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice ending to the story. It will be interesting to how Inuyasha deals with crazy hormones during the pregnancy and a baby. What I really am curious about is how he will deal with a dating teen-aged daughter, especially if she becomes interested in a descendant of Miroku. I look forward to seeing what comes next.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 00:16 EST
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ahh! and after she got used to the idea, they lived happily ever after-- that's all anyone can ask. thank you love, for the exciting and humerous trip through your imagination. ♦ i always thought that kikyou had a personality that was more suited to that of sesshoumaru, so i wouldn't think it would be that much of a stretch for either character. looking forward to it! ♥ gin
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: February 12, 2009 21:27 EST
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I really wasn't looking for PWP I actually really don't like those. There were just several moments in the story where it fealt like u were building up for there 2 b a lemon. Anyway the story was very good overall; I will admit though that I was disappointed by the ending. I'm a big fan of waiting 2 have kids so the pregnant right outta highschool is kinda a turn off for me, but that's just my personal taste. Other than that I fell u did a great job.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2009 21:14 EST
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so happy you didn't draw out the naraku thing, he got a body then he was destroyed-- short and sweet, just how i like the bad guy's demise. ♣ poor kikyo, she's always a bridesmaid and never a bride... always gets the short end of the stick... (i don't feel all that bad, really) ♠ and on to the 'happily ever after'! ♥ gin
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2009 20:50 EST
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It was a cute and very fitting epilogue. I can't wait for the sequel! And I look forward to reading your other works. XD Figure's Inu would be sneaky like that. Looks like College is on hold for Kagome now! I'd be so mad! lol.
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