| "Sister Jewels." Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 07:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHHHHHHEEEEEE I SO sould be asleep right now... GREAT chapter!!!!
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Title: Sorry for the double post
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 00:52 CST
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I forgot to mention. A writer that puts anothers persons story down well...it's not very mature. You should HELP a person become a better writer not put them down!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't listen to the butfart bellow me. Although kagome and Inuyasha are going a little too fast...he just kissed her for goodness sakes! But kagome was raped...meaning it's going to be very hard to mate with her without her having flashbacks of being raped. My aunt had them for a long time after she was raped. She also had nightmares. But because of the wonderfull man she married she's a lot better. What I'm saying is if inuyasha and kagome moved past kissing she would have freaked and that would be normal. Great chapter as always. oh and maybe you should up the rating a little at least to a Y. Lol! Finally someone agreed with me on Edward!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2008 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
question....according to the description, you have Kagome dressed like a hooker. Seriously, mini skirt and a tank top? All in all I'm finding this rather unrealistic. InuYasha and Kagome wouldn't just go from being heartbroken, tragic hero's to horney teenagers in the time lapse of a day. Now the general idea of this fic is decent, but your execution is terrible. Your not giving your own version of kagome the respect she deserves, and the entire circumstance of their 'past loves' is way too coincidental to be believable. I thought since the plot was good, I'd be able to swallow the crappy style, but I'm deleting this off of my favorites.
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Reviewed By: Kagome1818 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 16:59 CST
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Lunabell i agree with you completely edward was not cute at all. Nothin like you would imagine him in the book.
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Reviewed By: Kagome1818 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG its been forever since you updated this story i was going to go insane but i love the chap. I never would have guessed that kags would be released like that. So keep going P.S. I kno how you feel about the twilight movie i got rain on down here also the week i wanted to see it i had to wait till just last week to go see it but it was awesome.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 23:42 CST
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Now I'm gonna be killed by crazy edward fangirls...T_T
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I'm sorry you didn't get to see the movie. I got to see the midnight show at the theater. It was pretty good but not as good as the book. Lol! I'm sorry but the guy that played edward was not good looking at all...O_o
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty (on my brothers computer... due to he has just gotten new ANIME!!!!!!) On: December 14, 2008 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bored now.... I just finished school and now I have the cold... (sharing is caring...(from my mum)) AND Nothing but Charmed (TV series) or Enterprise (Star Trek I had to look at that to remember it... my brain is gone REALLY weird.... I can remember the particular series but not the complete name...)
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Reviewed By: ME AMORE On: November 25, 2008 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love topic of the story, but I wonder if you've forgotten your story. Like many other authors are starting to do. I hope you up date soon. Until then Love LIfe.
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 20:32 CST
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well i hope u do update, but I WENT TO GO SEE THAT MOVIE TOO! IT WAS AWESOME!!! OMG EDWARD!
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 23:25 CST
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Oh and my guess on how Inuyasha manages to release Kagome is through some form of compassion.
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 23:08 CST
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Understandable! Going to the midnight show! Enjoy the movie and have a great weekend. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 16:20 CST
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Don't worry about it I'm going to see it too...I just hope we don't stand in line for hours...I'm having TITANC flashbacks. I had to stand in line for hours before I got those dame tickets! And I ended up setting next to a 500 pound man that smelled like meatloaf that went really bad...and all he did was talk...T_T...I just hope something like that never happens to me again.
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Title: !!!!!!MY GUESS 2!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kagome1818 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 18:42 CST
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But my second guess is Inuyasha releases Kagome because he looks exactly like her first and only love she just his looks awaken her presence. Or his vulnerbility makes him stay up like always and his looking out for everyone makes her awaken because she used to look out for everyone else.
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