| "Sister Jewels." Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awsome! Kind of like a mixture between InuYasha and Avatar The Last Airbender! It's about time someone did one! And you've got InuYasha and Kagome pinned, having them both have something to do with the fire element. The Kagome from the show I'd say was a little more 'water' oriented, but seeing as your Kagome has this tragic past, it'll be perfect!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SPELLING, ok, bolding works colours(Australian spelling) don't.. "No. She saved two little children from a burning hut. Someone told her that there was someone else in there, --we found out later that their had not been anyone else in the hut but the two children-- so naturally she went back in. And no one went in to save her. She was burned alive, because no one scared you mean cared?. I can still remember her screams. The villagers held me and Rin back, and we were forced to hear her agonized screams. I was forced to watch the closet you mean closest thing I had to a family die a horrible death. B-Because no one c-cared." Sango suddenly curst bursed into unconscionably tears.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SPELLING "No. She saved two little children from a burning hut. Someone told her that there was someone else in there, --we found out later that their had not been anyone else in the hut but the two children-- so naturally she went back in. And no one went in to save her. She was burned alive, because no one scaredyou mean cared?. I can still remember her screams. The villagers held me and Rin back, and we were forced to hear her agonized screams. I was forced to watch the closet you mean closest thing I had to a family die a horrible death. B-Because no one c-cared." Sango suddenly curst bursed into unconscionably tears.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so it looks like the have had LOTS of fun... couldn't one of them become Naraku's Jem and the disobey him in a suicide attack? It wouldn't be like they'd really die, they'd just have to wait to have a new master again...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol at least she was clothed... what is he going to do with her now??? (not that pervert) no id, no records, no money, no place to live.. what do their parent think about this?
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Reviewed By: jojo54 On: September 09, 2008 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so good. when are you going to update i hope it's soon and more chapters to come.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Very Nice
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 06:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ooo Sango is one of the elementals.. interesting :P
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 19:02 CDT
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this is getting GOOD! ooooooooooo i can't wait for more!:)...can't breath....too good.....NEED more.....tooooo addicting.......im melting, melting(giggle,giggle)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooo me likey :P
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Reviewed By: inu-kag4ever On: August 22, 2008 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is interesting:) please update more! i like how u started it, it keep's u guessing!:) keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh I love it please update again!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 12:47 CDT
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I'm really getting into the story. I love the way you are building up to everything, not telling us much about the jewels and what kind of power each hold. Chapters are a bit on the short side, but I don't really mind, especially when I'm in between classes or taking a short break at work. Overall, awesome start to an interesting story.
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is like so awsome so far. i rekon its going to be an good as story. please update as soon as u can
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sound cool so far please update
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