| "Sister Jewels." Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Title: !!!!!!MY GUESS!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kagome1818 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 18:33 CST
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I have a feeling that Kagome is goning to be released by Inuyasha's anger at being the only on left without an awakened jewel cause he is such a hothead. Its got to be his temper in some way.
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Title: k
Reviewed By: medusa85 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hello there love this story, but there a lot of grammar errors and sometimes it get confusing. Other than that this fic is awesome. I'll be waiting for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
due to the fact that it has some thing to do with fire... or some thing that is associated with that element.... (passion, (anger or love(although I don't think it would work very well with the last one...) perhaps InuYasha accidental ends up on fire???? All I know is that if I was InuYasha... it would probably be a good idea to have a fire department around him at all times... The only other thing (and most likely for his character is that he gets into a fight (Anger(Passion again))... or the REALLY cool one is he happens to save some people from a house of fire... which would be kinda ironic... due to the fact that Kagome was in a (house) fire... OR looking at what every one else is thinking... perhaps it may have some thing to do with him overcoming himself... Overcoming his Hanyou weakness (that time of the month) and becoming a stronger person... If I was InuYasha and I was getting really desperate I would probably light my self on fire... it would (maybe) help...
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Reviewed By: mangalover1996 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i'm guessing either inuyasha gets really frusterated and releses kagome with hatred or... on the night on the new moon, inuyasha went into his human form and kagome thought he was her past lover....or something like that...
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Reviewed By: Tainted_Angel69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that what will set Kagome free is either InuYasha's hope to set her free; to see her, to help her get over her traumas or something. Maybe the fact that they're both psychic could have something to do with it too. You know like their psychic link could trigger it. **OR** It could be his hope for revenge against Naraku; his hope/desire to avenge Kikyo that will set her free. And I think that it happens on the night of the new moon because it's when InuYasha is at his most vulnerable and I guess that feeling of vulnerability would make him want to have the strength to do it all the more. I think he would be all like "I hate the night of the new moon because I feel weak" or something like that. Then he'd be all like "I wish I had the power to kill Naraku for what he did to Kikyo", and then his fiery spirit and/or his intense hope for revenge could summon/release Kagome from the jewel. *Had to throw something about fire in there ^_^* All in all . . . I think hope releases her from her jewel somehow.
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Title: Huh?!
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You haven't made enough chapters to make a sequel...although I've seen people write three chapters and then make a sequel. Why not wait untill you get at least 20 chapters in? Just wondering. I really love you're story and I hope you keep writing.
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Title: Guess for Kagome's Release
Reviewed By: JBird7986 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 13:05 CST
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I actually have two guesses for this: 1. Being that you've hinted at the night of the new moon, Inuyasha is going to venture out on his night of weakness to help someone he loves (along with this I'm guessing that it is an act of love that sets Kagome free) which somehow results in him releasing Kagome, possibly after getting hurt. 2. Inuyasha's night of vulnerability forces him to rely on his friendship with the others and subsequently his trust in his friendship with them results in Kagome's release. Those are my guesses. I've been following along the story and have added it to my favorites even though I tend to be a shadow-reader and not review much. Thanks for the excellent story-line.
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Reviewed By: yaye22 On: November 07, 2008 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i love this story! i have waited for a good inu/kag story to come along al im hooked! cant wait for the next chaper keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 05:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hands InuYasha some matches, and a cigarette lighter I think this might be all you need to call Kagome...
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 20:25 CST
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too short:( (tear,tear) but it was wonderful! hope u update soon! loved it!
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 15:43 CST
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are u really going to put it up today?! I can't wait! this is so good!!! keep up the awesome work! loved it!
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Reviewed By: ShikonbabyJK On: October 18, 2008 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so far.I mostly like how much detail you put into their past lives and how little things count. Like how Songo and Aymea where relast. It shows every little thing counts. So please try to make the next chapter sooner,but if not. I'll just wait and review. Love,Hope,Friendship,and Tragdy
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: October 16, 2008 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you sure you can't upload another chapter soon? I can't wait to see what happens next. You have a very original story here. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 13:35 CDT
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i loved it i loved it I LOVED IT! it's really interesting:) i love the plot and how kagome's first love looks exactly like inuyasha's human half! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 20:04 CDT
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This is very interesting. The chapters could be a bit longer, but you're doing a good job getting a look at the characters without letting it all out at once. I look forward to reading more from you :)
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