| "Hanging by a moment..." Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2011 03:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Chapter 9 is my favorite chapter so far. I love stories/snippets of the two brothers and there is Sess/Rin in it. Good job depicting how the two of them can have regular conversation without trying to kill each other. |
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2011 17:00 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2011 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.animara.org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-association.deviantart.com/blog/40025885/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/FanFic%20March%2 02011/ Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.animara.org/pickup_site.php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association |
Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2011 07:44 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanfiction (Fiction) http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanart (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. |
Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2010 20:33 EST
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"Carved in Stone" was very good, like you said. I also liked the Shippou-inspired snowball fight (I'm a sucker for stuff that makes Inuyasha relax and have fun for a change), and the little Christmas G-string. All the fangirls like to imagine that there's not enough fabric, LOL. They were all very sweet; a nice Christmas treat. |
Reviewed By: LadyCash, not logged in On: December 22, 2010 12:19 EST
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Sweet and funny, I laughed and 'aww'ed. Love your Kag/Inu. I think my fave was 'Carved in Stone'. |
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2010 09:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for sharing. I'm glad to see something new from you. And perfect for the season. I think Carved in Stone was my favorite of the new ones. I just liked Inuyasha's way of saying how he felt. The others were good too, though you really had me going with the ending to Golden Ticket. I thought that it was Kagome confessing her feelings with the kiss and then you go and mention a condom. I couldn't help but laugh. Great job and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. |
Title: I'm so old...
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2010 09:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You spin me right round baby right round like a record player... gods... I'm so old - but ya know what? I love my eighties music! And my two fav things combined - eighties music and Inuyasha... heaven. Merry Christmas! Amber |
Title: Lovely!
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2010 08:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great big AWWWWW! ~girly squeal~ That was soo cute! Amber |
Title: Glad to see some new things!
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2010 08:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this short, sweet, and to the point series... Amber |
Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2010 20:46 EST
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“Puppy Love” made me laugh. I was trying to remember whether you had ever commented about the whole calling a baby a “pup” thing with Inuyasha. Personally I think it’s kinda ridiculous, which made the story more comical. The others were kind of an exploration of various clichés, from Inuyasha’s dog language to the mating blood bond. “Free to Live,” was interesting because of Inuyasha’s last line. That only works if he truly sees his relationship with Kikyou as one of responsibility only. Seems plausible to me, near the end. Hopefully Kikyou will let go her attachment to Inuyasha and go on to live the life she always wanted, the life the Shikon no Tama denied her. |
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2010 19:59 EST
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I loved the new additions. The misunderstanding between Kagome and Inuyasha about her wanting a pup was great. It was a great way for them to learn about each other's feelings and a take I've never seen before. I've seen one or two like Meant to Be before but I liked your version better. And I loved Submission. It was great to see Kagome understand just how important pride and honor is to Inuyasha and just how humiliating it can be when she uses the rosary. I would love to see more with that idea, especially when she decides she needs to show her own submission. Again, I've seen ideas like To Save a Life but I really liked yours. And I loved your take on wishing Kikyou back to life in Free to Love. I really think Inuyasha would choose Kagome but as you showed in Submission, his honor is extremely important to him. Few realize that by bringing Kikyou back he no longer owes her anything. I really enjoyed that chapter but wish we could have seen the others reactions to Inuyasha's declaration. Wonder how Kikyou would have reacted, especially since she had just been demanding that he join her in hell. |
Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2010 14:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG LOL thank you this story and chapter are awesome this is so romantic I love the plot keep up the excellent work" (^_^) Raven |
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2010 11:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a typical, 'Kagome wishes Kikyou back so Inu can be happy' story. I like this version better, though. Much better! Amber |
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2010 11:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one was too CUTE! I loved it! Amber |
Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2010 00:31 EDT
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Repeating History - I love this line: "Perhaps, but knowing I would give a foolish answer, how foolish were you to ask the question?" Way to use that ol' noggin, Inu! He's still dense as a rock though. :-) I love to see this kind of post-manga relationship between the brothers. It's not all touchy-feely, but they can talk to each other both seriously and somewhat casually. And they can admit past mistakes when warranted… Drowning Desire - I've seen this scenario before, but this is the first time I've seen it done well. And hooray for getting the damn rosary off! Something tells me Inuyasha won't get out of line much like Miroku does thought, at least in public. Ordinary - Very interesting to see that her duty of protecting the jewel was making Kagome behave like Kikyou. That's probably what got to Inuyasha more than anything, even if he didn't realize it. This is a good alternate ending to the manga; it keeps the central wish, minus the three year absence. PS - I will get to your other story that you just posted, but the length is a little daunting for me right now. That's another reason I love these little shorties!
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