| "Hanging by a moment..." Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2010 08:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such pain.
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2010 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great one, you made me cry when I read it. And original too. I've seen stories before where Inuyasha asks Sesshomaru to revive Kagome but I've never seen one where he offered his arm in exchange.
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2010 20:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome new chapter keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2010 18:51 EDT
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I've read stories where Kagome dies and Inuyasha takes her to Sesshoumaru before, but never one where he offers up his left arm as "payment." That was a nice, fresh twist on an old scenario!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2010 18:46 EDT
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I love these little pieces.
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Reviewed By: Love.of.written.words. On: July 07, 2010 16:01 EDT
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This made me cry, I loved it. Please keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
youv'e out done yourself this is great. Best part of all Inuyasha and Kagome did the deed...LOL thank you
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2010 22:01 EDT
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Hehehe, yes, you have indeed mastered the gift of gab. The first two chapters were the kind of believable and sensual story that I love. It was funny how Inuyasha couldn't quite convince himself he was nothing like Miroku. It was also nice that Kagome didn't go overboard with her teasing, because that would have made it less believable. Now, "Birthday Surprise" appealed to a different part of me. I like the idea; it makes you wonder how far someone would to for apparently unrequited love. The touch of angst was nice, and in typical Inu fashion, he has to show her she's wrong rather than say it outright. And yay! Congrats on your 100-word drabble!
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2010 18:04 EDT
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Another great idea. I know a lot of authors, me included, bring up Inuyasha's surprise that Kagome never thinks anything negative about him being a hanyou but this is the first I've ssen it done so early. Great job, can't wait to see what other ideas you have come up with.
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2010 09:52 EDT
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Loved the drabbles so far. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Birthday
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2010 23:26 EDT
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Great job. No, Kagome won't be able to believe he was imagining Kikyou after that. I also liked the previous drabbles. I know you said that these are all oneshots but I could see some of these being worked into a larger fic, maybe at a future date. Great job as always.
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2010 22:39 EDT
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Hot damn girl, I want more...! :-) I love your wordy descriptions and I miss them... Pretty please with sugar on top? A longer lemon...? ;-)
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2010 21:16 EDT
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Yummy! I like his proof....
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Title: Damn!
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2010 19:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How do you make something that hot in only five hundred words? That was really good! Amber
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2010 04:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nope. He's not like Miroku. At.All. Feh! It's so much fun when he's trying to be sneaky. But we know who's the real sneaky one, don't we? Romance, humor and a dead-on analysis of the state their relationship were stuck in for so long... It cannot be easy to give them all in a total of 1000 words because I know you could write countless pages for only the last one. But you managed to do just that, which is not surprising with your talent. It's a good choice to get those little ideas out of your head with drabbles. I've been lucky enough to get a glimpse of how many ideas can pop up in your head. I'll only say that... Well, it can't be comfortable in there. :D
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