| "Hanging by a moment..." Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2010 23:42 EDT
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Sorry. My previous post I somehow managed to confuse the title Drowning Desire with the warning of nudity. Not sure how I did that, but I did enjoy the drabble a lot.
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2010 23:12 EDT
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That was a nice heart to heart talk between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. That's something we rarely see, the topic of outliving the one you love, mostly because we love to have them share their lifespans. And I loved Nudity. I can just see Kagome forgeting about the water and nearly drowing Inuyasha. But were they already together in that one or was it just the heat of the moment that made them kiss? But I absolutely loved Ordinary. That was great how you had Inuyasha be the one to make the "correct" wish because he didn't like what the jewel was forcing Kagome to become. Kikyou couldn't be an ordinary woman because of it, he wasn't going to allow Kagome to suffer the same fate. And I've never seen where they couldn't still travel through the well before purifying the jewel, so that was an interesting idea as well. Great job.
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Title: Communication Skills
Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2010 22:16 EDT
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Talk about avoiding disaster at the last possible moment! I like your drabble writing style; it seems like you've found that confining yourself to a word count means you have to shorten everything down and take out all the unnecessary wordage. Now, I'm not saying you should do that on longer stories--I certainly don't--but it's a nice skill to possess. Keep practicing (and posting the results)!
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2010 22:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL Thanks for another great chapter you beautiful story. keep up the good work (^_^)
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Title: communication skills
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2010 20:49 EDT
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Nice. Something we see too often with Kagome and Inuyasha, misunderstandings about how they feel about each other. Good job.
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Title: To Live
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 20:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how you played that one out - the fact that it pitted one promise against the other, and that he had to honor the one to his mother first, before any others. Awesome! Amber
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 19:36 EDT
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"Weakness" was one of those classic revelation stories, but you did it well. I liked the connection with Kagome pulling the arrow from his heart and freeing him. "Promises and Honor" has me wondering how you think of these ideas. Another fresh take on an old scenario for this collection. Good stuff.
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 18:22 EDT
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Wow!! That was a twist I didn't see coming. I liked this little snippet into the Inuyasha universe!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 11:52 EDT
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*chuckles* i still don't think that he had promised her anything of the sort --starting: http://view.thespectrum.net/series/inuyasha-volume-01.html?ch=Volume+08& ;page=151 --is this for the fandom cliche challenge? because if it is-- ya got me!
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Title: chapter 6
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 11:30 EDT
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difficult to pinpoint exactly when she breached his heart's barrier-- insightful. a big gaping opening after chipping away at it. ♥
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 06:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY Inuyasha did not go to hell he should live. LOL THANK FOR THE NEW CHAPTERS
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 05:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We must always keep our vows.
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 01:02 EDT
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Two more good ideas. I especially liked how you had Inuyasha realize that if he kept his promise to Kikyou he would be breaking a promise to his mother. I've never seen that idea before. Very nice.
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 01:01 EDT
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Good stuff! I liked 'Weakness' the most. I liked how your contrasted the different ideas of weakness and strength in that piece. Keep writing! :-)
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Reviewed By: NYC Utopia On: July 09, 2010 13:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First-class, true to form taiyoukai! Short and sharp just like his use of Tenseiga!
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