| "I Hate Him" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 14:45 CST
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You did a wonderful job considering the pressure you had to write it under (i.e. your roommate and friends standing around while you type). I only see one part you will have to go back to edit. Did they go all the way or not? It sounded like once Aya gave Yoji that condom that they did, yet the morning after you have Aya speculating that they didn't go "all the way". |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 00:40 CST
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*whimpers* Poor Aya. Poor, poor Aya.. *bitch slaps Aya-chan for being a.. well.. bitch...* Aya will be alright, right? *whimpers* poor baby... |
Reviewed By: Okami Metallium On: December 12, 2002 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was really enjoyable. To say the least. It isn't often that a fic this long will grab my ttention. It took me almost three days to read, but now that I've read it... I can't recall one that I've read that was this good in a long time. I don't know how I'm going to be able to get back into the old PWP's again. They'll seem pale in comparison. THe thing I loved the most about this fic is the 'Real' feeling of it. The weiss boys really came to life. They wern't just anime characters, pupets to be danced on the screen, they were real and actual people, with their own real fears and concerns. I have only seen one author that was as good as you are... and really... in some ways your better than she is. You said to talk to you about possible ideas for fan fiction. And if nothing else I would just like to TALK to you, please e-mail me at blade_elvendrake@yahoo.com I can also be reached on AIM as Bad Luck Hiroshi or okami_metallium on Yahoo. |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo On: October 24, 2002 09:29 CDT
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Good chapter thow I doubt that there really will be some lemon in the next chapter. If there will be lemon I guess it will be a weird kind of. I can think of 2 possible settings.
1. After reallising what is going to happen Aya freaks out and tries to kill Youji. Or tries to hurt him somehow.
2. The way Aya dressed up for the date was very provesionally and that were his thoughts too. Maybe they have sex, but what if Aya just shows Youjis his *provessinally* side???
Anyway. You could have send me an email that the new chapter was up. Growl. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 22:39 CST
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very cool, but there was soemthing wrong with the punctuation. all of your ' were = and " were @ and stuff liket hat, i was very confusing, because the wrong symbols were around speech and stuff like that. i hope you fix them soon. this chapter was great, a lot of unexpected stuff happened. i hope you write more soon. i'll be keeping an eye out for an update.
Mara |
Reviewed By: ckgwriter On: October 10, 2002 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit I was a little skeptical at first when I began reading this...Aya as a prostitute. But as I kept reading I found that I couldn't stop until the very end and now I can't wait for more.
Great Job!!! Can't wait for the date and to see if Yohji can really show Aya what love is suppose to be like. Counting til the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 01:47 CDT
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*squeeks* I am so tired right now, and I should have gone to be an hour ago, but I HAD TO FINISH THIS CHAPTER! Anyway... very good! Write more! I heart this story.. nightnight... |
Reviewed By: gondola On: October 08, 2002 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's an excellent story....definitely something to look forward to ^_^...
it's tragic but sweet...it's pretty hard imagining a helpless aya..but you manage to portray it nicely |
Reviewed By: Pixie252 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story! I just love the way you develop the dynamic relationship between Yohji and Aya, and your style of writing is both enthralling and well done. Keep up the good work, because this story is definately going on my favorites list. |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 12:39 CDT
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Excellent chapter. Yes! Yoji should take Aya out on a date (once we're sure no one else will try to grab him off the streets!). A drunk Aya is an amusing Aya. |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo On: October 06, 2002 03:39 CDT
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The new chapter is good as ever. It was kind of funny to have Aya follow Youji like a lost puppie, but sooo cute.
Did Aya get drunk on purpose? Did he wanted to test Youji that way? I guess yes. Simple as it is: What will Youji do when I'm drunk and helpless? Will he take advantag or not? And maybe Aya wanted to know how he himself would react to being a bit loosend by the alcohol.
I can see a happy end at the horizon. *g* |
Reviewed By: Amy the Yu On: October 14, 2002 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAAAAAA!!!! I HATE YOU!!! That was sooo good that I spent a whole day reading it and doing nothing else. I have to say that I've never been happier to waste a whole day at the computer.
This fic is absolutely GREAT!!!! SUGOI, SUGOI, SUGOI!!!!
I've been a huge KenxOmi fan and a huge hater of Yohji and Aya...I never thought that I'd see the day that this would do a complete 180. Now, I love YohjixAya and Ken and Omi annoy me. Mostly Ken cause he's such an IDIOT for being mean to Aya. O_O;;; I can't believe I said that. Ken's been my fave since I first heard of WK...
I love this soooo much. Please write more VERY soon, or I will no be responsible for driving my friends nuts w/ constant babbling about this fic. Nor will I be responsible for making everyone at UTARPA (U of T anime club) insane by preaching how Yohji and Aya belong together, next friday. I NEED more of this fic.
*cough cough* Until the next chapter's posted, I'll be contently sitting here drooling.
PEACE OUT =) |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2002 13:25 CDT
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Excellent story. It's painful yet beautiful seeing Yohji and Aya coming together in this. I'm glad Yohji managed to kick some ass and rescue Aya and it's good that Aya admits he'd rather not be alone and Yohji can help him with that.
Hope to read more soon. Good luck with your move. |
Reviewed By: Anria Lalumin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2002 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic just keeps getting better and better. You had me hooked right from the start.
What I really like about this one is that you don't seem to have decided to break Aya beyond repair just so you can mould him back into an original character in the guise of one from the series (which far too many authors do, in my opinion >. |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2002 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What are you thinking of threatening me with that *loose end* thing? Wait a minute, I look it up in a dictionary.
Well, I haven’t found a clear definition, but what I’ve found frightens me. I really hope you’re not speaking of an open end and not telling me if Aya’s ever going to be fine or not? And are those damned bastard going to get the bill for what they did? Hell, Youji should have taken at least Omi with him when he killed that Mr Stevenson to get the customer-list thus he can kill all of them.
Puh, I really have to pull myself together after this chapter. I was so afraid of something bad happening to Aya again, you know how to tense my poor weak nerves.
NO, that isn’t a cliffhanger. It is a real nice ending to this chapter. Aya is save in Youji’s arms, they are sleeping save and sound. Omi and Ken are .. erm…. erm …… erm…….bunnies and more than happy with this arrangement. Hell, I didn’t hear them complain about that, so what? They are in love, they are young, the nights are cold and they are keeping each other warm that way. Lol
Keep writing.
You know what I would like to read? No? I tell you. Youji showing Aya what making love really is like and maybe helping him that way to cope with the past. Sigh. |
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