| "I Hate Him" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: silxcite07 On: December 28, 2007 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my third time reading this and i swear each time it keeps getting better and better. keep up with the good work ;)
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Reviewed By: snapy pants [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 02:49 CST
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d'aawwwww, that was ADORABLE! COMPLETELY PRECIOUS!!!
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Title: Oceanborn
Reviewed By: oceanborn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please finish 'Come as you are' and then I can die a happy fangirl. I loved this. So funny and angsty. You are the bomb. PLease keep writing!!! ;)
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Kiba-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished, and I absolutely love it! The ending scene is great, and the overall plot is so enjoyable! I really like how you added Aya-chan and Sebastian in there. You should totally do a sequal! (You should also do more Saiyuki... nag nag nag)
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Reviewed By: Kiba-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this so much! I'm only on chapter 9, but I've been tearing through it. I never really liked Wiess all that much, mostly because it lacked much of a plot and left me incredibly dissatisfied, but I *LOVE* this fiction! Your writing style is so engaging, the way to pop in unexpected moments of humor. It's not predictable at all, like I've come to expect from alot of fics. Anyway, I just had to let you know how much I'm loving this, as I keep plowing forward with my eyes glued to the screen. XD Keep writing, by all means!
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Title: Ur Skills are Superb
Reviewed By: Demoness_Smut [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 02:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can honestly say I've read this story over 10 times. But it never dulls. It's so good. A sequel would be really nice to read.
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Title: Aewsome
Reviewed By: Angry Blood Sister [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was such an amazing story. I absolutely loved it! =D You are a truly great author and I encourage you to keep writing.
This was such a unique and touching plot-line that I cried a few times. hehe. I loved it.
~Tabitha, The Mad Hatter |
Reviewed By: maladyrancor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know my review comes rather late, but I just had to express my amazement and appreciation for your story! ^_^ There are so many reasons why this story is distinctive, and I will elucidate a few!
1. The character interactions are perfect - you portray each assassin the ideal way, making them genuine, detailed, and human in ways that other fanfic writers have negelected.
2. Plot development - You take time to absorb the details and to find a cohesive underlying current that drives all the action! It's amazing!
3. Unique - Although there are many Yohji / Aya pairings, the way that you started and ended the story is truly different. (Btw, Ken / Omi is my favorite pairing) You make it so that the relationship is absolutely real - absolutely flawed.
Once again, I thank you for such an enjoyable story! (It took a while to finish), and I hope that you continue writing Weiss Kreuz fanfiction. I know there will be a lot of people waiting for you to continue!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: liras [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 06:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's the most amazing great wonderful fanfic i have ever read! it's absolutley ...awesome! please write a sequel soon!! plis plis plis
^^
i beg you!!
i dont think i will ever have enough words to thank you for writing this fic..thanks really ..
i only wanted you to know that you are one of my best favorourite writers..
i'm looking forward in reading the next right?
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Reviewed By: beki On: June 13, 2003 16:35 CDT
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This is the best fanfic I've ever read! I've been reading it for nearly this whole week and I just finished it. I was so disappointed that it ended. I want more!!! I really, really hope there's going to be a sequel. |
Reviewed By: Sardius [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 03:05 CDT
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You finished it! Wonderful! Am so happy you finished this fic. I had to practically run to catch up with you. :) The "Ken kissing Aya" scene was funny, I mean, I wouldn't blame Kenken, Aya is pretty hot you know. *winks* It was cute how Yohji told Ken to 'back off' and poor Omi thinking he had lost his BF. ^^;
There were times when I did wanted to smack Aya chan and especially Sebastian!!! But it added to the story so much better, and it was interesting to see that in the end, Aya seems to love Yohji more than Aya chan. That does show something doesn't it?
Had being waiting FOREVER for the little Yohji/Aya moments! Am I glad you concluded that towards the end of the fic. It was bitter sweet, and glad the boys are finally happy together.
Sad that great stories always end, but do I hear a sequel?? *smiles* I sure hope we can read more of your wonderful stuff in the future.
*bows down to you*
Sardius |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 03:12 CDT
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Yay! Not only did you update, you finished it! The bike race with Ken reminded me of watching an action movie (complete with the 'no -way- is that possible, but it sure does sound/look cool' feeling). So if that was what you were going for, congrats. ^^;
I think the story would benefit from an epilogue if you don't decide to do a sequel. Possible issues to cover: the future of Aya-chan and the bastard boyfriend, the Weiss boys' meeting with the cops, Aya-chan's feelings about the picture and Yohji after a bit of distance and reflection, more KenxOmi, and (of course) more YohjixAya... I'm sure their first official date is an interesting story. (Or perhaps with a trick of irony, the first is unremarkable in its pleasantness and it's the second one that goes to hell.)
The beginning of the fic seemed to focus on emotions and psychology... and for me at least, in the later chapters, some of the depth was sacrificed for comedy (Sebastian's stupidity & the police officers). But, that's not a bad thing. Laughing's a good thing. ^_^ It's just my observation.
I kept waiting for a final, private YohjixAya scene, which I got. And happily, it was everything it should be and wrapped up that portion of their relationship nicely. ^_^
Excellent fic. Thank you for putting so much time and effort into it! I especially loved your characterization of Yohji. *glomps protective Yohji-kun* ^_^ I look forward to reading more from you in the future! |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 19:26 CDT
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Wow. What a sweet ending. I was probably even happier than Yoji and crew once Aya-chan and Sebastian left. I kept wanting to smack Aya-chan when she kept startling Ran. You would think she would remember he had been traumatized and go slowly, but she was so spoiled it never seemed to occur to her, or she simply refused he had been victimized.
The race ... I guess they were lucky no one was killed ... although if Sebastian ... nah, that would have kept him in the country longer.
Ken 'going for it' with the kiss. That was pretty funny especially everyone's reactions to it.
I would love a sequel. :) I have no ideas, but I hope one comes to you since this is your universe, and we the reader are merely visitors to it.
Congrats on finishing this very long, but very rewarding fic. :) |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to drop You another line and THANK YOU for writing this one. I don't know what to say, really, except that I loved it. It does a real and convincing take on rape victims, on the aftermath and how he is trying to heal again. I can't find the words for this, I'm sorry, but I just wanted to let You know that You're one of my fave writers here at MM with this one.
Again, Thank You. *bows deeply*
~MiniMorr |
Reviewed By: Garner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a sweet ending *does a happy dance around room* Wonderful fic! Awesome job! |
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