| "Bittersweet reunion" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just found this little piece and I would like to say it is a terrific read, and a very emotional one too. I have just discovered DBZ, and this was a great extension to the characters I am getting to know.
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Reviewed By: venus legacy On: December 04, 2004 19:07 EST
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Ths was brilliant i can actually picture this scene happening in the actual anime. The way you orchestrated the twist was amazing i had no idea they were visiting their graves, it brought a sense of nostalgia as i recapped the cheerful comments goku made about the past adventures.
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Reviewed By: Jiggle [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 20:47 EST
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I think you captured the moment really well, you didn't overly describe things or make it any longer than it needed to be, and the outcome was very good because of it. I thought it was a picnic or some sort of gathering, and when they kneeled I thought they were going to propose, so your intentional vague style of writing up until the twist worked really well. Anyway, I thought this was a very well written piece of work and I hope you continue to write more stories.
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Reviewed By: Dark Rain On: October 04, 2004 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear, this is the first time any one page, no half page, story has ever brought me this close to tears for it's characters! Great job for your fist fic! Do another one! Please!
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Reviewed By: obsidian_fox On: October 01, 2004 21:33 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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That was an emotional read, a nice look at how immortality truly affects those afflicted with it. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Lost_eternity On: September 14, 2004 13:19 EDT
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I don't want to say much, just that it was so beautiful it hurt... Somehow I feel more words would disturb their silent mouring and the rest of their loved ones... Silly, isn't it?
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Reviewed By: hcbenitez [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 20:35 EDT
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wow...
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 13:18 EDT
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Sometimes, after I read a really confusing fic, my head hurts. After I read this, I can only say: my heart hurts. This was beautifully written, not to mention unbelievably engulfing for a one-shot. When I realized what it was about, I swear I almost cried. I think Akira Toriyama would be proud. Thank you so much.
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Reviewed By: X-san92691 On: August 06, 2004 11:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is something that I can't put in words, it's just too good. It was sad, but wonderful all at the same time. I have no idea WHY I read this fic at least 5 times over! It's just so rare to find sensible pieces of literature like this.
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Reviewed By: Orchideater On: July 19, 2004 02:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh! Absolutely beautiful-- short, succinct, and so powerful. Superior bodies and genes are not always a blessing. The way it started out I thought Goku was going to a barbeque with all of his friends! It made me cry, seriously, it really did! Wonderful job for your first fic.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 22:14 EDT
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Amazing, Beautiful, Heartwrenching. This fic hits every emotional chord. Your characters are dead on and you really should write more. So very few one-shots really capture emotion this well. It's a very visual piece. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Bri-chan
Reviewed By: hiei6272 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fabulous fic. The first time i ever read this, i cried a single tear. It is written beautifully and is by far original. If i could give this any higher of a rating, i would give it a 100 in a heartbeat. You're a fantasic writer, and continue doing so ^_^ Many years in faithful writing for you, Bri-chan
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Title: star-brella
Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 13:04 EDT
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WOW, is all i can say about this fic! This is a true master piece, THIS IS perfection at it's best. I love how realistic it is. A very well written one-shot!!!!! Not like other peoples >:cough *mine* cough::< Very original and awsome idea behind it. Good work!!^_^
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Reviewed By: Catinhat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! that was so sad. but i have a question. What about Pan, goten, bra, marron, and trunk's children. at least one of them should have had kids that vegeta and goku have contact with, right?
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: shesshomaruluver1723 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 14:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, that was sooooo good! wahhhhhhhhhh, it made me cry. * sniff* how sad. U r an amazing writer, I hope to see more from you in the future!
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