| "Bittersweet reunion" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pareathe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 13:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm finally starting to catch up on some reading...about damned time, I know. Man, I'm ashamed it took me so long to read this. It's absolutely beautiful though...got me a bit misty once or twice, truth be told. The characterization was great (which, from me, is saying something, cause I'm ashamed to admit I'm mega-anal about stuff like that), the descriptions and visualations were beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time... *sighs* It has a bit of it all. I still refuse to believe you hadn't written anything before this. I mean...you should see MY first fanfic attempt. It was ATROCIOUS!
This, on the other hand, was wonderful. So, do me a favor, k? Take off that ridiculous "Don't laugh at me thing" at the top, 'cause you don't need it. Exchange it for a Kleenex warning, and keep up the excellent work. ^_~
Pareathe |
Reviewed By: Lance On: February 26, 2003 11:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Its deep with so much emotion written in it. I could feel the pain of Goky, Vegeta and 18. I hope you keep with writting. You got far too much talent to waste. |
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed On: February 22, 2003 21:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I, like the others who have reviewed this, am sitting here with tears running down my face as I review. That was so well written...and so sad. I never saw it coming, and WHAM! it hits you... hard. It was short, to the point, and so emotional. It is truly a great fic! |
Reviewed By: Jzara On: February 19, 2003 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! nooooooooooo You made me cry!!!!! Now my hubby is laughing at me! This was so awesome... Imma see if I can force him to read...I bet he cry too. I'm so overwhelmed by the beautiful way you wrote that....darn...still crying.... |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 18:42 EST
Comment/Review:
It cut off the second half of my review!! Arrrrgh!!
AS I WAS SAYING!! This fic is touching and heart breaking. Vegeta's actions at Bulma's grave just about ripped my heart out! Just that one word, "Woman" conveyed so much more emotion than any long soliloquy could have.
You have awakened a great talent in yourself, Bardockgurl. I look forward to reading everything you have yet to write!! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 18:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the third time I've read this, and you've brought me to tears every time. My two year old is traumatized by Mommy crying at the computer!! >. |
Reviewed By: pat On: February 19, 2003 17:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to rate it like this i,m the authors sister and she will kill me if i dont. but i must say barb it is excellent even if i dont understand what you are talking about
your favourite sister pat xxxxxx |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: February 19, 2003 11:38 EST
Comment/Review:
"Vegeta placed a hand on Bulmas headstone and breathed one, solitary word… “Woman”. Although barely audible, there was a wealth of pain and heartache in those two syllables."--BR
Beautiful and very moving. Every time I read "Bittersweet Reunion" I cry, I can feel his heartache when he said "Woman". Thank you for posting it.
Go see "Grieve" by Ember(reviewer 6). Ember wrote "This pic(Grieve) was inspired by a wonderful first-time fic(Bittersweet Reunion) by Bardockgurl..." |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 04:44 EST
Comment/Review:
You know I love this story. It has been such an inspiration and I'm so happy you've finally decided to post it. Now everyone can enjoy it in all its tear-jerking glory! ^-^
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 22:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read in my life. I'm so glad you finally decided to post it. This fic was an inspiration to me. You have a true gift and I'm glad you have finally decided to share it with all of us. |
Reviewed By: AMCM74 On: February 18, 2003 22:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say! You are the most emotional person on earth! YOU HAVE SUCH A LOVLY WONDERFUL ROMANTIC WRITTING STYLE AND YOU REFUSED TO POST!!!! Well now that you are finally realizing this write more! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Space Monkey Ku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 21:41 EST
Comment/Review:
I know I've told you this so many times before, but I love this fic! I still want to cry everytime I read it! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 13:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was good and very sad, when it comes to writing you are very good at it |
Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 13:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, this is so sad. I'm actually crying as I write this review. The fic stays true to its title though. Great job |
Reviewed By: Cyntigre [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 19:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so incredible. Wow. I have to say I was curious as to how it was going to turn out when I first started reading it, because it was so short. But OMG! It is such a unique talent for someone to put in so much emotion into so few words. I'm really impressed. I think my favorite part was when 18 came into the story. Wonderful job!!!! |
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