| "Bittersweet reunion" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Title: Heartbreaking
Reviewed By: Fozzy On: January 25, 2013 23:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ouch. I can't say I enjoyed reading that but I can say that it was very well written and definitely provoked emotion... Now I'm off to search the web for something that will give me sweeter dreams.... |
Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 10:18 EST
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Oh, that´s so sad, so depressive... and yet, so real. You almost made me cry. Really, I´m not being sarcastic. Haven´t read a good fic drama like this in ages, so deeply true.
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Reviewed By: j. On: January 03, 2009 09:46 EST
Comment/Review:
so sweet.
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Reviewed By: shayfangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 21:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful and heart wrenching all in one. I love DB and you really did an amazing job at portraying Goku's and Vegeta's feelings despite how carefree or indifferent they come off in the anime, well except when fighting lol. Really wonderful, hope you keep on writing.
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Title: *sniffles*
Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 07:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was your first? Well, I suppose it's always best to start strong, isn't it? This story's so beautifully written and as bittersweet as the title promises. I want to give them all a big, consoling hug but, er, at least two of them might look a little askance at that.
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Reviewed By: Temptingtemptation/tempest On: January 29, 2006 06:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WELL THAT WAS JUST SAD. GREAT, NOW I HAVE TO GO TO BED WITH THAT IN MY MIND. YOU MADE ME WEEPY, SO GOOD JOB!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 09:46 EST
Comment/Review:
Why would anyone laugh at this, in fact it touched me. I haven't been to the graves of my loved ones. I guess i'd rather remember them when they were alive. Barb you did a wonderful job writing this one-shot.
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Reviewed By: Blue-haired Beauty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 14:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* I had no idea where this one was going to go when it was a little recommended read. What a twist! Thanks a LOT, I had just applied my eyeliner. >:0\ I loved it very much. Excellent! Wonderful! Memorable!
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Title: omg!
Reviewed By: wowatahotgurl On: December 23, 2005 17:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a b-utiful fic! i can't believe it was your first!! you go babe. I loved the style of writing and how mysterious it was. I saw a close resemblence to yours and mine. tell me what you think. I have a story up and you tell me if its as good at yours! lol. once again, good job! and keep writing!
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Title: AWWW
Reviewed By: Psycho_SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 06:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww so sweet but so sad *pokes* i like your writing GOOD JOB!
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Reviewed By: Siphelia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing's so beautiful, so descriptive. And the mere concept of this fic made my heart ache; I almost needed a tissue. Very original; I can't recall ever having come across one like this before."Merry Christmas, Chi..." ::sniffles:: So SAAAD! Bravo; Encore.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: black mage raven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god. this was ur first. ive been writing for years. this is outstanding. yet sad. please continue writing more
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Reviewed By: Nekoni (logged out) On: August 14, 2005 03:57 EDT
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T_T man that almost made me cry... This was your first? *sniffle* It's all original and heartbreaking and well-written *sniff* Poor long-livin' people... Though I do gotta' say they should move on, 'cuz of where Z-senshi go when they die *cheers up*
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Reviewed By: free-sprit - it takes like two seconds to log in, and I'm way to lazy to do that. On: August 04, 2005 13:20 EDT
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omg. this is toooo sad. way to sad. poor Vegeta. He can't live without Bulma or the brats. How do he get by? poor vegeta... I'm pathetic. hehe... Ich need a live.
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Title: **Sniff Sniff**
Reviewed By: Suzanne On: August 04, 2005 09:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep....i cried a little. this was so sweet........
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